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Everything posted by Carlos Hazday
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Not so much surprise me as I realize what I planned to write wasn't right for him. At least at that point. Or I'll realize it at a later time and decide to spin the heck out of it.
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I can't wait until you guys read Ritch at 25.
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Check out my response to the comment. I thought I'd already done it, but it must have been my imagination. I need to add a note in front of the story, letting readers know in addition to the other CJ books they should read Singer, Ranger, Malibu, New Year's Day, and Cadet before tackling CDMX. My stories build on each other and even if I provide some details, there are references that may not mean anything to readers.
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I can take credit/blame for CJ being the disciplinarian...
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Thank you. Liebe has turned out to be a nice addition. Although she makes it harder at times because I have to take her into account whenever I have the dads do anything, she also provides me with a great tool for getting some things accomplished. In Ripper Christmas, Owen's mother called them strange parents, and I concur. A nice mix of carefree, concerned, strict, and lenient. I've based a lot of their actions on my BFF and my brothers. the three have raised pretty good kids. A little neurotic at times, but pretty good anyway.
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It's written but I don't think all that hotness is safe. The potential for PTSD is there...
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Nope. I told you but you forgot. I think your memory's as bad as mine. I refer you to Cadet. During his third year, Ritch spends spring break in D.C. He's there to meet Jeffer, Roo, and Raish.
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DILFs Rule! The pillow talks are the chapter ending conversations. I think one of the readers named them that. I used them in the earlier chapters, when I'm jump point of views frequently, to have Brett and Cesar discuss family issues or whatever in private. They don't always happen in bed these days. Thanks for the praise, Tony. I keep trying to improve.
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World domination? That's until his buddy Bezos takes him up into space, and CJ yawns. He'll ditch Bezos, befriend Musk, and be part of colonizing Mars. UNIVERSAL DOMINTION.
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There are people who can work a room, and there are those who can work an entire city. I love putting CJ in awkward situations and seeing how fast he can broker a truce or a deal.
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Those kids have the potential to be very spoiled.
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As you'll see in the next story, Uncle Ritch's an enabler. And he does spoil her and her siblings.
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I think she has a wild streak in her. Wonder who she gets that from...
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I do try to move the story forward but there are times when I need to slow things down to provide background and fill in some blanks. Chapters li,e this allow me to explore the relationship between the 3 main characters. Yes, I'm including Liebe. I think she appears or is mentioned in every chapter.
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LMAO Get in line, okay? Those two get hotter the older the get. 😁
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The books drove me nuts. I gave up after 3 or 4 because the jumping around and multitude of characters made me crazy. Which is funny considering some readers could say the same thing about my big series. At least I've tried to spin off characters to tell their individual stories instead of rambling even more in the main series. I'm enjoying the TV adaptation.
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Thanks, Chris. Yeah, CJ's going to be a pain in the butt for Northman but he'll bulldoze right over the man if he get in the way.
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Thanks, bud
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Funny how those started with Brett and Cesar so I could cover things they discussed particularly behind CJ's back. Now they give me a chance to either summarize or explain what's coming. I sort of like them myself. Maybe that's why I keep using them? LOL
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Bravo! You've described CJ's approach to life. See a problem, bring people together, and find a solution. I wish more of our leaders would try to work together insted of taking pot shots at each other.
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CJ's doing what he does best, he sees a problem and tries to find a solution. Let's hope he can pull this one off.
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Thank you! I tried to advance the story with this chapter, and introducing the Amazon executive served to prove CJ can deal with people from all over.
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“Please, call me CJ.” His response was not uncommon, but being addressed as Signor Abelló was. “Then you must call me Luca! After all, we’ll be working closely on this project.” If his name left any doubt Luca Biaggi was Italian, his accent was sufficient proof. The man Jeff Bezos’ assistant had identified as the primary contact at Amazon Mexico had replied to CJ’s email, included a phone number, and asked for a call. CJ had done so after lunch. “I was surprised Signor Bezos hi
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Thank you, sir. I do spend time researchig before and during the writing. This was a fun one to prepare for. I watched a few seasons of the show and read a fair amount about the music business. Chipper was a favorite of mine when writing him as a supporting character in the CJ series, so it was fitting he'd be the first one to get his own story. I hope you read and enjoy some of my other work Carlos
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A binge reader brought me to this chapter. I'd like to let you know I just penciled Aslan into the cast for an upcoming book.. That will be all for now. 😉
