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Topher Lydon

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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 6

    Ben, what a mess. We now get a giimpse into what made Riley, Riley. Least Ben cared enough to ask, more than Kier ever did. morning
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 6

    Chapter Seven: The Calculus of Damage The warmth of the night before didn’t just fade; it was surgically excised from the atmosphere. It left a vacuum filled with something sharp and sterile, like the air after a lightning strike. By the time the Jaguar carved its way into the concrete embrace of the Birmingham ring road, the silence inside the car was absolute. Ben wasn’t just silent; he was a closed system. The smooth, predatory glide of his driving was gone, replaced by a jagged, a
  3. ha! It's weird isn't it? But it does give you remarkable insight into ideas... I was writing a chapter of something st in Victorian London, and it was just not working.... bashing my head, rewrite after rewrite... then I asked it : Would I be cracked if I set it in Modern LA. Got a breakdown of how it might work, suggestions, flavour ideas... and my brain went ooooooooo
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 6

    Latin was a required subject in Mr. Hartley's generation in school, especially private ones
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    Chapter 6

  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 6

    Lying is one thing, lying then getting caught on a recording that's another thing
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    Chapter 6

    The next chapter is all about Cecil and Grandpa.
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    Chapter 6

    They just have the dreaded "Bed death" syndrome. As I wrote this, I could see it happening. They like each other sure, but there's not spice to it... and the shadow of Tyler who is always there. Besides Pip and Charlie much better pairing. Angel boners are divine, and totally count as Vegan.
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 6

    Sabrina was bad... but she's not the real problem. Hello Lynnie, let's discuss your future
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    Chapter 6

    Pip popping in for a comment of his own, grins at the reader What, you think I didn't know this was going to happen? I subscribe to "Railed by an Angel monthly." Seriously, I told you Taine would fuck it up. Now to put on my best hoodie, buy a tofu dog and wait.
  11. Chapter Seven: The Morning Shift The Hartley house had settled into a new rhythm over the past week, one that involved significantly more squeaking and significantly less sleep for everyone involved. Simon's new room was at the end of the upstairs hallway, a small but perfectly formed space that had previously served as Mrs. Hartley's sewing room. She'd cleared it out in an afternoon with the serene efficiency of someone who had long ago accepted that her home was a sanctuary f
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    My morning so far:
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    This is a very good point, and one I should coach with care. Ben is Largely written as Asexual, however he is not. I do not wish to diminish the Asexual community, nor readers, so I will say that his Asexuality is a part of his condition, and his getting past it is him dealing with his own particular brand of issues. It in no way is meant to say that "find the right person will cure..." which is a harmful narrative. So please afford me a little room with the character, and know that I am not endeavouring to write Asexual erasure. (I hope that's clear)
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    This is... surprisingly apt for Ben. He's definitely learning something. Just... be aware, Ben isn't there yet and we already know from the Services station that he likes to reassert control after he's been taken unaware.
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Ben knows what he is. Well... the sociopath bit... the homosexual part is a rather new discovery. One he isn't all together decided upon, it's going to take a lot more thought, and... Riley, stop that... what are you... no my precious concept of sex as being icky....
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    Chapter 5

  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Riley found something to do :: whistles ::
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Julian, who we all know is drinking at 7am, is highly amused.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    So I am wrestling with my eyesight again, people that know know I was in for surgery a year ago. Just getting to the stage where I actually had to turn on the Accessibility features of my computer. I usually work in 11pt font... old habit... I have to increase that and discovered that GA has a green + button up at the top, and my world has changed 👓
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Chapter Six: The Cradle of the Beast The call came as they were passing the sign for Knutsford Services, a little over an hour from the beige hell of the Philips' house. The rain had softened to a mist that blurred the edges of the world, turning the motorway into a grey dream. The phone that rang was not the burner Ben used for business, nor the encrypted device he used for other business both sitting on the dash. It was a sleek, silver Nokia that lived in the glovebox, untouched for
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Weston
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    Chapter 5

  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Ricky has just learned a MUCH better prospect is in town
  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Matt needed a character growth moment... and I figured what would be the most Matt-tastic disaster of a job for him.
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