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Sunday - I got a weird spam email from Lee's email today. Just some 'click the link' commercial bullshit that the whole world would be better off without. I guess some virus or something sent it to me from his email address. The strange thing is...when I just saw his name in my inbox, with 'Hi! :)' in the subject line....I don't know...I felt kinda weird about the whole thing. I was almost afraid to open it, to be honest. But too excited to help myself. Instant visions of him laying on top o
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"Justin?" It was the concern in Taryn's voice that alerted me to the fact that I had just been sitting on our mattress without speaking. Just staring at the floor....lost in a daze. "Sorry. I'm...I'm just thinking..." "Are you sure?" He moved up behind me to rub my back a few times, then gently placed his chin on my shoulder. I gave him a kiss on the cheek and tried to work up a somewhat decent smile. "I'm sure. We're fine, ok?" "We?" "Huh?" "You said 'we', again. Who's 'we'?" "Did I?" I
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https://www.gayauthors.org/story/Comicality/thesecretlifeofbillychase6/32 Bon apetit...
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Saturday - I talked to my dad tonight. It was a truly bizarre experience this time around. Awkward was hardly the word for it. I mean, I was thinking of calling him anyway, but my mom reminded me regardless. She always gets this...'restricted' look on her face when she talks about him. I know she thinks that I don't notice, but I totally do. Every single time. It's like...in the back of her mind she's calling him a family deserting bastard...but she doesn't want me to hear it. Like she's tr
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Valentine's Day Is Coming...... >:)
Comicality replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Hehehe, trust me...there will be MORE next week! And the next week! And the next week...and..... -
Valentine's Day Is Coming...... >:)
Comicality replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Voy is what screwed up the plans, because some security measure keeps detecting me as spam on my own board, and I can't turn it off. SUCKS! But the show must go on regardless... So check the announcements above! The new stories are waiting for you! -
"On The Outside 15" I found it extremely hard to keep my hands to myself as we took a bus towards Drew's house. I mean...I tried, but my fingers kept finding their way over to the fabric of his shirt, or crawling down his arm to graze the skin on the back of his hand...and occasionally, when I thought no one was looking...I'd let my palm rest lightly on his upper thigh. I think Drew thought it was cute, me being so anxious. I could tell from his bashful little giggles and the pinkish color
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"A Class By Himself 21" The drive home.... It was probably the scariest, most disturbing, twenty minutes of silence that I had ever experienced before! I had *NO* idea what to do with this trembling sensation in my chest at ALL! My mom was so heated at the moment, both of her hands gripping the steering wheel with a vengeance, her frustrated eagle eyes focused on the scrolling asphalt in front of us...that I found it difficult to even CREATE a short string of words that would ease the te
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"Kiss Of An Angel 10" Every step was measured, taken, and appreciated with my whole heart. Hehehe, I had to bite my bottom lip soooo hard to keep from giggling out loud. Just feeling the tender touch of his fingers wrapped lightly around my wrist...guiding me forward with the slightest of pulls...it made my whole body feel like a shaken up soda from the fridge. I think I was literally dizzy with the idea of this actually happening right now. I'm surprised that I didn't run smack into one of
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"New Kid In School 47" I had the most sickening feeling in my stomach as I stubbornly marched out of those front doors. Leaving the high school behind me just minutes before one of my biggest final exams....how the hell was I going to explain this? I can't just take an 'F' grade on the biggest test of the semester! It's already Spring Break next week! Do you know how much WORK I'd have to put in to pull my grades up by the end of the school year??? How many miracles I'd have to perform to a
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Valentine's Day Is Coming...... >:)
Comicality posted a topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
And Comsie will have a nice little box of chocolates for Tuesday night! What? I can't help it! I'm a romantic! So be sure to check back here Valentine's Day Night! I'll make it worth your while! ::Evil Laugh:: -
Friday - I make mistakes. Tons of mistakes. Sometimes I make mistakes by taking risks that I shouldn't have. Sometimes I make mistakes by NOT taking risks that I should have. But either way...it's like I just keep losing out either way. But at any cost, I'm trying not to let it depress me too much. I have to admit though....sometimes it feels like everybody else has 'life' all figured out. Everybody but me. And I just...I find it hard to find the energy to complain anymore. Sometimes we're
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Thursday - I had a dream this morning that got me so hot and bothered that I couldn't go back to sleep. It only woke me up like 30 minutes before my alarm was about to go off anyway...but I would have much rather spent that time in bed. Sighhh...you know, I'm trying really really hard to leave the whole Sam situation alone. I don't understand why my body wants him so bad. I mean...to the point where I feel myself losing my common sense along with my self control. I honestly want it to stop n
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Wedesday - You know what? I think I'd make one heck of a big brother if I had to! Hehehe, I mean, I know it sounds strange for me to write that out of the blue like that...but it's true. I'm like...still grinning. Hehehe! Ok, I should explain... I was actually caught a little off guard when I saw Trace this morning. Pleasantly so. He was wearing this really cute black shirt that was tie-dyed all these different colors, and his hair was looking all sweet and perfect...it's weird how much I c
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Tuesday - It's funny how certain patterns can emerge from events that seem totally random sometimes. And how that pattern can just...make you feel like a crummy person inside in the long run. It should have been a good day, but something about what I did just makes me feel bad. I don't like feeling bad. Not if I can help it. Believe it or not, the 'bad' part of my day started off with a random comment from Jamie Cross. Heh...I believe that's the first time I've EVER associated the name Jamie
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"Feels Like Falling" By Jay Gordon http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/highschool/feels-like-falling/ You know, this is one of those really awesome surprises that you just happen to stumble over at Nifty and it leaves you really impressed. I still have more reading to do before I'm caught up to the current chapter, but I have to admit that I'm truly 'charmed' by what I've read so far in the series. The story follows the trials of main character, Paul, who made the mistake of developing a crush on a boy named Billy who lives down the street from him in the same neighborhood. A situation that led to Paul being outed to the whole school. However, in a rather clever turn of events...Billy is not the heartless bully that I expected him to be. Where I expected the story to follow the usual linear 'bully tries to break a boy's spirit, but he finds love elsewhere and rises above it' plot...it actually works to create a series of relationships that are MUCH more complex. And therefore much more interesting. As the chapters move forward, you learn more and more about what happened between these two boys, and then return to the present day to see how that conflict has evolved into something much different. The reasons and motivations behind Billy's harsh treatment end up inspiring a feeling of sympathy, and I didn't expect that at all. Meanwhile, there are other well written additions to this story as well, all going on at once. I'm especially interested in the 'Jim' character, who adds a very cute and realistic element to the plot, and it pulls you in as he seems to be the sweetest mystery in all this. Something about the story makes you feel as though you're more than just a spectator to what's going on. You feel just as conflicted, embarrassed, and infatuated as Paul does. Something that always makes a story more enjoyable in my opinion. So kudos to Jay Gordon for really bringing that personal involvement across in his writing. I won't give away any spoilers here, but I can tell you that you will be hooked by the end of the second chapter. They are the kind of characters that stick with you, and the relationships between them feel genuine. Not forced, or 'convenient'. They are all truly believably in action and dialogue. Now, in the beginning, I was a little intimidated by the introduction of the characters. I think because I was trying to remember all of the names and who they were, and was worried that I would get mixed up as to who was who later on. But that could just be me. Also, there are flashbacks in the story, which are awesome because you get to see the history of Billy and Paul unfold little by little. But I'm not a fan of the actual words 'flashback' being put into the text. It can be difficult to cue a flashback or break away from the story to let the reader 'know' that it's a flashback...but it can still be a bit distracting. I wish I had a suggestion as to how get around that, but it's a little thing. So it's up to the author if he wants to change it or not. Also, and I've been guilty of this myself in the past, so I've toned it down a lot over the last few years...but I think the author went a little overboard with the exclamation marks at the end of certain pieces of dialogue. Like, to introduce someone as a friend, or a simple joke being told. It wasn't really distracting, but I noticed. Like I said, it's mostly because I had to learn not to do that so much myself when I write. So my eyes catch it when I see it. Other than that, I am truly impressed with this story, and I want to read more of it! If you're looking for a story with heart and believable characters and an interesting and emotionally complex plot that steps outside of the predictable norm..."Feels Like Falling" might be one gem that you'll enjoy! So check it out, and let the author know what you think. I added the link to his series at Nifty, because he claims that this series is written 'live' (Meaning that it is completely unedited until he sends it out to Nifty or elsewhere), and I figured I'd post the edited version. But this story and his others can be found on his website, http://jaygordonstories.com so stop by!
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"Jesse-101" Returns To The Shack....
Comicality replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Hehehe....can't say yet. ::Whistles innocently:: Let's just say that Comsie has 'plans'..... -
Comicality Story Review 1/28
Comicality replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
Really, because I saw it fine on the Chat Shack link. I'll let LemonFresh know...
