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Topher Lydon

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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 15

    It is something here in England that wouldn't be missed, in Canada though, rural Canada where the houses are further back from the road and space is much bigger it's easier to miss. And, as well, the schools at the time were a bit more problematic and... it's a plot hole ok, leave me alone
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    Subs have a short range hydrophone system. It's mechanical so not digital. Drop a bouy near it with a recorded message, and viola. Also a sonar will pick up a helicopter overhead, approaching from shore. <- has done research
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 8

    The death occoured after the events of this story. This one is one year after the first story, but *before* the final chapter of that book.
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 25

    I gets explained, in detail, during Carter's Recourse.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 23

    Happy Christmas user and proud of it
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 21

    He pops up time and time again in the books, charting his own course and growing up and into his own, best self. His poor mother, tho... LOL
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 15

    Will, as is confirmed in later books, is a dual citizen. Both Canadian and British.
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    I mean given the latest Jack Ryan series, who hasn't had that fantasy...
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    Coincidentally yes, I had written Andrew's fear of flying before I had decided to make him a spy, I think it was Carter's Duty when I first put him on a plane (still a law student). Now you've brought up Ryan I am groaning at the parallel in that usual writer curse that everything's been done before.
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    I do enjoy putting that poor man on planes, and other things that fly. I think, when this is all over, he's going to insist on Will paying for them to take a boat home.
  11. Streets of Manchester, United Kingdom The Mustang roared, its powerful engine a violent counterpoint to the thick, uneasy silence inside the cabin. Andrew gripped the wheel, his knuckles white, his usual reckless driving amplified by an almost manic focus. The sleek vehicle cut through the Manchester traffic with aggressive impatience, braking sharply, accelerating with lunging force, weaving through lanes as if the city streets were his personal racetrack. Gregory, strapped into the passenger
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Give Mary a bit of time, she's on it. Mary's also developing over the next few chapters. Which I like, she's smart.
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 15

    The COB is a grey-man was a card I've been waiting to pull since book one. He was the blood sample Doctor Kyr missed all that time ago.
  14. Orion Transport - Orion Territory Rikard stepped down from the holographic immersion pod, reaching out to pull the FTL transceiver from the computer console tossing it up into the air and catching it neatly. Two birds with one stone, he now knew what the secret behind the Peligian diary was, and he had orchestrated a trap, all in a single masterful stroke. "So gullible." He murmured with a smile as he walked towards the far doors. He checked his watch, nodding with satisfaction that
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 33

    Believe in the Engineer, trust the engineer... the engineer is all.
  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 32

    For sure, he's teflon wrapped in butter, and coated in olive oil. Slick.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 31

    common misconception It was Lauren and Kendrick
  18. I've changed my mind, not that you haven't written one, you have. Just *which* one you wrote. Oh that *that* was sneaky, unless you wrote two just to mess with my binge-writing melted brain... you could have written two... but no that *would* be sneaky.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    It's funny how overloaded as I writer I can become when mid book. It makes me terribly absent minded, all my brain cells seem focused on what I am doing, then once it's done... poof gone page-file cleared for new data... it frustrates the hell out of my friends who find Writer-Chris to be a bit of a space cadet. When I go on a tear it means I have entire conversations with someone talking to me that I simply have no recollection of moments later.
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    One of Will's weaknesses/strengths is his sense of right and wrong. He's very idealistic, something he has never quite broken from despite the world he moves in. I think he's been called a Boy-scout by one or two characters in other books.
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    HAHAHAHAA I am glad someone caught the nod to a certain QI host.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Odd my morning writing, (Chapter 24 for those who are curious) Ezra continues to intrigue me, for a throw away honeypot target, he's decidedly... more important. It's like the Character has decided to sit on the page, cross armed and refusing to budge from the plot and the story. I've had a few characters like this over my writing, Firlotte in the Falcon Banner, Luke in Return of the sun, and most famously Jared was one of these. And Gregory is smarter than he looks, I have a fine appreciation for Andrew's "partner" in this one. He was good in Recourse, but in this one he's proving to be intelligence in action.
  23. Obfuscate all you want, but only you would wield underpants with lethal Comedic effect... unless that WAS @Inkognito... >.< now I am not sure...
  24. So @Inkognito wrote all the stories, except ONE, looks squarely @Jeff Burton
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 16

    Thanks, I am trying to keep it grounded and pulling from many sources, leaning on friends for advice. I found with Recourse, the last book, that there was a shift in my writing, and I've been wanting to write a tighter story ever since. It's... a lot to keep track of. But getting there. Act Two is nearing it's climax, then we're going to go into the third, which should be interesting.
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