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Everything posted by Carlos Hazday
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Did you mean 1952? LOL
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LMAO! I knew it!
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Said it before... Brett's a little kid at heart.
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Don't be dissuaded from commenting after others have done so. I always enjoy your thoughts, Tony. And there are always plenty of details to expand upon.
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LMAO President for Life CJ, followed by President for Life Liebe. Yeah... NO!
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I'm still rooting for the sinking island in the middle of the Pacific! It was a stretch and I had to explain and justify the heck out of it, but I'm glad I made CJ, Owen, Brett, and Cesar so close in age. 20 years total with about 5 between each one. I get to have young guys act like grown ups at times and kids at others. With a certain marine being the troublemaker.
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Thanks, Dave. I still haven't decided if Northman's a destitute old-money scion or a wannabe. Not that it matters now since the book's all written. You do like the travelogues so you'll be happy to know this isn't the last one in the book. BTW... how did you like the word count? LOL
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Yep. It's why I won't name a bad guy after him.
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Yeah, no, my biggest issue's going to be the bad smell in the house when I turn on the heat for the first time since I moved here. May do it tonight while it's mild and open doors and windows.
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Interestingly enough, after someone pointed it out, I went searching and confirmed she does not like being referred to as First Lady. Something about her not being any better that the common people. She's not that popular, so it may be an act. But I tried to reflect that attitude.
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But that would mean leaving behind the new, shiny toys! You're evil!
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Okay, I had not read your comment when I asked if Austin would be a happy camper after sex. LMFAO Oh, and stop bragging! I watch a lot of TV (mostly shit like Discovery and National Geographic when it's not sports) and read the Smithsonian and Nature magazines religiously. Both TV and articles have inspired little details in my stories. So much so I sometimes go searching for them after deciding on a location.
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I may have read something a long time ago about Agent Peggy Carter (Captain America's love interest in the Marvel comic books and movies) being inspired by Julia McWilliams. That's her maiden name. So she was a spy first and then a chef. George Bush led the CIA before being elected President. I think I see a trend.
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I've written a lot of travelogues in the series and will keep doing it. Readers seem to enjoy them, and I believe my settings are as much a character as any individual. Unfortunately, after the next chapter, I'm sending them to Vail for Christmas. They'll be up to their butts in snow. But we'll return to sunny Mexico and I have more warm-weather fun planned. One of my brothers lives in Winnetka. I'll have to check in to see if he left his mother-in-law outside overnight. He was all happy about a multi-generational household when she moved in after her divorce. Over Christmas he admitted it wasn't everything he thought it would be. LOL
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@Reader1810 Austin gets a little nookie and he's all happy. @WolfM Does that sound right? I just wrote about someone enjoying watching CJ and Liebe (when she's much older) butting heads. Must be the same as me enjoying it when CJ and his dads get into it. All genetics.
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She was involved in creating a shark repellent for sailors and airmen since so many were being attacked when they ended up in the water. The 'recipe' she developed was used until the 1970s and the main ingredient was rotten shark flesh she sliced and diced. Maybe that's when she started drinking? Didn't she take swigs from the bottle between meat tenderizer strikes?
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@scrubber6620 Tiger balm smells like Ben Gay or Icy hot. I carry a miniature jar of it in my motorcycle first aid kit. Since CJ hits the mats with the marines after working hours, Northman would not have smelled it. And yes, he definitely gets hit. This is full contact. The issue that could arise is diplomacy is more of an art than a science. Someone at CJ's level might only be judged on factual items, but he surpassed that stage almost as soon as he started working. Subjective items, such as the ability to think clearly and communicate would be part of a political officer's evaluation. I think it funny Northman would want to evaluate him on that type of item while also trying to keep CJ chained to his 'visa clerk' position. Did the chapter mention Jimmy wanted to harden all their electronic devices? Let's see if they take them to the theater for the ballet and to the embassy for the reception. We'll find out next Friday.
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So, a little story I've been working on this past week is set in your neck of the woods. In Atlanta. There's one character I almost named Severus, but since Mr. Snake Snape redeemed himself at the end of the books, I went with something else still within the HP world. You know how much I like to 'borrow' from real life and other works.
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Have I mentioned how much I enjoy readers speculation?
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@Clancy59 Forecast calls for temps in the 30s Sunday morning. That would be our coldest in a decade! Unfortunately, snow's only made it this far south once in recorded history. You keep safe, ma'am. While CJ has kept his cool so far, and acted professionally as you suggest, I wonder how long he can keep it up. If he won't do it, someone else needs to step in and tell Northman it's career suicide to pester future President DILF.
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Don't know if he's a Trump man or not, but he's definitely more interested in following rules and regulations than his fellow human beings. Kinda reminds me of our previous President except for the following rules and regulations part.
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I've figured out you like drama. The next chapter might satisfy your cravings for a bit. And since you mentioned the Oscars, let me see what I can whip up. Northman may be an obstacle to CJ attending. BTW, you do know Julia Child was a spy during WWII, right? I just watched a documentary on her time with the OSS.
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I thought I'd slip that comment in and see who reacted. So far, you win. LOL Is this a thing now? My wtriting brings out violence, mayhem, and murder tendencies in my readers? I think I like it.
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Interesting you mention the phones. They'll get to test them in a real life situation in the following chapter. All because of a naked Russian! I think CJ's shown a lot of patience in contrast to his usual shoot first ask questions later approach. Let's see how long he can keep his temper under control.
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Thank you, Parker. It wouldn't be a CJ story without sightseeing and the fathers being in town gave me a chance to describe Mexico City a bit more. As for Northman, we'll get a break from him over Christmas, but even then his shadow will hang over CJ.
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