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  1. Petey

    Cornered

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Cornered

    “The bars were calibrated for a starving prisoner.” These words expose the cruelty and callousness of the Vespers. Instead of death they should suffer the same fate !
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    The Name

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Name

    Words woven together so masterfully and beautifully is why you are one of my favorite authors ❤️
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    The Visit

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Visit

    No , then the story will be finished!
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    Playing the Part

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Playing the Part

    So Eli wishes to be the executioner! Something I have been wondering. Did establishing the binding require magic? If Adrien’s grandfather possess this magic is the residual passed on through generations?
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    Closer

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Closer

    Soon can’t be soon enough!
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    Closer

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Closer

    What is the physical limit of the binding spell? Did I wrongly assume it kept him in the cell? What stops him now from leaving the university?
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    The Archive

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Archive

    We know who must die. Who is the executioner? Eli is much more stoic and determined than I would be!
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    The Return

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Return

    The Vespers are noticing the subtle change in Eli, when will they connect the dots?
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    Freely Given

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Freely Given

    Will they not detect the subtle difference in Lucien as well and they then connect the two?
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    The Emptying

    Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The Emptying

    I was so pleased to see Eli again, I had missed him! I am a BIG fan of your writing and I’m sorry someone gave a bad review. It must feel as if someone criticized your child. Hope you feel better soon. So we’re about to meet what’s under the chapel floor. Secrets are going to be revealed and that isn’t always a good thing.
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    If it wasn’t for Vera’s intervention I think the out come would have been doubtful.
  12. Petey
    The family negotiated to retain the same controls in exchange for Julian’s life. They all retain the same benefits with a few modifications. Their view of Julian remains the same, he’s still not a person to them. Baby steps but far from where they need to be. With Vera by his side at least Ben has a fighting chance, now the ball is in the companies court.
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    It’s very creepy to know that someone is going to watch this act of love and reduce it to numbers and decide if it is a marketable commodity.
  14. Petey
    Unfortunately that would involve losing his nieces as well. Unless he sues for custody lol
  15. Petey
    When your family isn’t really your family but a bunch of people who only use you for their own personal gain. Rachel needs day care, Mason needs an ATM and Diane needs to coordinate the details to ensure the entire system keeps working. Ben should make very clear to them all that if they don’t retract their complaints, what they fear will actually come true. Hopefully the formidable Vera (she was acknowledged to be influential in the decision to enrol Ben) and the innocent nieces will be able to help sway the verdict.
  16. Petey
    Wishing you well with Conner
  17. Petey
    We know Julian is becoming more human because he also makes mistake like not finding the shirt on the floor. A robot would have done an inventory and immediately catalogued the missing item. Happy that Tessa is on their side and that Julian prevented a meeting with Rachel and Tessa
  18. Petey
    If only adults would retain the innocent wisdom of children.
  19. Petey
    You have today, tomorrow is not guaranteed. They are treading on fragile ground, let’s hope the stars align so they get to survive. Tessa must be called to get ahead of the situation
  20. Petey
    If he has a programmed ‘unit’, at least he should never suffer from ED!
  21. Petey
    It probably will come into play at some time and Ben is definitely expecting it because he’s keeping Tessa’s card near at hand.
  22. Petey
    With a wonderful, loving person like Vera, you have to wonder what happened for her family to have turned out to be so nasty.
  23. Petey
    I don’t know how to feel. Disgust with Ben’s family for using and manipulating him so callously, sympathy for Ben who knows it but is too weak to do anything about it or hopeful for the budding relationship between Ben and Julian. While grief is a real thing and has no timeline I think that his Mom is exploiting this to manipulate Ben. The family should all be in therapy!
  24. Petey
    If Ben passes on Julian, I’ll gladly take him❤️
  25. Petey
    With a mother like that who needs a mother. She is nothing but an enabler for Mason. Julian seems really perceptive for a ‘robot’, more than what his programmers accept as ‘within normal parameters’
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