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  1. Fae Briona
    Great chapter. Will be interesting to hear what Moster has to say about the mad woman next door - though we already had hints she was going to be an issue. As for grandmother...... at times you can love someone, but still need to cut them off and reduce or eliminate contact with them.
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    Can't wait for the 'discussion.' Love the pace of the story.
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    Chapter 1

    Fae Briona commented on Empathy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Beautiful and touching story.
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    Hoping Fiona doesn't turn out to be like the others.
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    Neighbor lady will be a problem. People like that are never happy running only their own lives (though for most of them, you could probably just end that sentence after "happy").
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    Loved this chapter. Think you nailed the interaction with the social worker. Any decent one who cared about their job would have done what she did and checked both of them out before the meeting.
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    Rough chapter, but a good one.
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    Great chapter. That had to be rough to -- well, my first thought was "to have your legs cut out from underneath you like that"
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    Problem Solved?

    Fae Briona commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Problem Solved?

    Loved the chapter - though I think Ben needs to jump and run from his "date"
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    Landing

    Fae Briona commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Landing

    Interesting start to the story.
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    The Cove

    Fae Briona commented on MrM's story chapter in The Cove

    Great start.
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    Prologue

    Fae Briona commented on MrM's story chapter in Prologue

    Barbury Castle circle from 2008 was a beautiful thing, regardless of it's origin. Very complex mathematics encoded in it, as well as being visually pleasing.
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    A Beautiful Mess

    Fae Briona commented on LJH's story chapter in A Beautiful Mess

    Very sad, but touching. The shell of the body can be kept alive for quite some time, but one the brain is gone... that which makes a person a person is also gone.
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    Epilogue

    Fae Briona commented on Krista's story chapter in Epilogue

    Loved the story. Hope to see another one about them sometime.
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    Chapter 10

    Fae Briona commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 10

    That "stunt" by his mother would make me more likely to tell both parents where they could put their little power struggle, not less likely.
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    Chapter 4

    Fae Briona commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 4

    A bit pushy - but the only one in the story so far (apart from the nurse) who has paid any attention to anything he's said. Ending was sweet, and romantic.
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    "Showboating" after receiving your diploma has, in some cases, led to the person not receiving their diploma.
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    Rule #1 of emergencies: Don't panic! You can freak out later once you're out of danger. However, if you keep your head about you when all those around you are loosing theirs - perhaps you don't understand the situation.
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    Part towards the end of the chapter about Andrew's concern over Cody - and fear's that he would misunderstand why he drew the portrait - brought tears to my eyes.
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    When you mentioned the alarms going off, my first thought was that their own house was on fire - not one in the neighborhood.
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    I grew up on a farm - farm chores aren't for the weak or lazy.
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    Chapter 1

    Fae Briona commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Good start to a new Space Pioneer chapter.
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    @ Bill W - My friend who made that statement had the opposite view in mind, and I was actually thinking of the bully. A bit (ok, more than 'a bit') cynical, but his sentiment was that if they served no other constructive purpose in this life, people like the bully served to show others what can happen to you when you follow the wrong path.
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    Reminds me of a comment I've heard made: Everyone has a purpose in life. For some people, this is to serve as an example to others.
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