Cachondeo
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Wow you should be a writer yourself! Such poetry!😍
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I think that Luc never truly saw Scott for who he really is but as an older version of Daniel.
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His father looked at him for a long time. “Tu as raison,” he said finally. “I’m proud of you.” He leaned over and kissed Luc’s cheek. “Je t’aime, mon fils,” he said, and smiled. Luc looked calmly into the pale blue eyes that were the mirror of his own, and smiled back. Should you care to fix it, Luc’s light “siberian” eyes were supposed to look like his mother’s, not his father’s.
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Boy oh boy, all this troubled and wounded souls... You convey all the heartache and shattered illusions so well; all those raw emotions depicted so vividly and deeply, it’s hard to read sometimes but ever so beautiful.
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Yeah, ultimatly I took a deep breath and read to the end; I did enjoyed it but still not a fan of fortuite violence by any means 😚
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That was a rollercoaster of emotions! But, 😅 at least he’s not dead. ** His bed had already seen us through three nights: one of passion, two of pain. Very beautifully put and such powerful stuff💜
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I...I just...men!
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Please stop, this is getting too messy🤭
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Oof...I seriously don’t like how this is going😬
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The Proxigean Spring Tide
Cachondeo commented on lomax61's story chapter in The Proxigean Spring Tide
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Wow that was both romantic and super creepy at the same time, quite the accomplishment 😅
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Sorry but what is this Thaw I keep reading about? another one of your great stories perhaps? Whatever it is I want to partake; if you recommend it, it must be worth reading. Please send me the link too. Cheers🤗!
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I know Mark is 25, but how old is Ross exactly? My guess is he’s somewhere between 33 and 36 but maybe I’m wrong...just curious 🤔
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Oh, stop, you do an awesome job!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Oh man, that was hilarious 😂 what I meant was for you to choose between “vous” or “tu” not to include BOTH!!! I’m sorry maybe I should have explained myself better...if you are going for a more casual approach between the characters the dialogue should read as follows: -Parles-tu français? -Oui, et toi? -Oui, je parle français mais probablement pas aussi bien que toi. or, if you wanted to keep the formalities: -Parlez-vous français? -Oui, et vous? -Oui, je parles français mais probablement pas aussi bien que vous. I’m really sorry for the confusion, honestly 😬 P. S.: as quiet as it’s been kept, Google translator is not to be trusted.
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“Oui. Avez-vous? I replied, normally. That made him look up and blink. Oui. Je parle français. Mais probablement pas aussi bon que vous. ” That bit in French was not grammatically correct. It should read: ”Oui, et vous/toi? Oui, je parle français mais probablement pas aussi bien que vous/toi.” ...and since they are calling each other Chris and Greg maybe you should drop the“vous” and use “toi” instead, otherwise it would be too formal; unless that’s what you’re aiming for?. Anyway I’m done channeling my inner teacher, but just in case you want to change it, there you have it. Cheers!
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So last tango in Paris!
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But in the gym or the pool where you get naked before or after to take a shower there’s no place to hide...did you ever get in trouble or did you just avoid those kind of situations?👀
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That makes me sad because I thought the reason behind that rule was not to clog the site and being a binge reader my self I loath (ok too strong 😚) waiting for the next chapter...I’m becoming more flexible depending on the author; some are worth waiting for😉
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“Very,” Greg replied, right behind me. He set his one of his hands next to mine, the other on my shoulder, tightening a little when I leaned further down. "Stop that, please.".. A little typo if you care to fix it, there’s a HIS too many; if should read: “...he set one of his hands next to mine...” Hope it helps😘
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Yeah I thought the same; if it were me I would probably feel unconfortable just being in the same room-unsafe even...but it’s fictional so we can make some allowances 😉
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My own fault, should have read the tags which I never do🤓
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Well, certainly not my cup of tea; not really into violence: sharp tong yes, physical abuse...don’t really know why since I’ve never been nor have I witness abuse but it makes me queasy (not a critique just a personal observation, mind you) but I’ll give it a couple more chapters it being your story and all that. Absolutely love your stuff just not quite this bit here😔
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I got a little confused with Gregory’s eye color😅 ”...staring back at me. The look in his light broken eyes was inscrutable.” “Gregory had, like both his brothers, inherited his mothers’ complexion, with the golden skin from her Greek side and dark blue eyes.” Sooo, which is it: dark blue o light brown? If it’s all the same to you could you make them light brown? I really love those ❤️ Veeery nice reading so far, then again you never disappoint 😘
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Oki doki, you go and replenish yourself with all those much needed inspirational fluids and in the meantime I’ll try to talk to the muses on your behalf ☺️
