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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Morning folks, I am up early and getting my chapters done like a good writer should
  2. Chapter Twelve WORLD END: T-minus 169days, 15 hours, and 0 minutes. The Oval Office, Washington D.C – United States of America Will crossed the threshold into the Oval Office and felt the full, isolating reality of the trap closing around him. The room was smaller than television suggested, yet possessed a gravity that amplified the sheer unpredictability of the man standing by the desk. Will instinctively straightened, his diplomatic training taking over. He extended his
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Blake's side was told in Carter's shadow, he dated West right after Jason. Then he dated Matt. His story is continued in Recourse where he is roommates with Marc, and dates Yani And again in Breach where he interviews Will as a reporter for the Toronto Star. He was notorious for picking unstable relationships. Considering he was in love with Jason through it all, we now know why.
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    “Oh Kenny,” Sally blinked and shook her head. “What’s he going to do, he’s such a sensitive boy… he’s not going to understand.” Jenny affixed Sally with a look, thinking to the nervous boy she’d watched kissing her son in the next yard over from her bedroom window. “Oh, I think he will be fine with it…” Sally looked up, “really? I worry about him. He’s so confused…” “Not that confused,” Jenny answered, trying to bite back from telling Sally outright what she knew. “And he’s so straight-laced,” Sally continued. “I’d say he’s loosened up a little since he met Steve,” Jenny again tried to bite back her words. “Steve is so good for him, he’s getting him out of his shell, getting him to try new things.” Sally smiled into her tea. “Oh, he’s definitely doing that…” Jenny nodded. “I just want them both to be happy,” Sally murmured absently. “They’re getting there, I am pretty sure,” Jenny swallowed her tea, deciding having one of the Jensen boys outed to Sally in a day was quite enough trauma for the little church lady.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    So Brutally true. Jason here was trapped, Brad offered him friendship, money, belonging. The threat of his father beating him hanging over his head. His desperation due to neglect. And Blake having walked away from him less than a week before... And along comes West. From a loving home, fed, standing up to Brad, being unrepentant, unafraid and Gay. He was everything that Jason wanted to be, and that twists a person like a knife. But West was also a light that guided Jason out of his darkness. Just took him a while to realize it. It's so easy to fall into these traps out of desperation.
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Poor Will, getting flying tackled in the Rose garden, Naked Gun II style
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Something to explore in a future chapter. Definitely good questions.
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    I has always bothered me that the assault scene in Carter's Shadow had Jason Jensen there, it NEVER felt right to me. And having an explanation as to HOW Andrew was able to find West seemed to fit. It always seemed so... accidental... what reason would Coach have to be down by the shop classes like that... how was he able to get there so fast. It needed explanation and since I was writing about Jason anyway... it all came together and made sense. West alone in court didn't seem enough, having Jason testify would ensure that those responsible would be punished. It just... worked. I hope Jensen's redemption arc feels more rounded now, earned. From Closeted Jerk in Shadow through to tragic hero.
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    Did you do your homework?
  10. Thirteen The back office of Madam Chao’s Nail Emporium was a strange, temporary sanctuary. The lights were dimmer here, the air smelling strongly of clean towels and the sweet, lingering perfume of acetone. Sally Jensen sat on a small stool, her feet now dry, the trauma of the last hour slowly sinking in. Jenny-Lynn Hickey had established herself as the fierce gatekeeper, having helped herself to two mugs of tea from the break station, acting like the undisputed queen over this temporary, c
  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    I'd rather he remain un-shot and out of Gitmo.
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Heck no, onto the next book! I have a story to tell. The Order are still standing, and have won a great victory by the end of Carter's Order. Let's see how they do with Carter's Run. Andrew's unshackled in this one, and he's got them squarely in his sights.
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    So today is going to be filled with revisions, plot hole tightening, and fun. Carter's Order is finished, but Father and his minions are still very much in play. When i started this I never anticipated how crucial Three little boys were going to be to the plot. It's funny the way a book unfolds, you start out with an idea but the end result seldom looks anything like that idea by the time you are done with it.
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Mister Carter goes to Washington
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Well is about to play political chess with a man who tore up the rule book.
  16. WORLD END: T-minus 169days, 15 hours, and 24 minutes. Washington D.C. United States of America The air in the Canadian Embassy conference room was thick with stale coffee and frayed tempers. Outside, Washington D.C. simmered in the late September humidity, but inside, the atmosphere was glacial. Will Carter, Minister of Foreign Affairs, straightened the cuffs of his suit jacket, the movement precise despite the ache in his shoulder. He felt the phantom pain from where he had been shot
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 23

    Ahhh an elaborate ploy involving smoke, mirrors and David Copperfield
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I finished Carter's Order today. 38 Chapters, they are all posted set to go live each day. I will see about prepping an ebook for those who don't want to wait. might take a day or two. I am very tired. This book is the first half of two. The Second Book : Carter's Run. i won't spoil things, but the name is important.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 25

    Army - Vanguard - Shadow - Duty - War - Fortress - Recourse - Breach - Order - (coming soon : Carter's Run)
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 23

    oh she was shot while holding one. That makes her very very dead.
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    My son groaned at me over Pokemon recently, I still have no idea what type does what... he's over thirty and still rolls his eyes at me when I have a senior moment.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    They don't I believe. Though the question of Jason's sexuality in the Chruch's eyes is up for debate. As my old Ethics Professor used to say : There are truths, TRUTH, and THE Truth. Finding truth in that is for you to decide
  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Nothing beats Gossip and lies like standing in the light and speaking the truth.
  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    I wanted to write the Pastor who is what I believe Pastor's/reverends should be. How they should act, with the weight of their life lessons measuring scripture, and compassion and love guiding them. The world would be a better place were this the example set.
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I wonder who'd do that.
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