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Miles Long

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  1. Miles Long

    Chapter 21

    Go Jared! I loved the little boy in the store. Great work thanks.
  2. Miles Long

    Chapter 20

    Thrilling depiction of the game. This story just keeps getting better and better, thanks.
  3. Miles Long

    Chapter 19

    I hope Charlene has more discretion than Jennifer. Compelling chapter, thanks.
  4. Miles Long

    Chapter 18

    Nice work capturing the essence of a small town. Thanks.
  5. Miles Long

    Chapter 17

    People like Todd are just so disappointing. Thanks for yet another fine chapter.
  6. Miles Long

    Chapter 16

    Swoon! Thanks.
  7. Miles Long

    Chapter 15

    These guys are so dear, thanks for the chapter.
  8. Miles Long

    Chapter 14

    Sweet sentiment about being in love is the salient aspect of Carter's conundrum. Thanks.
  9. Miles Long

    Chapter 13

    That feeling where you are just so wrapped up in another person that you forget your surroundings is captured expertly. Thanks.
  10. Miles Long

    Chapter 12

    Good for Andrew stepping up to put a stop to a horribly inappropriate classroom discussion. Thanks for the fine work.
  11. Miles Long

    Chapter 11

    Loved the chapter and appreciated the lighthearted ending, thanks.
  12. Miles Long

    Chapter 10

    Andrew has a very strong sense of himself...I feel like he and Will are on the edge of something really big. Thanks.
  13. Miles Long

    Chapter 9

    Honestly as horrible as it is to have been outed and thrown out, it almost seems like Will might be better off away from such a depressing and oppressive environment. Good story, thanks.
  14. Miles Long

    Chapter 8

    Please consider the lump in my throat a compliment to your writing skill.
  15. Miles Long

    Chapter 7

    There's a special place in hell for people like Jennifer and Will's "family". Thanks for the chapter.
  16. Miles Long

    Chapter 12

    Mysterious wolves lurking about...hmm. Good chapter, thanks for the work.
  17. Miles Long

    Chapter 6

    Well I guess we'll see just how snakey Jennifer is. Good work, thanks.
  18. Miles Long

    Chapter 5

    Not to speak ill of soon to be mothers but Jennifer seems kinda snakey, like she's decided to hook her giddy up to Will because the guy she tried to snare took off. Interesting story lines, thanks.
  19. Miles Long

    Chapter 4

    What a miserable woman Will's father married, though the Major seems pretty assholey so maybe they're a good match. Nice job, thanks.
  20. Miles Long

    Chapter 3

    What a way to get to know someone, my fingers are crossed. Thanks.
  21. Miles Long

    Chapter 2

    Frightening cliffhanger ending to a well written chapter, thanks.
  22. Even unfinished this story should be carved in stone it's so beautiful, it prequel as well shares the same simple grace. Really stunning work, thank you. Gratitude expressed if this story happened to finally find it's way to complete that would be awesome too .
  23. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    Snow day are mystery benefit for those who grow up in cold weather. Nice start, thanks.
  24. Good news on the outcome of the trial, I hoped it would go that way but so many times they do not. Lovely interchange as Dave supports Nick through that dreaded first performance. Good job, thanks.
  25. Miles Long

    Chapter 20

    Methinks Luc is finding his way. I know this is the last chapter and while I wish there were a million more I am happy for the 20 provided, thanks.
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