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Parker’s not the sharpest tool in the shed when even after all the “hints”, it took so long to figure out that Darius is gay. The principal is a first class A-hole, no wonder most of the students parrot his beliefs.
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Will David call Celia? It seems everyone else has distanced themselves from him and I can’t imagine she would give up her obsession and cut him out of her life. After exhausting all leads hopefully a casual misspoken word will be the break so badly needed.
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Hate makes people do evil things. Friends can turn into enemies. I’ve had my suspicions but I hoped (and still do) that I’m wrong.
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Glad our boys got their HAE even if it is clothed in reality that all problems don't magically disappear. Loved the flip of the homophobic SOB of a 'father' having to beg for Noah's help and acknowledging his useless son Brock. It's been a tough road for both our boys and Lilith and I'm happy you shared their journey with us.
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What beautiful writing, you pulled me into the situation in such a realistic way that It seemed I was actually part of the story. Kudos to you! Seth has grown so much and is starting to realize he is a better man than he thought he was. Such a tender scene of Seth caring for Noah.
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It's always good to have a super, super angry guy on your side when you're being shot at!
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A Family Beyond Comprehension
Petey commented on James Matthews's story chapter in A Family Beyond Comprehension
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Epilogue - How It All Turned Out
Petey commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Epilogue - How It All Turned Out
What an abrupt ending, much like the fireworks that just fizzled. The drama just quietly dissipated and I’m left with a sense of unfinished business and unresolved conflict. Hopefully we’ll learn more in book three.- 14 comments
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Jack seems to have an issue excepting any responsibility for anything; Joey’s problems are his alone and Roman’s issues aren’t his fault. As a previous chapter title said, “it takes two to tango”. Can’t wait to see what his plan is, knowing this story it will just add more drama 🎭!
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Well, isn’t Roman quite the snake in the grass. Roman has always portrayed Joey as being paranoid and over the top jealous and Jack as the most loyal and trustworthy partner; yet here he is kissing Jack for the second time and Jack is confessing he’s always wanted Roman. Maybe Joey has subconsciously known the attraction and has not been able to deal with it. I think both Roman and Joey need professional counselling, they both have serious issues. I hate to be Roman and Jack when Joey finds out, the proverbial S… will hate the fan
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If he’s at all smart he’d make sure Seamus was registered as a legal guardian along with himself. No better way to tell Seamus he’s not going anywhere
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Well I don't think that is the kind of threesome any of the guys had in mind, lol. Cliff is a real a-hole, out for only himself. Can't wait for karma to pay him a visit!
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Chapter Four: Rob the Bank
Petey commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Four: Rob the Bank
While I may not be happy with the direction some of your characters take, I respect you as the author to tell your story. I, as a reader, can choose to read or not read without attacking the author. I have just begun to read all your stories and want to tell you how much I am enjoying your writing! -
Sometimes we think that we’re so good at keeping secrets, but that’s not always the case; just ask Maya
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As Chris is having the recurring dreams he feels himself absorbing what is in the books. Does that mean he will eventually have special powers? That would make quite the power couple!
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“It does not speak for the Lord, not any longer.” ”Love is never wrong, not for men and not for angels.” Such words of truth. ❤️ Thank you
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Totally agree. A real friend would have risked the fact that Christy might not believe him, but it seemed inevitable that cheating Alex would be caught with his pants down. At least Jake was there to support her when she found out. Now just hope she's not pregnant! Nor sure what the big plan was that Alex was referring to before.
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Jake seemed to be obsessed with an idealized version of Alex and is gradually accepting a more realistic version. Wonder what his plan will be?
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What a strange couple of religious freaks, seems everything is a sin except child abuse.
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A person dancing on a dining table in a restaurant, not sure the health department would approve ( I know I wouldn’t be having my dinner without clean linens and cutlery 🤢)
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While Jess is riding high, has she thought what she will do when her current supply of meth runs out? Her source is now gone.
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Don’t think many addicts get the kind of Christmas miracle Jess is hoping for.
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Somehow I feel that Gianna didn’t really understand what Angelo said. It wasn’t the feelings he denied but where and when it was revealed. Angelo perhaps understands the homophobia of his family better than Gianni and chooses to hide his feelings. Like Gianni, the lustre and romance I felt had definitely lessened.
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"Michelle" is inexplicibly covering for crazy Mary, does that mean Mary has a choice whether or not she comes clean about the "accident" and gets some urgently needed help? Appreciate the quick of posting, am really enjoying this.
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Scott is being a real A**hole and needs an major attitude adjustment. Ominous last sentence! Please post soon🥺
