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Fae Briona

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    Chapter 1

    Fae Briona commented on Myr's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great start to the story. Good foundation to the world and culture laid out.
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    Beautiful and sweet. Perfect lovely ending.
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    Beautiful end to a great story.
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    Bad Genes Suck

    Fae Briona commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Bad Genes Suck

    Great chapter. Does a good job, I think, of capturing Boriss' unfamiliarity with lhis human side.
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    The Visitor

    Fae Briona commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in The Visitor

    Great start to a wonderful story. A few minor editorial errors in ther various chapters, but quite a bit fewer that you find in most.
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