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  1. Gary's a favourite of mine. He gets a boyfriend in the next book, and a saucepan. The combination of these two things means a great deal of humour. The second book is called " The Tainted Relic" It is finished and will be released after this one gets completed.
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 15

    Wylan, after his journey through the sand. The Little Saint, the Magi. This harkens back to the network of Magi implied when the Byzantine Envoy gave him the book that allowed him to understand what he was. There's an inherent respect that comes from those who understand what he is and he's earned his status as a wiseman. (It doesn't hurt that Wylan could bring the whole city down on their heads if they tried to kill him). I toyed with this, thought it through, and decided that Prince Ishan ibn Fadil Al'Kalijj would be more important than a conflict that was now over, and a crusader host that was leaving the holy lands. Allowing both sides to work together for his well-being. We joke about Assassin's Creed, but the Fida'i were a very real thing, right down to the red sashes they wore. They were also VERY active at the time of the First Crusade and through much of the Crusades.
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 15

    Good Morning
  4. The air in the place between waking and sleeping was utterly still, devoid of temperature, scent, or sound. Erik stood in the center of an endless expanse, a vast, liminal void where the sky above was a canopy of brilliant, diamond-hard stars, and the floor beneath his bare feet was a sheet of perfectly undisturbed black water. It was a mirror of the cosmos, infinite in every direction. He had been here before. He felt the familiarity of this quiet emptiness deep in the marrow of his bones.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    It's a fun genre. I've done three with this one now. And the setting is rich. I was raised on Louis Lamour and the like. My father would share them with me. One of the few fond memories.
  6. Ha, and you know Poitr was thinking this exact thought. well not just that exact thought:
  7. Poitr, in this chapter, proving he is just as much the main character.
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    there is a collision ahead, and something's got to give. If I recall, this was a song about Warren Beatty
  9. The Mercedes pulled up to the valet stand at 7:58 PM. The hotel was a monument to old Hollywood money—white marble, gold fixtures, a sweeping driveway that curved under a portico lit by crystal chandeliers. Palm trees lined the entrance, their fronds illuminated from below, casting long shadows across the red carpet. The valets were Elven teenagers in tailored black uniforms, their movements precise and unhurried, their faces blank with the particular boredom of the immortal serving the me
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    I am not sure what he would have done after he'd shot Acosta. The sense is that he feels damned and betrayed so I think him going after Ephraim next would have been logical. Alvarez's hollowing out after shooting what is essentially another boy like Devon, a friend of Jeb's (no matter how twisted up by the Barn thing) shows that through his bravado and his bluster/swagger, Alvarez isn't a cold blooded killer. Acosta just got lucky, a revolver/early automatic vs a Bolt action rifle at range was a massive disadvantage for Alvarez. It was only Alvarez's skill and the rapidity of fire by the Salvator-D pistol that saved Acosta's life there. He certainly owed Alvarez after that.
  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    The marshal doesn't buy Acosta's spin that Lemuel was a Mennonite for a second. The Marshal is far from a fool, one of Acosta's rifles doesn't just find it's way into a pacifist community's hands just to send one of their kids out to assassinate a banker. Something just ain't right here.
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Oh I agree with you. Devon is acting just as badly as Alvarez did in this moment. But then, that's human. They both reacted like children in this moment.
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    If Alvarez can overcome his petty jealousy and sulking.
  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    uggh I hate the name Lumuel, Lemuel, Lemial horrible name... and my autocorrect LOATHES it. Never, ever, EVER again. Serves him right to have his name mispelled on his tombstone.
  15. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Lumuel after being told he was manipulated by Ephraim, and they were being used by Acosta, vowed to get even.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    One down. Alvarez is an idiot, but then, so is Devon. The pair of them can't communicate properly, and react poorly
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 11

    Ch11 The note arrived on heavy, cream-colored paper, delivered by a boy in a pressed waistcoat who stood in the center of the Lemon Saloon and waited for a reply with the rigid, unblinking patience of a well-trained servant. Alvarez turned the card over in his long, elegant fingers, feeling the expensive weight of the cardstock. He read the precise, looping, elegant script twice before the true, suffocating meaning of the words fully settled into his chest. "Mister
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    My morning :
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Now it should be noted, that Godfrey is BUYING the Levant from Darien. The sheer amount of money that the Vanguard has at it's disposal once it returns to France is eye-watering. It is economy breaking if not managed very carefully. King Radoslav's Steward and Chancellors are going to have an absolute conniption fit when they realize what's coming. How do you say no to a lethal force of 1300 Vanguard, and 1000 D'avenel mercenaries landing in Southern France, with enough money to buy the entire country? Radoslav is sweating, and regretting the amount of times he screwed Darien over.
  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Reynaud has been hunting them, seen the fall out of two battles that Erik has fought in. 1. The desert camp with Lord Hugh and 2. The battle in the River town. Where there was a survivor.
  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 10

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