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Poor JJ. I don't think he'd ever been that close to the unwashed masses before. Zach's arrival is an interesting turn of events. Looking forward to getting that particular scoop. Thanks, hon. Fantastic chapter, as always.
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Yeah, she'd just incapacitate him, like she did to Nana. Great chapter, Mark! The roller coaster ride is clearly not over. Looking forward to Boston! Also, poor JJ, all that social interacting wore him out.
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George's attempt at diplomacy may have failed but he more than made up for it with skill and ingenuity. Can't wait to learn the outcome! Thanks, hon!
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Chapter 69 did not disappoint! We are definitely back on the rollercoaster, the drama has been ratcheted up several (hundred) notches, and I'm mixing metaphors like a crazy person. And why am I not shocked that ED was in this mess up to her eyeballs as far back as 15 years earlier? Wow, Mark, when you set out to create an intricately woven plot, you don't hold back. Thanks for an incredible ride! That said, I might need a little low-key fashion drama with JJ to get over the intensity.
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This chapter really helped clear the air between Will and Stef and, hopefully, Stef and JJ. Now that that's over, we csn move onto the next round of drama: chapter 69! Will and Patrick were super cute together. Thanks, hon!
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This was such an upbeat chapter I can't help wondering what you're setting us up for. This definitely feels like the top of the rollercoaster... Thanks, hon! Can't wait for whatever's next!
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JJ and Luka would be adorable together, but I think JJ needs a friend more than he needs a boyfriend. I suspect Luka needs one, too. It also looks like JJ might have jump-started Luka's career, which would be good for both of them. Great chapter, hon! And so many things to look forward to: Stef's conversation with Will, Will's evening with Patrick Christian, the mysterious chapter 69. Thanks!
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JJ and Jacinta are adorable together. I love when JJ likes a person enough to be polite to them. Will is still my favorite, though. Thanks, hon! Great chapter.
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Once again Granger proves his diplimatic skills and uncanny ability to get out of a tricky situation.
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I agree with @Timothy M.. I thought JJ's email was well written but I was taken aback by the extent of the cc list. He was powerless in the situation with Stef and needed backup, but not quite that much. The dynamic at the Tribeca condo is going to be very interesting with JJ in charge. Not sorry Dillon's gone; he'd definitely worn out his welcome with Will. Great chapter! Thanks!
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Ironic that both Will and JJ had to deal with unwelcome invasion of their space. JJ gets points for the more dramatic removal strategy. Although, of course, he had a lot more to remove. Thanks, hon! Great chapter.
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Welcome back to both you and Granger! I've missed you both! And thanks!
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So happy to have a new installment of the CAP saga! I've missed Will more than you can imagine. Thanks so much, hon! Wonderful to have you back.
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The new chapter was a delightful Saturday afternoon surprise! So happy Ben finally came out to his sister, although the conversation was epically awkward. Things with José are heating up. I don't think he's expecting a party full of Leopards when he finally makes his move. The 1914 medal was more ornate than I was expecting, although in retrospect it makes perfect sense for the Edwardian period. Looking forward to the short story. Thanks for a great chapter!
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Sorry I haven't been commenting much lately. I have been reading and enjoying the progression of the story. Life happens to all of us and gets in the way of things we'd rather be doing. I look forward to the concluding chapters when you're able to get to them.
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Thanks for the update, @centexhairysub! Dr. @Mark Arbour, congrats! Awesome achievement! Also, PhDs are super sexy.
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Thanks, hon. Good to know.
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Well, that was an event-filled chapter. Lots going on. I always enjoy Ollie's banter and it seems to be helping Ben adjust to being out, even if it's to a limited group. Speaking of which, it looks like he may be heading in the direction of trusting Andrew with his secret. And it must help to have an accurate assessment of his sister's attitude towards gay people. Mason and Ben continue to be adorable. I like that Mason is planning to spend most of the next three weeks in Melbourne. Although there are hints that he might have to choose between Ben and Dexter at some point. It was interesting to hear that both Melbourne and Sydney have less savory areas, although I suppose that's true of all large cosmopolitan cities. Btw, what are ethnic youths? Thanks for another great chapter!
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I'm glad the courthouse ordeal is over so Dave and the Leopard family can start to heal and move on. Although, it sounds like Deon's drama is just beginning. Thankfully, he has a strong support system with both his friends and the AFL to help him. Edited to add: Maybe not quite over. Presumably, we'll get to hear about the sentencing, hopefully in the next chapter. Ben and Mason are adorable together. Going back to Sydney is going to be so hard. Thanks, for another fantastic chapter!
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I guess the odds would be a lot higher in Melbourne.
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Thanks for clarifying. It wasn't clear (or maybe I missed it) that Dave, Deon, and Charlie were inside the building, although I should have realized when they asked for an alternate exit. I think what bothers me most about Clarissa is how much she seems to rely on others to keep her occupied. When Deon is unavailable, someone else has to "entertain" her. That might be a symptom of being in a new city, but she should be capable of keeping herself occupied without being so dependent on her boyfriend or a suitable stand in when he's not around.
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I was a little surprised Dave had to wait outside with the crowd. I would have thought there'd be rooms for witnesses to wait in.
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Well, that was dramatic! Very interesting turn of events with Deon in the spotlight. I agree with Tim that Clarissa's presence is likely to draw some attention. After all, why should she be there at all, if not to support her boyfriend? Ben and Mason are adorable together. I'm almost ready to skip Wednesday and get straight to Thursday. Almost, but not quite. Especially not after that cliffhanger you left us with. It's going to be a very long 2 weeks. Thanks for an incredible chapter.
