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Yet another nice surprise to find on coming here! You sure know how to make my day go better. I'm thinking that Nelson is the one who should be worrying about being taken too far too fast, rather than Eric. When that boy makes up his mind, he's going for what he wants. I'm saddened by Eric's view of Melanie, not having met her, I'm sure his assessment is right--he's no fool to make a snap judgment without reason. Perhaps that feeling is part of what Rob is esitating about? Bring on part III, maestro!

Great addition, Iarwain! I had thought Mirri was the one who needed special attention, but Jarra? I'm wondering if his problem is perhaps a result of living underground or something more serious? Either way, these two are fantastic for each other!

Great as always, Tim. Nelson liking the fact that Eric could fill the role of his protector was great...also loved Jasper picking out his clothes and teasing him about stereotypes! One little thing technically: hoodie has one 'd' and two 'o's...seems the spell checker missed it. Also, just once you left off the 'h' in 'his'. And don't fret about not getting further--you know 'my' date has gone on for three parts now!

The Danish is all you, Tim...I'm just glad I didn't screw it up! I hope Jay's dad welcoming Mikey to the family and saying he could call them mom and dad didn't break any Danish customs?

Oh Gary, I think if I saw all that as I was writing, it would turn out a lot less readable. I can over-think just like Miles--but I have that irreverent side a bit like Jay to temper that, I hope.Here's the weird part for me: I like to write, I like to read...but when it comes to stories, once I get past the initial 'break-in', I only see it in scenes that come into my head...then i have to link them as best I can. My best friend in California knows a lot of visually impaired eople, and he says many of them are like that--getting so much enjoyment out of life through what sight they have--logically you'd think it would be the opposite...but for me, I want to see everything I can, and not take it for granted. I'm just glad people like my stuff, because it makes me happy to make them happy. Gonna skim through Jay's movie date to see if anything jumps out at me.

POV: Mikey “Here we go again!” Jay said as we walked out toward his truck for the second time. Maybe now we’d actually get to his parents’ house. The sun was getting lower as the afternoon gave way to early evening, though sunset was still two hours away on this late-April day. My change of clothes, neatly folded, was behind the seat in a paper bag, though I still had no clue why I’d need them. With a cough and a roar, the truck came to life, and my hand automatically went to turn on

"...." Wow, that's a lot to live up to, I hope you will continue to like the boys...I've said Miles is a lot like me then--but only I really know how much has been transferred to the fictional version. I am glad you find kinship with him, and can enjoy his great luck in finding Jay.

Damn, seeing those two little words at the end threw me for a loop! I wasn't expecting the story to end just yet...maybe just one little Epilogue chapter set a couple years ahead? Please.... What am I gonna read now?!

I fully agree with the dinner party discussions--I was not at all surprised that Zach knew what JJ was feeling--but I was a bit to realize that Will didn't put 2+2 together until Zach mentioned it. Come on Will, it's time to burn another possession of Brad's--perhaps his plane? I am a bit shocked that Stef' s reaction was just like Brad's...I thought he'd be more in tune with Grand's feelings and at least give them token consideration. The fact that Brad doesn't get it at all comes as no shock at all. I am also still pissed at Alex--you note that he did not explain why it took him all evening to return JJ's call. I hope that dawns on JJ and makes him investigate further, otherwise Alex will think he can get away with sleeping around if he just 'forgets' to mention it. Once again, Alex is reverting to douche-bag mode. Bring on the next round, Mark--you've whetted my appetite, now you have to satisfy it!

Okay, Keith is bugging me...I think there's something he's hiding, and it could involve Devon somehow. Maybe he wants him, and thinks that Jason is getting in the way? Still bugged by Dani--she needs to realize that not everyone is ready to be so public about things. And Devon, I have a strong feeling that he is at the very least bisexual, if not actually using Dani as cover. Can't wait for the next chapter--and I love Scott's family!

I hadn't thought so far as Miles being reborn--but that's just what happened! The journal made several things easier--admitting their feelings, and letting the Kurt issue be presented less awkwardly--I'm sure Miles put his own feelings about it in there, so Jay knows it's not relevant.'Jay' was used because I was at a loss for a name--my real life experience's name started with 'J', so that just struck me. Only later came the quest for a suitable name too embarrassing to use with his friends.

Thanks Tim for such a great present to start my day! I had the over-protective mom but not the joking father--mine was quiet and reserved. I'd have killed Rob if he was my older brother--but not having had one, I'd kill for him to be mine. Not gonna speculate on Rob--but with brothers so close in age, I wouldn't be surprised to see he was curious--and what teen doesn't think about any sort of sex to get his relief? Eric had the perfect rejoinder for him though. I'm gonna miss Rob, but he'll be back, probably nosier than ever!

As Miles wrote: I can't do it alone...and that is so true of this chapter--you gave me the image of Miles sitting in a corner as he writes, and it made the whole section sing. Every correction to my text you suggested, made the words flow better, and though they were just small things, they gave me encouragement that someone thought it was worthwhile. Everything I've read which you reviewed, made me aware of the amount of effort you put into each one...that you consented to be my beta is still amazing to me. It feels like you are 'my' wings.

POV: Mikey When Jay turned on the ignition, he was about to push the starter button when Mikey reached out and held his hand for a moment; Jay turned his head and gave him a soft smile. “Wait a minute, Jay...” He didn’t even have to guess what the problem was as he took Mikey’s hand and kissed it. “It’s okay, Mikey...my parents will like you as much as I do!” Even though now buoyed up by Jay, confidence was still a new concept for him, so it hadn’t yet sunk in further than

Tak for den store grin! Rob is so wonderful--Eric just needs to pay a bit more attention to what his brother is doing--he clearly tried to warn him about what to say to their parents. He can be a great help to Eric on the parental front, even if he does sometimes say too much. Can't wait for the next one!

Excellent job, Mark--but you stopped there?! JJ has every right to be upset, and Alex is far too cavalier with his explanation of not finding time...I'm pretty sure that JJ doesn't mean much to him now...even without the distraction of Mary Ellen. And what's up with Elizabeth? She's up to something (maybe getting ME to sleep with Alex was planned?) She is just devious enough to do that, and she knew he was living with Wade, so the opportunity had to come up sometime. I'd like to see JJ talk to Will before he even considers talking to Alex....The pills won't affect his next performance, but the Alex incident might very well do so. As we saw, he did well without him, and he will find anger is probably a good motivator as well. Write fast, I want to see the next bit!

Wow, a punch to the gut, hope, and love all in so few words! Love it valkyrie.

Wonderful, Iarwain! I've been anxious to read this story since you first otld me about it--and I haven't been disappointed. More characters I can bond with in a world which already seems real. I know this is set prior to Attunga, and am waitingto see if any of the elders there might be appearing as children here. However things develop, I'm already on-board and involved! Mirri and Jarra are obviously going to be great complements to each other, and I can't wait to see them grow closer as time goes on. Dolphins would be nice again, but in this time they won't be sentient enough for major interaction, drat.

Awesome as usual, Sasha...but also, no matter how long the chapter is, I feel it is too short. I sympathise with Kieran about it taking so long for the house...he actually does know that it takes time, no matter how many people do it, things in construction don't happen all at once...he just wants it done so he and Sparrow can be together, free, in their own space; who wouldn't give anything for that? It's impatience this time, not his old arrogance. Becca can go screw herself--I do not think she is going to last long, and Shastan better start to see the real bitch she is and not the love-sick dream he still fosters of her. Kieran has done all he could and then some, and I hope Robin realizes that she is a poor substitute for Kieran. Bring on the next bit, please!

As soon as you mentioned Jean's barn I recalled the dream Oscar had...but how can it be? Unless Jean and Oscar somehow share a father? It's clear tha tthe 'doctor' was no such thing, but rather a demon of some sort, given that the 'shopkeepers' on Harmony Lane are guardians of man. Eager to see where you are going with this!

Great chapter, meta. Still rooting for Jared and Darwin to get their rescue plan working...and for Carl to get his ass torn apart.

Great chapter again, Mark! Alex is once again slipping down the scales in my book--he seems to be distancing himself from JJ, and not having the tact to tell him outright. I can see that going to Goodwell is less arduous, but it's the principle of the thing--if his work won't allow one, then the other should not happen either. I feel no sympathy for Hammer, and I too wonder if he'll make the connection to Wade, or continue being stupid--I'm wagering on the latter. If JJ gets screwed by Alex, then I say, let Brad or Will deal with him...sendd his elitist ass to Siberia!

I'm sure this isn't the end to Becca, sorry to say. I don't see her changing at alll, probably will be worse, but more subtle about her dislike for Kieran...she's manipulative and self-serving, and Shas deserves someone so much better. I don't see them working out in the end, and it will be entirely her fault. The scene with Robin and Kieran on the beach was great--and I cuold just see them living in their house forever...and having the kids over as often as possible. Anxious for the next bit, but hoping Becca doesn't come back yet.

Gotta say, Sasha--you don't ever disappoint! I love these two boys and their connection to each other. Why do I not sense happy times ahead for Shastan and Becca? I think she is using him just for his money, and I doubt very much that she wants to have children in her way. On to the next chapter!

A wonderful, long-awaited chapter, Don! Within the first few sentences I was caught up, both with and in the story. I was so afraid that yo'd given up on the story. It is so nice to see Kevin and Cam talking about the wedding plans, and I loved the debate ovre who got William. My big concern is with Mark--I can see exactly why he feels as he does, and ache for a solution that will reassure him...but that will need to come from his parents and William. I can't see how Ian and Mary are missing the impact things are having on Mark...it just doesn't seem to fit their dynamic. Please know that we missed your work and I at least, worry that you have lost the spark which makes this story so great when we don't hear from you. Be well, and know that we look forward to a new chapter--we love the guys, and you!