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Congrats on your award! Thanks for another great chapter.
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Damn, he just gets creepier and creepier. Now I'm wondering if he engineered Brian's capture to set this all up.
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What a lovely surprise to wake up to on a Saturday morning! Content was a bit depressing, but I love that their safe word was "Smurf".
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There's not a lot left to say here other than thanks. And keep writing! I'm looking forward to the next installment of both series. Cheers, Nicky.
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Great chapter! I love Gathan's epiphany and how it changed his attitude towards Zach. I hope it continues. He's another character who started out likeable then became a bit of an arse. Please someone make sure Zach knows about birth control. I'd hate for his story to end with an unplanned teen pregnancy.
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Wow, when you take a break, you really do it in style! Loved this chapter...so many positive interactions. Sad that Steph didn't get to play dress up with Zach, though.
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Someone already speculated as to this, but I'm really starting to wonder if Jerry is the Scar. The "thick hair" is, of course, wrong, but they both have the same gesture of running their hands through their hair (or former hair, as the case may be); there are the ties to Australia; and they are both in Europe right now. The part that doesn't make sense is why he'd wait until the boys returned to the US to have them assassinated. Surely it'd be a lot easier to accomplish in a remote part of Australia. And the motive isn't clear...well hidden resentment over their treatment of Lump? Or is he using their equipment somehow, which makes them another loose end? On the other hand, maybe this is all a crazy conspiracy theory and I should just sit back and enjoy the story.
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I can't say I'm sorry to see Matt go. He started out as such a positive character, especially where Wade was concerned, but his persistent sluttiness (even before 9/11) was tedious. I was hoping Wade would take advantage of the fact that he and Brad are both now single; I thought they were great together. Not sure where you're planning to take Brad with respect to Chris, although I would have thought Brad was too smart to sleep with an employee.
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Nice wrap up! Looking forward to the next installment of the Bridgemont saga.
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That Spanish conversation was comedy gold. I had to re-read it a couple of times for the sheer pleasure of it.
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I love this story! It's getting harder to stop myself from binge reading the rest of it (again) in the original version. And I'm really looking forward to the sequel.
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Restaurant...the Quinones Room? What else is only open on a Saturday? I liked this story. Looking forward to more.
