Carlos Hazday

There you go again accusing me of writing cliffies. I'm gonna get a bad rep, LOL. CJ attitude and personality is an amalgamation of nieces and nephews with some literary liberties taken. Kids like him exist, even if they're not common. And yes, I do try to have him act his age on a regular basis. It's like a teen's voice cracking at puberty: sometimes you sound like a boy, sometimes like a man.

That's always been one of my favorite scenes. I could feel the chief sweat. All the calls proved his dads would move heaven and earth for their son, and CJ has impressed people he's met. That's something that may happen once or twice again.

Did you see my comment about Cesar being born after I graduated high school? LOL, I'm not big on writing teen stories, but since this is a coming of age tale, I thought it was important I start at a point where CJ's personality was being molded.

My editor wasn't too happy with this chapter's format, but I stuck to my guns. Part of my experimentation with different approaches. I think in the end it worked well. Cliffies? Not sure what you're talking about.

That's how I knew about it. Post a mohawk one...

Welcome back. Ask an Author returns with another issue packed with questions and answers. This month we get to hear from authors not often featured. We’ll start off with one of my favorite New Yorkers, and definitely my favorite wine enthusiast: @Defiance19 • In your fiction, you seem to create scenes where men are on the cusp of major changes. How important do you think these moments are to where you’d like to go as a writer, and to life in general? • • • On its own, ‘..on the cusp of major changes.’ is not a terrible thing, but it made me think. I can see what you mean in relation to the stories. An easy answer would be that it’s not unusual; what I write will at times reflect some of my personality and my state of mind at any given moment. We’re almost always in transition, at crossroads, turning points, facing choices, making decisions... It’s life, right? Upon introspection, at the time most of these stories were written, there was a lot of change and upheaval happening to and around me personally. I dealt with the outcome, but I’m still not quite allowing myself to trust, beyond that. It’s almost like I’m settled at the top of a rollercoaster. The climb up was rough, I know there’s solid ground after the ride down but I’m not eager for the possible turmoil I may encounter on the way there. So I remain comfortably in between. The why will keep us here all day. Keeping in mind that these stories were written within guidelines and were always going to be short, I see how I transferred some of my experience and part of my personality to my characters. I get them through the obstacle, and write them to the point where the immediate problem is solved, and I end with a sense that they will move on happily. It may have left some feeling that there could be unfinished business. Which sort of explains the few PMs for more chapters on a couple of stories. I’m hesitant to write a longer arc of substantive plot and character transformation. Because again, comfort. Maybe that’s another reason why I write short stories...one speed-bump at a time...Hmm. As to how it relates to the future of my writing and life in general? I have an idea of how I would like to end up as a writer, but no clear plan, or discipline on how to get there. Maybe when I take the ride down that coaster, it will translate in future stories. Or maybe I should get brave, dig deep, finish writing those longer stories and hope it inspires real-life changes? Eh... Thank you for reading my stories, and for a great question. I bet that’s not quite the answer you were looking for, (I may have to send you a thank you check for that self-observation) but I hope it makes sense to you. To anyone, actually... Best, Def • • • • • We travel west to the Rockies for our next victim author. I still can’t believe studly @MacGreg once had green hair! I may want to pose a question asking why at some point. • Your characters are often very hard to forget. What kinds of traits and idiosyncrasies attract you to a character? What makes a fictional person so important that you need to write his story? • • • I'm going to guess that most of my readers already know I’m attracted to misanthropes and misunderstood characters. In real life, everyone copes with interpersonal struggles and suppressed demons fighting for dominance. In my stories, I choose to write about characters who are often flawed, emotionally bankrupt, frustrated with the world. I don’t pussyfoot around their truths, I lay it all out there. I keep it real. But I also make a point to illustrate redeeming qualities, positive traits, and actions being taken to improve their circumstances. The development of characters is never black and white, just as people aren't. There’s grittiness, there’s beauty. Although I don’t write about fairy-tale romance and happy endings, no character is ever fully doomed in my stories. Even the misanthropes have hope. • • • • • With eighteen stories posted on GA, and only two of them not labeled as romances, @R. Eric strikes at the heart of the most popular category on the site. • You’ve written a number of stories, many of them paranormal romance. What motivates you to write paranormal characters? • • • I write about love. It is what I think is the most important emotion that we have. Who wants a regular guy meets guy and they start having sex? That's dull. I consider what Daniel and I had was paranormal. North Meets South is more about Daniel and myself. I think what he and I had was a miracle. I wrote Cinderfella using the same sort of magic found in Cinderella. A same gender marriage in the middle ages!? Makarovia? A modern day prince marrying an American man...with his country's approval and the support of the prince's family's support? How did that happen. Now, Blueblood 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5 have been fun. The truth was, I did it to keep Daniel alive. I made him a vampire. It worked a little. Now, I am battling something else and while I do that, I am proof reading again and boy, I keep finding errors. I will write again, but I'm dealing with a health issue. My Muse has been silent. I'm too preoccupied for the next few weeks. Writing about men that aren't normal is fun. I want the people out there to see what we have as love, make them see the fantasy and want it for themselves. • • • • • From romances to thrillers. @Twisted_Dreemz has few stories posted, but the three he has shared have earned praise from several other authors. His most recent one is a Spiderman fan-fic offering. • The relationship between teenager Peter and his ten-year-old brother Trejon is very detailed and convincing in The Black Spider. What inspired you to start this project, and are you as close to your siblings as they are, if you have any? • • • Thank you very much for checking out the story. I appreciate your questions! So, what inspired The Black Spider? I can’t answer that without sounding strange, so here we go. It came from a dream. One night, I dreamt that I was watching The Black Spider as a show on television. The dream was short, but in it, I knew everything about the show. When I woke up after having the dream, I still remembered what I knew about the show, so I wrote all of that down. Even after that, I had no intention of writing the story. Readers want original. They don’t want fan-fiction. lol. But the idea wouldn’t rest. So, I wrote up the first chapter and previewed it on the GA message board to see how people would respond. The response was good, so I went forward and here we are at chapter ten! For the second question, no, I have no siblings. I always wish I did, though. • • • • • If you haven’t read @WolfM ‘s Running With The Pack, you don’t know what you’re missing. The entertaining, action-packed story featuring shape-shifters deals with human-nature and power struggles. This month, however, we have him talking about his poetry. • You started writing poetry rather recently. What do you think poetry does for you that prose does not? In other words, what does poetry do for you? • • • I actually started writing poetry several years ago. The instructor of the creative writing class I once took suggested it might be best if I worked on things other than poetry. By the end of that class he had suggesting perhaps writing in general wasn’t for me. I decided to give it another try after reading many of the talented authors on GA. I talked with Mikiesboy (aka tim) who encouraged me and AC Benus who provided some guidance and some editing. I’m not fully convinced that my attempts qualify as poetry, but I’ll leave that to the reader to decide. The response has been positive. For me, poetry is trying to tell a very short story. I suppose that is what it truly is, but since I have mainly focused on long stories, saying what I want in only a few words is difficult. Trying to learn the structure of a poem and not get stuck on one particular format is a challenge for me. This form of writing gives me a chance to explore something different and push my comfort zone. I can write about a thought, a touch, or a mood that provokes something I want to share. While I incorporate things from my daily life in all my writing, a poem is more intimate. I find enjoyment when I manage to articulate what something meant to me in under fifty words and in some cases much less. I’m not sure if I really answered the question, but it’s the best I’ve got. • • • • • Part of the series of questions previously featured, I’ll end the month with two for @lomax61. • What to your mind, would be the greatest misfortune? The greatest misfortune has already befallen, and the world, in its wisdom, decided to call it Brexit. • • • If Heaven exists, what would you like to hear God say when you arrive at the Pearly Gates? "Come on in, dear boy. The kettle's boiled, and the tea's brewing nicely. I've even made some of those strawberry jam and double cream doughnuts you so love. You can eat whatever you like now. Oh, and by the way, Trump is one of ours. Who says I don't have a sense of humour?" • • • • • That’s it for this month. Remember, if you want to ask an author a question you feel the rest of us would enjoy the answer to, send it to me. I’ll do all the work, and share it in a future issue.

Although the abs aren't really visible anymore, and the biceps are shrinking. That better be what you're talking about when you say I'm hard... LOL

Don's still not off the hook. He better stay away from me.

If Don says he's sorry one more time, I'm climbing through the screen and strangling him.

Those two are a mess right now. Here's hoping they can find their way back.

@Drewbie Welcome to the family! Glad you're reading. This is not a romance per se, but there might be some of that in the future. Your profile page says you're in Northern Virginia, I look forward to hearing your opinion of my use of Metropolitan DC locations.

CJ will flourish while with his fathers. I'm glad you're enjoying the read and look forward to tour comments.

@Jaro_423 So, you've left Zimbabwe then? I think you should forget about having read some of the story before and enjoy this time around. Sounds like CJ's journey may have resonated because of your own.

@Jaro_423 Welcome back! I recall you reading and commenting before and wondered why you stopped. I'm glad you're reading again. I do remember one of your comments in particular. Something about certain cultural references not being familiar. If you find yourself in the same position, ask. I'll try to explain.

My editor has been a huge influence. One tiny example. How many times have we read 'so and so nodded their agreement'? Not in my writing. Nodding signifies agreement so the last two words are not needed. You'll find dozens of similar examples in my stories.

I have it on good authority they're looking at apartments in Hudson Yards. Should I send out a stalker alert?

You can thank Mann for the format. He keeps pushing me to write shorter chapters focused on a single event. And he likes lots of dialogue since it's easier to edit! After the chapter posted, I read it again for the millionth time. The final toast made me tear up LOL Our little, scared kid's growing up.

I try to say as much as possible with as few words as possible. That also applies to my writing. If you ever read anything of mine, you'll notice my writing is a bit more stark and subdued than others.

Here's a link to the story and the review

You asked for favorite review or comment; that's what I gave you.

Carlos Hazday is an author who does not shy away from hot topics. 'Hunting Season' is a story that deals with the reality of racism, and how one young man took a stand against it. CJ is a shining example of a hero. I highly recommend this story to anyone who believes that one person can make a difference.

@Defiance19 I ditched a bunch of references to the holiday spirit and decorations since I wanted the focus to be on CJ's birthday. Still tried to capture the magic of NYC the weekend before Christmas. The holiday reference comes in in the chapter after the birthday party. Really glad you enjoyed it.

Unlike some authors, I don't write as I post. My stories are entirely written before I begin sharing them. That means I can't/won't change it based on reader comments or requests. My advice would be to read over previous portions of the story to refresh your memory. Every character's appearance has evolved, and I share changes as they happen. Inserting a full description for any of them at this point would not make sense. And as far as the picture is concerned, it would not be in compliance with GA community standards, so it won't be showing up here.

What? Eight men at a time's not enough for you? Next you're gonna want a dozen of them. LOL

You think I could find anyone interested?