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If they were far less obsessed about how they felt for each, they may be better prepared for what lies ahead.
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When his mind is worried about those he’s trying to protect, being smart in the moment is difficult. I had suspected that Sable had strong powers including affecting others. It’s a definite asset for the future, tho has to stay hidden without attracting the attention of others.
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Not a very auspicious start to a life if crime. I guess they’ll have on the job training
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Eli has definitely changed completely, he now wants to be seen. Now he’ll have to learn how to live as a vampire. Good thing he has Lucien to help him.
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Like he gave his blood willingly the first time, he gave himself willingly the final time.
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Eli being Eli had a low key, reflective last day. No theatrics or emotional pronouncements, just a stoic determination to join the man he loves.
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Eli makes it clear that this is not an issue for him. ”Apparently.”
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The advantage of power
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How is the disappearance of so many especially high profile students and a distinguished alumni be rationally explained unless the chapel ceases to exist.
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When cowardice is disguised as love, time has a way of exposing it. Rémy recognizes this moment for what it is and now pays the price. Unfortunately so will the others. How will this all be explained to the university?
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Remy’s reaction seems unusual, could it be he genuinely loved Lucien?
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Now the preparation for the final battle is complete!
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“The bars were calibrated for a starving prisoner.” These words expose the cruelty and callousness of the Vespers. Instead of death they should suffer the same fate !
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Words woven together so masterfully and beautifully is why you are one of my favorite authors ❤️
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No , then the story will be finished!
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So Eli wishes to be the executioner! Something I have been wondering. Did establishing the binding require magic? If Adrien’s grandfather possess this magic is the residual passed on through generations?
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Soon can’t be soon enough!
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What is the physical limit of the binding spell? Did I wrongly assume it kept him in the cell? What stops him now from leaving the university?
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We know who must die. Who is the executioner? Eli is much more stoic and determined than I would be!
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The Vespers are noticing the subtle change in Eli, when will they connect the dots?
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Will they not detect the subtle difference in Lucien as well and they then connect the two?
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I was so pleased to see Eli again, I had missed him! I am a BIG fan of your writing and I’m sorry someone gave a bad review. It must feel as if someone criticized your child. Hope you feel better soon. So we’re about to meet what’s under the chapel floor. Secrets are going to be revealed and that isn’t always a good thing.
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Chapter Twenty-One - Ben's POV
Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-One - Ben's POV
If it wasn’t for Vera’s intervention I think the out come would have been doubtful. -
Chapter Twenty-One - Ben's POV
Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-One - Ben's POV
The family negotiated to retain the same controls in exchange for Julian’s life. They all retain the same benefits with a few modifications. Their view of Julian remains the same, he’s still not a person to them. Baby steps but far from where they need to be. With Vera by his side at least Ben has a fighting chance, now the ball is in the companies court. -
Chapter Twenty - Julian's POV
Petey commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twenty - Julian's POV
It’s very creepy to know that someone is going to watch this act of love and reduce it to numbers and decide if it is a marketable commodity.
