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It's Orel calling Will: Mister Carter isn't it? :: checks again ::
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Usuaully it is Uncle Will, but there is a later beat in Campaign where this is addressed... and Will asks Tommy what he wants. I just had to here, in this one... keep it vague as to not spoil things. I mean he is Called Tommy Carter in this one, so you know.
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Tommy to the rescue, I like Tom-boy he's a good egg, and quick on the up tick, helping Orel back from the edge of a meltdown that would have undermined everything. Tarquin is a cruel machine, setting Orel up for a public meltdown infront of the guests would have given him everything he needed for his conservatorship argument. Tommy stepping up, and protecting his friend by calling the one person he knows can handle it, says a lot of our Olympic champion in training. Besides he gets to tease his cousin :
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:: wrings hands :: I can't... it won't let me... and I'll get shot... rightfully too...
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awwwwwww I'mmagonnagetintrouble.... :: eyes the mod and knows they have rulers :: :: hangs head ::
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Tomorow is the last chapter of this one. Then on wards, we're going back in time to Merrickville of 2001. Andrew and what happened back then.
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since I was asked nicely: a larger image of the new book cover:
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Tarquin of Rome is about to find the gates of his city are closed to him, and the population in revolt. The man he thought simple and incapacitated has organized a revolution against his corrupt rule. Lucretia has said her truth, and it was heard.
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Misters Finnegan and Orel Grady Now to crush a bad man.
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Chapter Twenty-Three: The False Spring The Founder’s Day Gala was not a party; it was a siege of aesthetics. Merrick Manor had been transformed into a gilded cage of sensory aggression. Tarquin Merrick had opted for the “Vernal Awakening” theme, a choice that was as calculated as it was cruel. The grand ballroom was choked with thousands of forced-bloom lilies, their white trumpets screaming with a fragrance so potent it felt physical. To Orel, the scent was a cloying, floral weight t
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Yani is going to need to get somewhere where he can do that. Because you know the military is going to suppress the footage showing they fired first. And if the US cut the cable... hmmm :: cracks knuckles :: I had other plans for him, but I can actually do both... let's see how my writing day goes. I like a good challenge, and nothing wrong with making slight alterations. Let's see how the CIA like a spanking.
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Yani is fun character, the former CIA computer tech served with a Burn Notice because he helped Andrew, recruited to CSIS and then earned his way to becoming the Technical Quartermaster, master of the the Operational Code-names, and a wry sense of humour. I enjoy that he makes the CIA regret that Burn Notice through punishing competency and a good thwarting of their plans. There's someone in the NSA/CIA whose job it is to keep a file on him, annoyed every time they open it to find 'Yani waz here' written all over the cover page.
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Tomorrow : Yani Livchenko enters the fight.
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I can't wake up this morning Good Morning. Aluminum vs Steel
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CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX: THE GLASS JAW Location: The Cabot Strait. 42 nautical miles southwest of Cape North, Newfoundland. Time: July 28, 2024. 05:30 Newfoundland Daylight Time. Status: Disputed Waters. The Atlantic greeted the end of July with a shroud. The fog was not weather; it was a tactical blanket, thirty meters of visibility that rendered billion-dollar sensor suites nearly blind. On the bridge of HMCS Halifax, the AN/SPS-49 air search radar painted phantom returns that diss
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Andrew vs the major, round two. So far Andrew's 1 for 0.
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Maybe he can use his Confetti Cannon to escape?
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ooo deep lore dive there Aka Yes Will was the Acting Deputy Minister for Heritage under Robert Avery, he oversaw the transition and the transfer to Thorne. He ran Heritage in the interim after Robert's Death while he made his own decision to run for Parliament. Founding moment in his career. I 100% agree with you, he will not take embezzling from that department well, as he didn't during Carter's Fortress when the corrupt developers attempted it, and the former Prime Minister sought to cover it up.
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I am watching a podcast from In the shadows, I won't post a link, you can find it yourself, Simon Whistler talking about When and Entire Town conspired to remove an Abuser (paraphrased title) A sudden and binding, collective amnesia. Striking the entire town, at the same time.
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All Oliver has ever wanted is for his brother to be safe, he just didn't know how to do it. And all Orel has ever wanted was for Ollie to be happy. Waaay back in one of the earlier chapters, he tried to share his most precious thing: Finn, with Ollie. I think Orel knows that Oliver needs to go, Orel doesn't need protecting, and if Oliver walks now, Orel will be just fine. It's Tarquin that needs Ollie. I do enjoy how the dynamic we expected at the start of the book is completely inverted by the end.
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Well, as Andrew stated, if there is no other way, then that's Tarquin's fate. Justice will come for Tarquin, let's try things Orel and Finn's way first, then Will and Lisa's failing that, Andrew and Clovis's.
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Great (many times great) ancestor, with interest.
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Orel Grady Junior
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