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Chapter 15: The First Customer
Petey commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The First Customer
My first thought when I saw the housekeepers name was the inept receptionist with that name on the Carol Burnett show. It was a comedy variety show in North America in the 1970s. I’m sure this is not what you were envisioning when you wrote this character lol Tom is a hilarious distraction from an otherwise dark time. -
If they were far less obsessed about how they felt for each, they may be better prepared for what lies ahead.
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When his mind is worried about those he’s trying to protect, being smart in the moment is difficult. I had suspected that Sable had strong powers including affecting others. It’s a definite asset for the future, tho has to stay hidden without attracting the attention of others.
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Not a very auspicious start to a life if crime. I guess they’ll have on the job training
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Eli has definitely changed completely, he now wants to be seen. Now he’ll have to learn how to live as a vampire. Good thing he has Lucien to help him.
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Like he gave his blood willingly the first time, he gave himself willingly the final time.
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Eli being Eli had a low key, reflective last day. No theatrics or emotional pronouncements, just a stoic determination to join the man he loves.
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Eli makes it clear that this is not an issue for him. ”Apparently.”
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The advantage of power
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How is the disappearance of so many especially high profile students and a distinguished alumni be rationally explained unless the chapel ceases to exist.
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When cowardice is disguised as love, time has a way of exposing it. Rémy recognizes this moment for what it is and now pays the price. Unfortunately so will the others. How will this all be explained to the university?
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Remy’s reaction seems unusual, could it be he genuinely loved Lucien?
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Now the preparation for the final battle is complete!
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“The bars were calibrated for a starving prisoner.” These words expose the cruelty and callousness of the Vespers. Instead of death they should suffer the same fate !
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Words woven together so masterfully and beautifully is why you are one of my favorite authors ❤️
