Fae Briona
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Little puppies and little children -- when they say they need to go, they mean they need to go NOW. Enjoying the first couple of chapters.
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Feel bad for Emmett -- sometimes, "for the best" can really hurt. Zeke gets points for honesty and not giving in to jealousy.
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Yea, that would be a somewhat... um.... awkward conversation to have w. Zeke.
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Love the interaction between Emmett and his brother - sweet, and really conveys the brotherly love between them. I had a friend in college who was asexual, similar to how Huan-Yu sounds. He had issues with people thinking it was just some sort of "hormonal issue" (which it wasn't) or some other issue that should be "fixed."
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Great start to the story.
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I'd have to agree w. César -- he might have "his head screwed on straight" but he's still just 15; and a lot of adults could loose it when faced with the animosity (passive from his mother, active from the step-dad) he's going to face.
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"Awkward" couldn't begin to describe what Sean must have been feeling. Feel bad for Doc too. Knowing something is true, and hoping it isn't, then getting hit in the face with it.
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Started this on crvboy, then found it here. Enjoying the story so far.
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It's All Good--or is it?
Fae Briona commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in It's All Good--or is it?
Looking forward to the next chapter; loving the story. -
I know this is an old story but..... it's short and beautiful.
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Defiantly an interesting start to the story. One wonders what dad does for a living - and why Derek didn't seem that happy about the "I love you" comment.
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Sweet and touching. Great story.
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The Best A.I. Team ever
Fae Briona commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in The Best A.I. Team ever
Loved it. Reminded me of Aziraphale & Crowley from Good Omens. -
Chapter 18 Neighbourly behaviour
Fae Briona commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 18 Neighbourly behaviour
Love the talk of the boys on the bikes and why they were so loud - and says a lot about Ms-Thorn-in-the-Side that she only heard 'noise' where Patrick heard 'upset' Hope the meeting with Fiona goes well. Like his idea to casually drop "husband" and see her reaction. -
I prefer the Annie Lennox version of "The Nearness to You" off her album, "Nostalgia." And that's a definite cliffhanger ending to this chapter....
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Chapter 17 Family Sunday Morning
Fae Briona commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 17 Family Sunday Morning
Great chapter. Will be interesting to hear what Moster has to say about the mad woman next door - though we already had hints she was going to be an issue. As for grandmother...... at times you can love someone, but still need to cut them off and reduce or eliminate contact with them. -
This Isn't About You, Not Really.
Fae Briona commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in This Isn't About You, Not Really.
Can't wait for the 'discussion.' Love the pace of the story. -
Beautiful and touching story.
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Chapter 13 Good and bad family moments
Fae Briona commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 13 Good and bad family moments
Hoping Fiona doesn't turn out to be like the others. -
Chapter 11 Visits and meetings
Fae Briona commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 11 Visits and meetings
Neighbor lady will be a problem. People like that are never happy running only their own lives (though for most of them, you could probably just end that sentence after "happy"). -
Joe's Birthday Surprise--and the "Football" is in Play
Fae Briona commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Joe's Birthday Surprise--and the "Football" is in Play
Loved this chapter. Think you nailed the interaction with the social worker. Any decent one who cared about their job would have done what she did and checked both of them out before the meeting. -
The Half-evil Time of Night
Fae Briona commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in The Half-evil Time of Night
Rough chapter, but a good one. -
Great chapter. That had to be rough to -- well, my first thought was "to have your legs cut out from underneath you like that"
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Loved the chapter - though I think Ben needs to jump and run from his "date"
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Interesting start to the story.
