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  1. Cachondeo

    Chapter XI

    Well, certainly not my cup of tea; not really into violence: sharp tong yes, physical abuse...don’t really know why since I’ve never been nor have I witness abuse but it makes me queasy (not a critique just a personal observation, mind you) but I’ll give it a couple more chapters it being your story and all that. Absolutely love your stuff just not quite this bit here😔
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    Chapter VIII

    I got a little confused with Gregory’s eye color😅 ”...staring back at me. The look in his light broken eyes was inscrutable.” “Gregory had, like both his brothers, inherited his mothers’ complexion, with the golden skin from her Greek side and dark blue eyes.” Sooo, which is it: dark blue o light brown? If it’s all the same to you could you make them light brown? I really love those ❤️ Veeery nice reading so far, then again you never disappoint 😘
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    Chapter 24

    Oki doki, you go and replenish yourself with all those much needed inspirational fluids and in the meantime I’ll try to talk to the muses on your behalf ☺️
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    Chapter 24

    Hey Andr0gene, any plans to pick where you left off? I really love this story (ok, so maybe I love Confounded I a tiny weeny bit more but lets get real T has to be one if not the best character in all GA) but I was truly enjoying it... Pretty please?! 🙏🏻🙏🏻
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    The Letter

    “What was the point? He should have died years ago, many times over. Why continue to struggle? Rick was gone, everything was gone, there would soon be nothing left.” ...boy, that was hard to read! The way you can capture all those feelings of despair depression and utter defeat is almost unsettling😳 Love your work💖
  6. One of favorite stories on this site, fourth time rereading it☺️
  7. I have read the Malaise, twice in fact😉 and I already am one of your followers (sounds like a cult) so I’ll be waiting patiently in the shadows for an update 😘 Best of luck with your renovation!
  8. Candy’s has to be the longest pregnancy in human history 🤣; I’ might even start feeling sorry for the conniving b*tch... I found this story very enjoyable, I hope you pick it up soon. Cheers!
  9. Cachondeo

    Chapter 43

    Seemed a bit rushed...
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    Man Crush Saga

    My favorite quote: “You thirsty-ass bitches need to quit tryin’ to make it rain on White Bread,” Martinez said in a rather decent impression of Elle Porcine. “Y’all know Lothario’s gonna lose his shit and kill one of you fuckers.” OMG😅😂🤣
  11. “I would greatly appreciate it if you would kindly put your dick in my ass, Mr. Norman.” That one killed me😂
  12. That was hard to read...what Eddie told Rory made me gulp to fight the tide of emotions 🤧 Powerful stuff, superb writting You are missed Dom
  13. Cachondeo

    Chapter 5

    “Joseph Aaron Carpenter, age 17. Town whore, cock sucker and outcast of Southwestern High School. Joey will be remembered for being sexually abused by an uncle at the age of 11, and then being physically and mentally abused by an alcoholic father until the day he took a flying leap off the Washington Street Bridge. He will be remembered by nobody. Due to lack of interest, a memorial service has been cancelled.“ Ouch, just ouch😫 Very well written!
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    Chapter 1

    I could have sworn that was the same hormonal infused tirade Jamie told Andrew🧐; plus Jamie’s pregnancy lasted only five months, lucky bastard!
  15. Cachondeo

    Chapter 25

    Neither do I🙁...
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    Chapter 15

    Gosh no, is precisely all the tiny details, quirks and thorough descriptions that make a story enjoyable, multilayered, colorful and endearing; in the end is not the tale it self but the telling that matter the most😊 Good work!
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    Girl Bait

    Now where is that pitchfork, eh?! I need chapter 8 and 9 and... ¡Vamos, vamos a publicar más capítulos 😜!
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    Wild Card

    Please please please update!!! This story is so great, love it! Plus in most stories I read when some passages get too descriptive I tend to skip a lot but withYOU IS AN EFFING FEST👍🏻
  19. Yaaaaaasss I’ve been shipping those two so hard! I hope it sticks. Love love your writing😘
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    Chapter 1

    Luv all the self mumbling (I do that too lol!) and overall just cute. Fudge Kevin, gimme some Doug 😊!
  21. Agh...please go on, pretty please!!!
  22. I enjoyed it very much, though I still don't understand how in Carol's eyes she was saving her son by setting him on fire...?🤔
  23. Yass! So glad you continue posting, I love this story 😍
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    Chapter 18

    I guess something came "up" 😉
  25. When Bay met Daniel, he was 18 and Robochef 25 or 26 (I assumed the Z brothers were the same age) but then Zupan was almos 30 (29) and 32 after meeting the parents while Bay remained 18...I´ m confused Loved the story!!!
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