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Chapter 8 - A Very Special Vanlentine's Day
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 8 - A Very Special Vanlentine's Day
Wonderful thing for him to do. -
Chapter 3 - Doing Christmas Our Way
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Doing Christmas Our Way
Love this chapter. -
Chapter 38 - To Memories And New Beginnings
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 38 - To Memories And New Beginnings
Nick is going to be a problem. Good end to the chapter though. -
Chapter 27 - A Trip To Brighton
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 27 - A Trip To Brighton
Loving someone who doesn't love you back as much as you love them can be rough. -
Chapter 24 - A Change Of Pace
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 24 - A Change Of Pace
Sounds like he'll have to correct the view the kids have of the possibility of their being "thrown out" Enjoying the story. -
Chapter 20 - The One Who Slipped Away
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 20 - The One Who Slipped Away
That's going to be a tough one for the boys to deal with. -
Chapter 13 - A Time Of Mixed Emotions
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 - A Time Of Mixed Emotions
Rough chapter. Hope he gets better. -
Chapter 10 - The Trials And Joys Of Youth
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 10 - The Trials And Joys Of Youth
The fun (?) of youth and trying to figure out your sexuality when you're less than completely straight. -
Chapter 34 - Inhumane Treatment
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 34 - Inhumane Treatment
I had an Aunt who, back when I was in Junior High School, was a foster parent. What some of the kids she fostered had been through was horrifying. Most people wouldn't treat their dogs the way some of those kids were abused. -
Chapter 13 -Different Issues
Fae Briona commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 -Different Issues
I'm surprised he hasn't told his older kids about their new "siblings" yet. -
Love the description of wonder at the openness of the plains; and of the sky, moon, and stars that had only been seen in glimpses (reminded of the fable of the blind men and the elephant). Their arguing w. the wizard even after knowing they had lost the argument helps reinforce that these are still young guys, not adults.
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Great story.
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Loved this chapter - and would love a ring that looked like that .
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Genesis: The Truth Part 4 of 4
Fae Briona commented on W_L's story chapter in Genesis: The Truth Part 4 of 4
I liked this, but it felt like the start of a completely different story than the chapters before it. Less of a Prologue, and more like an unconnected parallel tale. -
Points to Peter for pointing something out that could have cost him time w. a friend - and points to Joel for not caring.
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Great story. The "perfect time" will never come -- you have to take the chance, and jump.
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@Dark - quite the off-label use for that; I've had a few different scrips for both depression and anxiety but never something designed for heart arrhythmia. But then my normal blood pressure is on the low end of "normal" so taking something that would drop it even further would be a horrible idea.
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Interesting story so far. But tenormin is used to treat hypertension, not anxiety disorders.
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Enjoying the story so far.
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Hope you continue this story at some point.
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Great start to the story.
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Great and perfect end to the story.
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Noah isn't going to get a stronger "welcome to the family" from John than that.
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Never trust your mother when she says, "Of course, dear."
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Ha! Derek is jealous, and Noah has discovered his spine. Great end to the chapter.
