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Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
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Cecil hasn't quite gotten used to the idea that his Daddy's are separated yet... -
Chapter 3: The Aloe, the Duck, and the Infiltration
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Use your inner incubus! I don't have an inner Incubus! I am literally an incubus AND inside of you! -
Chapter 3: The Aloe, the Duck, and the Infiltration
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Chapter 3: The Aloe, the Duck, and the Infiltration
Topher Lydon commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Aloe, the Duck, and the Infiltration
forgive my lateness... I was installing an espresso Portafilter holder next to my machine... it was an ordeal... Bob Villa I am not. um, hi there... enjoy more Hartley Chaos... All hail the dark lord Cecil! -
Chapter 3: The Aloe, the Duck, and the Infiltration
Topher Lydon posted new chapter in Charlie vs the Union of Doom
The Caribbean sun was no longer a celestial marvel; it was a personal insult. Pip sat on the edge of the plush, absurdly high-thread-count bed in their premium villa, staring down at his legs. For twelve thousand years, his physical form had been an indestructible, self-maintaining vessel of divine grace. He had stood in the fires of Gomorrah and felt only a pleasant warmth. He had waded through the icy depths of the ninth circle of Hell and never once shivered. His skin was supposed to ra- 6 comments
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Chapter 1: The Subway
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:: blinks :: This is a writer's brain, in writing mode... Finlay... I am struggling to remember... I need more coffee, have I forgotten a character? There's Finn Grady... but he's Finnegan I thought... um... ok I am drawing a blank... -
Chapter 1: The Subway
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Maybe, I am using a random name generator set for Canadian names... and aside from it spitting out Declan every second name or Callum... it's not the best... it tends towards the same few names over and over... When I don't know what to call someone in the text I use the name Miller then find/replace. Miller is a good name because unless I am writing a fantasy novel, it's not going to cause Peterlications or SitTomions. Which irritate me and happen far too often. TBH I write so many stories, names are my biggest problem. I recycle names, over use some... there are so many Matt's in my stories just because that was my first boyfriend's name, and ALL of the Matt's I write are based, somewhat, on his personality. -
Chapter 1: The Subway
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Peter vs the Secret Service... a long... deep seated antagonism is born. -
Chapter 1: The Subway
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Epilogue: The Lion's Share
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I am pleased with how Echo and Asset came out. They finally bridge the early books Andrew with the later books one. Explaining how he became the man he needed to become. -
Chapter 1: The Subway
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Andrew back in the middle of it again. Welcome to Toronto good morning -
A CSIS operative witnesses a suicide on a Toronto subway platform. He tries to stop it. He fails. Now everyone wants what the dead man was carrying—and they think Andrew Carter has it. Caught between a corrupt RCMP officer, a ruthless Conservative fixer, and the desperate operatives of a Liberal leadership contender, Andrew must find the truth before the evidence he's doesn't have destroys everything his fiancé Will has sacrificed to rebuild. The wedding is in three weeks. The shadows won't let go. Someone is going to get burned.
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The subway platform was a subterranean concrete trench. The air down there was old. It smelled of ozone, electrified dust, and the ingrained, inescapable grime left behind by a million daily commuters. The curving walls were slick with decades of accumulated moisture. It was November 2005. Toronto, Ontario. The temperature on the street above was dropping fast, but down here, it was a static, damp chill that ate through fabric and settled into the bone. Andrew Carter stood two feet back f
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In the current books (Carter's Order-Run-Throne, and the final one: Campaign) Will becomes President of the United States, there's a war, it's a whole thing. Peter gets to shoot a bad guy... for a change. (he's smug about that one) they run from 2019-2024. This is twenty years before all of that... the book series, in total, runs from Carters Army: 1995 (Will is 16, Andrew is 17) Vanguard: 1996 (Peter's introduction he is 12) Carter's Shadow: 2001 (Peter is 17) Duty: 2001 (two weeks after Shadow) Carter's Echo: 2001 (two weeks after duty) Asset: 2002 War: 2003 Fortress: 2004 Recourse: 2005 Line *the new one being written* : 2005 (six months after recourse)(Will and Andrew finally get married) Breach: 2015 (Will is the High Commissioner to the UK)(Jacob Carter's introduction, he is 7) Order: 2019 (will is Foreign Minister for Canada) (Jacob is 11, Tommy is introduced, also 11) Run: 2019 (directly after Order, Will is Prime Minister of Canada) (Tommy becomes Will and Andrew's Foster son) Throne: 2019 (directly after Run, Will is a War time Prime Minister) Campaign: 2023-2024 (Will is Governor of the annexed 51st State, and runs for President) (Tommy Carter is adopted officially)
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Epilogue: The Lion's Share
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Here is an IMPORTANT scene from Carter's Breach: -
Epilogue: The Lion's Share
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Thank you. Yes We know Andrew gets screwed over in Carter's Fortress. Now we know why he had a target on his back -
Epilogue: The Lion's Share
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Thank you for coming with me on this journey. Andrew and Will will return in Carter's Line. (there's a wedding afoot) Please leave a review, tap the recommend button (Black button, looks like a medal, right below where the like/love/thumbs up icons are in a chapter) Looks like this : Every time you do, you help me improve visibility and let me know how I am doing. I hope it was a good one. -
The early morning light filtering through Robert Gable's corner office was the exact, distinct color of old money—a pale, indifferent gold, cut through the floor-to-ceiling panoramic windows that made the sprawling financial district of Toronto look like a meticulously crafted diorama of human ambition. Andrew Highmore sat deeply entrenched in the senior partner's sprawling, oxblood leather executive chair. His long legs were casually propped up on the polished surface of the massive, anti
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Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
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So much fun -
Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
Topher Lydon commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
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Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
Topher Lydon posted new chapter in Charlie vs the Union of Doom
The landline phone in the premium villa of the Emerald Vista Resort and Spa was shaped like a conch shell. It was made of heavy, polished resin, painted a garish shade of coral pink, and it had not been plugged into the wall when the Hartley family arrived. Simon knew this for a fact because he had unplugged it himself, wrapping the cord in a neat figure-eight and securing it with a color-coded zip tie from his travel binder, categorizing it under 'Unnecessary Distractions.' And yet, at ex- 7 comments
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damn right, need to have something for Andrew to do in the early 2010's
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This is where GS&P comes in. They are Merrick's lawfirm. And it's not like he is in any position to fire them. They'd be all too happy to support Catherine's conservatorship. Robert Gable is having a very good day
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It will be explored in the next chapter. Essentially Why bother? Why kill a vegetable? Levesque has bigger problems than dealing with Merrick right now. And having Merrick killed, right in the middle of SWAT teams kicking down the doors to his businesses, and arresting his people would be a massive mistake... not when he can wait, using the law firm, and ride this out. Then, when the board is quieter. Remember Merrick does die, just WHO kills him waits to be seen. And besides, a good villain on a revenge arc... classic for a reason.
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Evil doesn't die, it just gets buried.
