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Topher Lydon

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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    "What are your intentions with our little Ned?" "I swear I have no intentions with little Ned!" "So you just used him?" "I didn't say that, put down those jumper cables...Dios Mio! You Carter's are insane! And why is the short one vibrating like that... and purple?"
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Dear Gods NO ONE is that cruel.
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Definitely Andrew Carter... Definitely him... you don't make Andrew mad... nope... you step lightly around the Dark Sovereign and hope to God he doesn't wake up and notice you're there. Will is terrifying on a National scale, a man who wields immense power against nations and states. He'll just punch him a few times, politely, after explaining your error. Andrew, Andrew will find a nice quiet place to have a little chat... Probably at 40000' with the tail ramp down, and no parachute in sight. that boy has a very overprotective Step-Dad, and an Uncle that is a Cardinal Direction and takes on tanks. Yep, Ned may be a doofus, but he's part of a very efficient family of problem solvers.
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Yani's the one tying everyone together. From putting a submarine into the great lakes, to high end cappuccino machines. He finds his ways.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Peter's gonna kick his ass... ineffectually and with a lot of complaining, but we know the idea of doing it was there... He's going to put his yellow belt to good work... he's dangerous! His certificate says so.
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    It's always interesting thinking about which one will deal with him. West for touching Peter. Peter for threatening West. Or Brian who we all know is shipping the hell out of Peter and West.
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    A predator that has found something he wants. And now thinks he has found a way to get it.
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    The Next Chapter is Andrew and Yani's. And how to shatter the Dome of Silence
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    Haha, Enrico is NOT pleased with himself for it. Tequila, man, it does funny things to a person
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 4

    As always, you make me laugh right as I have my coffee. Resulting in coffee everywhere!
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 4

    You will come to learn that Will is inside of one. That is referred to as the Dome of Silence. Getting out of it is... difficult, but that's for the next Chapter to worry about. The next chapter is Andrew and Yani's. How to speak to Will
  13. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 5

    *** PLEASE NOTE *** Again, characters in this book are CHARACTERIZATIONS Certain political figures are exaggeration, or take theorized actions based on a fictitious set of circumstances Please keep commentary focused on the story and characterizations in it. Let's not give our Mods grey hairs. Good morning
  15. CHAPTER FIVE: THE COYOTE ON WALL STREET & THE FISHER OF RIDEAU Location: The Grill, Seagram Building, Midtown Manhattan. Time: 12:30 PM EST. Status: The Belly of the Beast. The air inside The Grill smelled of truffle oil, dry-aged beef, and the kind of money that didn’t just talk; it whispered commands that toppled governments. It was a cathedral of mid-century power, a space of Philip Johnson bronze and Mies van der Rohe lines, where the masters of the universe came to eat $400 lun
  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    He still does, yes, I admit sometimes I make mistakes. I do tend to go really fast with the text, so if I forgot to mention it it was probably because I was focused on the rest of the plot. It was a very... large pair of chapters put together into one. It is implied that a part of Garrett's pain was neuropathic and as his mood improved so did his ability to walk improve. If you note in the last few chapters it was Thump-Step rather than Tump-drag. Nothing magical, just the power of being happy in his life and in himself.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Tabby Katz, Orc Slayer!
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    They tend to be, but caution and fair use wins the day. As long as I don't name directly any living member of the family, and make sure they are used fictitiously, and since the name falls under the historical fact of a town... It is the same as using, say, the name Washington for characters. Nah I am being mindful and looked into it, and as long as I keep a firm line between fiction and fact, I should be fine.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Between Tabby and Alvin, Kenny and Steve, and now Garrett and Kyle, poor old Pastor Jensen's going to be busy.
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Oliver is honest to a fault, locked into a family where that is seen as a detriment. He's protecting his very fragile brother. And a keen foil for Lydia, who is impressed when people stand up to her.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Lydia, needs a date for her brother's wedding. Her target? Orel, the reclusive Merrick brother who catalogues graveyards and barely speaks. To get to him, she blackmails her mechanic cousin Finn into a double date with Orel's brother, the tightly-wound auditor Oliver. But Finn and Orel share a decade-old secret, a trauma orchestrated by the charming, predatory Eldest Merrick brother Tarquin. To stop Tarquin's rise, this unlikely alliance must weaponize their past against him—and in the process, reclaim the love stolen from them in a rotting barn, that drove one to the streets, the other to hide. A story of revenge, rust, and rebuilding on broken ground.
  23. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 4

    I can hear the Sylerikon weeping over their shattered, anachronism riddled time line now.
  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 4

    Which reminds me, there needs to be a 3-way brawl over who gets Hugo's hat... Thomas isn't letting go of it, and there 2.0 and 1.0 both have a claim.
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 12

    Thank you, now I know what I keep doing wrong Thanks.
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