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Carlos Hazday
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@Clancy59 Forecast calls for temps in the 30s Sunday morning. That would be our coldest in a decade! Unfortunately, snow's only made it this far south once in recorded history. You keep safe, ma'am. While CJ has kept his cool so far, and acted professionally as you suggest, I wonder how long he can keep it up. If he won't do it, someone else needs to step in and tell Northman it's career suicide to pester future President DILF.
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Don't know if he's a Trump man or not, but he's definitely more interested in following rules and regulations than his fellow human beings. Kinda reminds me of our previous President except for the following rules and regulations part.
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I've figured out you like drama. The next chapter might satisfy your cravings for a bit. And since you mentioned the Oscars, let me see what I can whip up. Northman may be an obstacle to CJ attending. BTW, you do know Julia Child was a spy during WWII, right? I just watched a documentary on her time with the OSS.
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I thought I'd slip that comment in and see who reacted. So far, you win. LOL Is this a thing now? My wtriting brings out violence, mayhem, and murder tendencies in my readers? I think I like it.
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Interesting you mention the phones. They'll get to test them in a real life situation in the following chapter. All because of a naked Russian! I think CJ's shown a lot of patience in contrast to his usual shoot first ask questions later approach. Let's see how long he can keep his temper under control.
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Thank you, Parker. It wouldn't be a CJ story without sightseeing and the fathers being in town gave me a chance to describe Mexico City a bit more. As for Northman, we'll get a break from him over Christmas, but even then his shadow will hang over CJ.
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Thanks, bud.
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CJ's calm veneer has started to crumble. Northman may find himself invited to a sparring session with CJ and his marines.
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Attention grabbing opportunities seem to flourish around CJ. He'll have a chance to surpass the local section the following weekend. The Bolshoi will be in town. Steven may get hammered a few more times before I'm done with him. President DILF and First Dude DILF. LMFAO
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I really love inciting readers to violence. LOL Speaking of dicks, I just saw a picture of campaign buttons for the 1952 Presidential election. I like Ike (Eisenhower) and I like Dick (Nixon.)
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“We didn’t make the front page.” CJ dropped the newspaper on the kitchen counter. His sarcastic tone reinforced what everyone knew: he did not care about such things. “But we show up on the local section.” “Not good enough for you?” Brett snatched the paper before César could, tossed the front section aside, and smiled at the picture on the subsequent one. “I likey.” “Gutiérrez Müller Inaugura Centro Tecnológico.” César did not look pleased with the headline. “That’s it? The first lady
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Grammar Guide 4 - Back to Basics - Adverbs
Carlos Hazday commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
WARNING At one point, the promotion team chastised me for using, I quote: "too many ly words." When I work with other authors these days, I suggest not every verb needs an adverb just like not every noun needs an adjective. -
You tell it, sister! I've been accused of never killing characters off (even though I have) so I encourage other authors to do it. Right now I have a Russian spy and an obnoxious supervisor who readers would probably encourage me to kill, but it's more fun when I off someone unexpectedly. I need to get a gun into my MC's hands.
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Yeah, but where's the fun in that? We need maiming, blood, and cliffies!
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We'll respect him the following morning, but he'll probably be dead by then.
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Odds on Elijah surviving? Anyone?
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The Drop in Centre
Carlos Hazday replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Topics
Hand them each a phone and they'll leave you alone to enjoy the parks. -
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Carlos Hazday replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Topics
Either one of you spend two college summers working as a tour guide and listening to that stupid song a few hundred times. I didn't return to WDW for at least a decade afterwards. The was no magic in the kingdom for me. Funny thing is I'm considering a visit to the Magic Kingdom of all places, for research purposes. If I decide to write about a trip there (7 kids aged 3-7) I might want to go sit and watch what kids do and their expressions. It's been a while -
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real gators are good eating. Just don't be stupid and jump in a canal where they live! -
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Carlos Hazday replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Topics
I bleed green and orange. The only good gator is the one my shoes and belt were made from. Friends don't let friends go to FSU. And the worst of the snowbirds are the Canadians (i'll go hide in a minute) blessed because they support our economy, damned for their driving. I mean, 40mph in the Express Lanes? Does that prove I'm a Floridian? LMAO My Earth Day stories are based in the Keys and star a 6 yo girl. This year's will be about coral reefs, next year's about invasive species. Probably targeting iguanas, Brazilian pepper, pythons, and lion fish. -
This baby wants one of those pacifiers Owen dips in Liston wine...
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LMAO They're an invasive species and Florida residents are encouraged to kill as many of them as we can. Same with pythons in the Everglades. Doesn't Florida sound like a great place to visit? -
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45 last night. The heater built into my bedroom's wall has been turned on for the first time this season. I hope we lost a lot of those critters. They've been breeding like crazy because there's been no real cold weather the past few years. MY EARTH DAY KIDS STORY NEXT YEAR WILL FEATURE IGUANAS LOL sorry about caps on tablet and too lazy to fix -
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@Ryan Jones I expanded a couple chapters in my current novel a bit to take into account fires in Colorado and snow in D.C.. Damn my traveling characters. Hey everyone. I know Kitt's a frequent visitor here and I'm wondering if any of you has heard from her outside GA. She hasn't been here in the last 10 days, which is surprising, and I haven't received a reply to the email I sent her. Not that I'm panicking, but with the number of members who have dropped off during the pandemic... Hope y'all have a good week. -
You can't call the Chinese, they show up later in this story. As for your Northern Ireland friends, I'll have to call on the Mexican cartels to deal with them.
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