Fae Briona
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Beautiful. Sad, but beautiful.
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I get Silis's fear of his sister finding out - it's the same reason he blamed Ian for not geting in touch, without considering that he might have tried but his parents blocked any attempt. I'm not sure how much Emma could connect either if she had to sneak out on her husband to see the band.
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Enjoying the story so far. Great character development.
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Short but great.
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I think Baradin has the right idea -- you've already talked about how powerfully Mirri's songs affect those who hear them.
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Loving that we get to see Akama as a young boy. Also gives us some idea of the time-frame between the two stories.
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Loving it so far.
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The actions of the "Directed Comunities" reminds me of a rather deperssing solution to the Fermi Paradox: there are no inter-stellar civilizations, because we all destroy oursevels before we reach that point.
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Loving this story.
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It would make for a much shorter story, and might be considered a bit too cold blooded and ruthless for sum, but...... If you know exactly when & where Ezer's ship is appearing, why not just jump back an hour or so before hand, and blow it to bits the moment it appears?
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I hope this isn't the end.
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@LitLover -- I have a feeling Dillon already knows. That would be the answer to Lor's confusion over whey he protected his stomach and not other parts of his body.
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Elethiel (A Fairy Tale)
Fae Briona commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Elethiel (A Fairy Tale)
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For those not familiar with the origin of "faggot" in referring to gay men, it dates back to the Inquisition and the burning of 'witches' and others. The original meaning of "faggot' is a small piece of wood used to get a fire going after lighting the tinder, but before tossing on full logs. When 'witches' were burned at the stake, gay men were often bound and put -- alive -- inside the pile of wood used for the pyre.
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Chapter 2: Not So Secret, After All
Fae Briona commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 2: Not So Secret, After All
The "the universal signal for stop" isn't all that universal -- as the US military found out a bit late in the Middle East, after fireing upon cars that didn't stop at checkpoints. In certain cultures, hand extended palm outward is a sign of welcome. -
Great start to the story. Good foundation to the world and culture laid out.
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Beautiful and sweet. Perfect lovely ending.
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[Sasha Distan] Born Wolf
Fae Briona replied to Sasha Distan's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Found it! -- Thank you. I'd looked on the Amazon link, wich only had two of the four; Lulu has all four available. -
[Sasha Distan] Born Wolf
Fae Briona replied to Sasha Distan's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
One of the few stories I can honestly say I would buy if available as an ebook. -
Beautiful end to a great story.
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Great chapter. Does a good job, I think, of capturing Boriss' unfamiliarity with lhis human side.
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Great start to a wonderful story. A few minor editorial errors in ther various chapters, but quite a bit fewer that you find in most.
