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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    well teenagers are about a subtle as a brick at a tea party.
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Well that one went out early, sorry @drpaladin (I am running on no sleep and hit the wrong button again.) On a lighter note. Go Jason.
  4. The fluorescent lights of the Independent Grocers were harsh and unrelenting, casting a cold, sterile glow that made the Saturday morning shoppers look pale. The air, a mundane blend of fresh bread and floor wax, was brutally contrasted by the icy humidity of the dairy aisle, the coldest, quietest corner of the store. Blake, a figure of frantic, soaking energy, moved through the aisles like a storm front. His chest was heaving from the run, the spill of cold coffee still dampening his shir
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I live down the road from Jaguar near Coventry. There's an F-type parked at one of the neighbours... nice car... really nice. The people around here have far too much money... I prefer the Aston that's usually parked across the street from it. But I think giving Andrew an Aston or a Jag might be sacrilege... he's a Mustang man.
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    :: slaps forehead :: So Peter's trying to seduce a guy, under orders from West... and is the biggest Dork going. I am having far too much fun this morning.
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    You know, I am going to have to write this now Gun toting Aunts, armed turkey, and all the trimmings
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I'm picturing you at Thanksgiving, armed for bear. "I dare y'all to start talkin' politics," Spits to the left, "go ahead make my Thanksgiving day!"
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    Holy heck... now that's a DANGEROUS Aunt! I had one that used to carry a big old snub revolver in her purse. To protect her Bingo money...
  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I've been wanting to write a car chase for years... I've never done one before. Andrew's been set up for one since Recourse was written back in 2007. But never really had a chance to do so. I also wanted to give the 2005 GT a warhorse death, going down fighting like she's bloody earned after all this time. Now to get Andrew a new one... or rebuild one.
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    I'm working on Chapter 31 currently. This book is going to be a long one. Has to be, there's so much material to cover. Hope that's ok with folks. It's almost as long as Breach, and still in the first act.
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    err right passenger... um... totally didn't forget about him... :: nudges body under rug :: Dead, definitely dead... nothing to see here... nope
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    Lessons learned It's not normally a first thought in Ottawa when you're dropping your husband off for a flight and wandering through an airport. Though the RCMP are going to have some explaining to do.
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

    If you're going to try to take the King, you'd better not miss.
  16. Chapter Ten WORLD END: T-minus 170 days, 16 hours, and 0 minutes. Ottawa International Airport, Ontario, Canada The black 2005 Mustang GT was a low, hungry beast, its engine singing a deep-throated, confident thrum as Andrew merged onto Airport Parkway, heading north toward the Queensway. The humid air of the terminal was already forgotten, replaced by the cool, crisp late September evening. In the rearview mirror, the lights of Ottawa International dwindled, and Andrew settle
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 9

    Which is where the county clerk's office comes in with the disputed status. As Jenny-Lynn pointed out, it became a court and CPS issue.
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Worst kept secret in town. I touch on them a little in Carter's Shadow, so it's nice to finally fix a... not a mistake... but an injustice to the characters, I think the deserved a bit better than either of them got in that book.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 9

    Lisa's strategy, once she learns of all of this, is a beautiful dance of PR, spin, and humanity. She's grace in motion and I genuinely am enjoying watching her work (writing it) I have taken her from a high school student all the way up to this, and mostly she's been a back ground character, or there as Will's chief of staff, but seeing her step around and pick up her sword to do battle is rewarding.
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    This is Jenny-Lynn's primary concern, and why she acts as she does. I am trying to write being very considerate to all of the players involved. Sally is innocent in everything, and if you recall from the past chapter. Jason has told her about Blake, so this is not about the relationship(ghost of one), it's about the impact of their private life being dragged into public. Sally is interesting to me. And Kenny loves his mom, and Jason loves his wife.
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 9

    Peter is utterly adorkable: He offered a final, respectful nod and walked out, leaving Peter to hum happily over his chopping board, entirely oblivious to the fact that he had just inadvertently rejected an armed, charming officer who had confessed his attraction. Peter just thought he'd met a new, friendly, decent guy. He paused and smiled thoughtfully, as he pulled out his phone and tapped out a fond message to West filled with X’s and O’s at the end and maybe a hint about needing to hear more of West’s cheesy romantic poetry. A white checker’s piece, lost and somehow on the board, had managed to fend off a Red Pawn all by itself.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    I love the controlled Chaos family, they're messy, they know it, and own it. I was toying with having Jenny and Sally being Frenemies but then things kind of felt cliche... and then I though, you know what... let's keep with the flipped script theme of this story. And I've wanted to show how Steve is kind of like his Mom. And of course, Kenny needed his run to Steve for comfort moment.
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