Miles Long

Despite the inability to see the pictures, excellent chapter, thanks.

Lump seems to have a lot of nerve and not a lick of sense. As shrewd as Helen I find hard to believe that contractually he'd wouldn't have to keep his mouth shut or face huge lawsuits. Labels are very protective of their assets. Anyhoo, thanks for the good work.

Clever deception on the title. The dark understory is really starting to get addictive. Thanks.

The juxtaposition of Brandon, the band and this pending bomb attack is unsettling in a great way, nice job, thanks.

I know some people are dishonest but it always pisses me off. Great job creating a realistic chapter full of delicious tension. Thanks.

Hilarious chapter, great work, thanks.

Sweet in a straining believability kind of way. I can't wait to bee Brandon's face either . Thanks for the work.

Nice work quickly creating a very empathetic character that peaks the interest. Thanks for the work.

My curiosity is definitely peaked. I look forward to finding what's what, thanks.

Captivating characters, compelling storyline, electric erotic action, this story hits the mark on all of the above. Great work all around, thank you.

Your work as well as the work of your team is very much appreciated. This is a challenging topic and while I am sad by those lost, I understand and more importantly respect your choices as master of this universe. Thank you Mark and team (maybe I can catch up on some of my delinquent reviews while you gear up for the next installment ). Congratulations on a job well done.

Poignant, moving, lovely, touching are just words that try to explain the greatness of this final chapter. I knew it was coming but that doesn't make it any easier to say goodbye to what has been a truly remarkable offering to the CAP tale. Thanks Mark Arbour.

Moving ending to a sizzling sweet story, thanks.

Thanks for the continued good work.

Just when I think I should seek other literary springs, CAP is there like a siren to remind me to stay put . Interesting chapter, although I do find it impossible to believe that a Schluter plane wouldn't be stocked to the cock pit with spare condoms . Surprising development with Elizabeth...she is a pretty dynamic character who makes such a great villain that her redemption would likely surpass that of Wade's father. Another fine chapter in the bank and once again leaving me craving so much more. Thank you Mark Arbour.

Even knowing how the story goes from previous reads doesn't change the excitement of the fight or the hilarity of Shell's and Curtis' reaction. Really fine work, thanks.

Yay more CAP, thank you Mark. I hope this chapter is the beginning of a reconciliation between brothers. The move west sound like good news. No surprise that Frank and Isidore wouldn't want to stay in Concord. It can be the least of the east bay at times. Excellent work as always, thanks again.

Noooooo! Don't stop now . Great chapter, thanks.

It is an awesome birthday surprise to find a CAP chapter; despite the gut ripping interchange between Wade and Matt. While I don't believe Wade is no longer in love with Matt I do believe that Wade is done with Matt. I also think that Matt has quite a few more come to Jesus moments ahead of him that he must take heed to if he is even going to think about making amends and winning Wade back. Thanks a bundle for the sweet treat.

Great days are made better with some CAP love. Excellent chapter, hooray for Frank for telling Wally to shut his cake hole. I loved the interchange with JJ; he just has so much to offer. Thanks to Mark and team for all the dedicated work, it is truly appreciated.

I love all the extra detail in this version. Great work, thanks.

Beautiful interchange between Stan, Shell and Parker; it adds a nice depth to their characters. I love Shell's no mate, no pack attitude; she's a force to be reckoned with. Thanks for another wonderful chapter.

Yippee a new chapter and time to read and post a timely review. Heart breaking news about Aaron (I am a big The Box fan), but I appreciate his story line being tied off. I think blaming Aaron for his father's destructive and abusive behavior is a load of crap. I think the elder Hayes owns his sins; furthermore I question his stability to plummet so far from grace over Aaron's demise. Not unlike Matt, I think spiraling out of control is how he chose to deal with his loss and that's not Aaron's fault and frankly I venture to suggest the Elder Hayes would have probably ended up the same if Aaron didn't fake his death and announced to the family he was gay. I don't mean to sound so black and white because I know the world is actually a million variances of grey, but I find it hypocritical of Frank to expect Will and Wade to forgive Matt, when he is so unwilling to consider forgiving his own brother. That aside, thank you for another compelling chapter.

Another awesome chapter in the bank, thanks. I find myself irritated with the Matt situation, especially since the only perspective we are getting right now is from the people he is slighting. I'm not sure I entirely buy the team guy theory suggested in another review, but I wouldn't mind reading things from Matt's POV (I still think he's being a prat but I'm not willing to write him off). Someone like Wade would be good for Brad, but I'm not sure that someone should be Wade, I think they are in two very different places in life, but once Wade finishes school and starts his career they would make an über couple, maybe not the most interesting, but powerful as all hell. Thanks again.

Parker should grow the goatee; it'll be cute. Looking forward to more, thanks.