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I know that she told me that she was going to be alright. And I really should believe her. But...that sickening feeling of 'threat' wouldn't leave me alone. Even on the way to Brody's house, my magic, my miracle....my mind was haunted with visions of my Mom being hurt by the 'beast' that awaits her in that darkened bedroom. I imagined him giving her the same treatment that he gave me when I had really pushed his temper over the edge. I thought about her in pain, calling out for help...and me not
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It was almost as if I had ceased to pay attention to anything else in existence...except for the soothing sensation of having Brody lovingly run his fingertips through the strands of my air. Over and over again. I had hugged myself around his right leg, my pants still slippery with the explosion I had just released from putting my mouth on Brody for the first time. My heart still beating hard inside of my chest. My body still spasming with the tingles and aftershocks of orgasm. It was quite
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That night, I believe I had slept on my shoulder in an awkward position, because when I woke up, it hurt even worse than before. I mean it really ached with this sharp misery in the center of my arm. When I rolled out of bed, I immediately reached for my sling and put it on. It only gave me 'minimal' comfort from the pain, but minimal was better than nothing I suppose. I looked at my hair in the mirror, ruffled and twisted in the most comical way. And for just a moment or two, I thought about Br
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My mind seemed to tie itself into an impossibly tight knot that evening. I finished making dinner with about twenty minutes leftover to set the table and all. My mom was in a cheerful mood, and my dad had washed and dried all of the bedroom sheets before she got back. So I guess he got away with spending time with his 'visitor' this afternoon. Still...while I tried my hardest to smile along with my mom and enjoy dinner with him sitting across the table from me...all I could think about was my fi
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Waking up today was like a surreal experience. I think that I was dreaming about Brody last night, because I was literally smiling before I even opened my eyes. And my whole world seemed to just feel bright and unimaginably.....'good'. I remember rolling over in my bed, and bringing my fingertips to my lips...feeling the invisible spot where Brody had kissed me. Wishing that he'd repeat it again soon. The weekend was still four days away, and 96 hours never seemed so infinite to me as they did a
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Joy. Complete, and total, and utterly blissful joy. There was no other way to truly even BEGIN to describe what I was experiencing in my life since yesterday...the afternoon that I spent in Brody's arms. Sometimes I'll just think about it, and I'll begin to shake to the point where I have to reach out and hold on to something to keep from falling over. It's like my body was so overwhelmed with love and excitement that I was physically dizzy from the sensation. My body has never been so
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I woke up that Saturday morning to the sounds of my mom vaccuming the hallway outside of my room. I was hearing the noise almost a full minute before I became really conscious of it, the soft buzz of the machine was almost hypnotic as it pulled me from my sleep. I allowed my eyes to open and let the light of day pour in, and believe it or not my very first thoughts were of Brody. It caused a rush of emotion to wash over me, bathing me in a warmth that the sheets on my bed couldn't provide. Out o
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Even after a long night of sleep, my body was still twisted and aching from the severe beating I had taken a full two days before. It felt as though my ribs were bruised and broken, a burning sensation shooting through me every time I took a breath that exceeded normal lung capacity, which seemed to be every two minutes. Dried tears from when I went to sleep still stained my face, their salty streaks forming a painful decoration to display the horror of my life as a teenager in an abusive home.
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It was usually such a short and uneventful walk. The brief trip from the store back to Adam's house. But this was different. With Brody beside me, slowly walking his bike next to me, his animated little gestures and sweet voice pouring into me with every word he spoke...he made everything so much cooler. And the strange thing was, that I felt myself blushing around him the entire time. It just sort of 'happened' all by itself, and I couldn't stop it. I couldn't stop watching him, or smiling at h
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Did the paralyzing fear leave me? Not by a long shot. In fact, after being 'saved' the night before by having my mother come home before facing the terror that lay waiting ahead of me...you would have thought that my sigh of relief would be genuine. It wasn't. If anything, I was even MORE terrified than usual, because I knew that my father's retaliation would NOT be avoided for long. And me paying the price for my disobedience was simply being delayed until a later time when he'd have an opportu
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Every day after school, young Zack runs home after his last class, hoping to avoid his abusive father's rage and avoid anymore physical and emotional bruises at home. It isn't until he meets a beautiful stranger at school that he begins to wonder whether or not he's worth anything at all. Can he live in one world and fantasize about the other? Or will he have to choose?
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My head ached in misery the next morning. Not just an 'emotional' ache, but actual physical pain. My eyes hurt, my stomach hurt, the muscles in my face hurt. Everything was contaminated with this incredible amount of sullen misery that refused to go away. I was still dressed from last night, still wearing my new sling with my arm half out of it. And my mom was sleeping peacefully beside me, her arm wrapped around me in a warm embrace. She had stayed there with me the whole night, some of her lip
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As soon as the final bell rang at school, maybe even a few seconds before that, I felt my pulse racing. I anticipated the release from my class, and knew that it was time for me to go. Quickly and efficiently, without running into any distractions. Most of the kids could hardly get a, "See you later, Zack!" out of their mouths before I was already out of earshot. I learned to make a habit of carrying my jacket and all of my books with me to my last class so that I wouldn't have to spend even mor
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A short Eddie Furlong story.
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I suppose I could have followed him through the halls that day. I suppose I could have waited for him outside after school. Who knows? But there was was this tiny bolt of lightning inside of me, this razor sharp dagger of doubt sticking out of my chest, that kept me from persuing the issue at all that day. Something made me freeze up, and scared me away from finding out what I could have done to make Colin change his mood around me all so suddenly. Everything was going great, what happened?
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I kiss him. Sure. I kiss him all the time. But you wanna know what the drastic change in our relationship is? The fact that it's not HIM I'm kissing at all these days. It was the sweet lips of the boy that I had met just a few days ago that filled my senses. Joey just happened to be in the way while I was giving them out. Geez. Not even a week, and I'm already searching for that boy in the hallways and thinking about him when I wake up in the morning. It's this strong burning sensation on the in
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I kiss him. Sure. All the time. I like his lips. The way his tongue is still so afraid to enter my mouth when he knows I'd be more than happy to have it there. The way he gently sucks at me during every adored embrace of our lips. I love the way his hands tremble nervously as they slide up and down my backside. I love the way he becomes breathless every time I smile in his direction. I love the excitement that I inspire inside of him with little to no effort. It makes me feel like a young playbo
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Russ was blessed with the gift of beauty. The kind of beauty that causes witnesses to stare in awe and fall into an immediate state of infatuation. And while he doesn't have much trouble finding boys who would give anything to be with him...Russ is missing that same desire in his own life. He wants more. He wants the chills, the thrills, the longing...is it possible that it simply isn't out there? Or will someone come along...and finally give him the thrill he's been searching for?
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He never really had to do much of anything to arouse me. The simplest gesture or sly smile and I would fall into a lustful trance. His name was Greg and he was my tutor for algebra class. That was the one class that I never understood. If you ask me, numbers are for math, letters are for English, and the two should never cross paths! Who invented this torturous thing called algebra anyway? I always imagined some asshole geek without a date on a Saturday night, sitting at home and trying to come
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Adam is having trouble in algebra, so Greg is his tutor. Adam falls for Greg. That is, until he meets Casey, Greg's younger brother.
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"Left Without Words 3" I didn't sleep very well that night. In fact, my overwhelming anxiety concerning this morning kept waking me up all through the night. Almost as if I was deathly afraid of missing my chance to see Deme again by doing something horrendously stupid like sleeping through the ring of my morning alarm. It would just be my luck, you know? Believe it or not, I woke up eleven minutes before my alarm was about to go off, and decided to just stay awake. No need to tempt Murph
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"Left Without Words 2" I could hardly sleep that night. There was this huge rush of unstoppable 'puppy love' energy that surged through me all night long. The kind of renegade energy that envelops your every thought, every dream, every breath, until it exhausts your every ability to fight it off with any level of rational thought or common sense. I was literally up almost an entire half hour before my alarm clock went off. On a SUNDAY, no less! The only reason I set it at all was because
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"Left Without Words" To think...I was actually a bit upset when my mom told me to run out to the Greek carry-out place down the street to pick up some lunch for us that weekend. Me, my mom, and my little sister. Milo's was the name of the place, and they really did have some of the best food in town as far as I was concerned. The kind of food that tastes so good that you keep eating even after you're full enough to burst. The flavor was enough to make you smile on a rainy day. Every time m
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Have you ever been so crushed under the weight of an instant attraction, that it was hard to breathe? Do you remember what it was like to want someone so badly, that it threw you into fits of abnormal behavior that you couldn't seem to control? Shane is just now experiencing this awkward agony for the first time, when he lays eyes on Dimitry, the grandson of the owner of a nearby authentic Greek restaurant. Will he ever gain the courage to speak to him face to face?
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I woke up like...25 minutes before my alarm went off today. I dunno, my eyes just opened up all by themselves, and the sun was all...'shiny'! Hehehe! I was actually fully energized today! So getting up was no problem at all. I hopped out of bed, and put on my fuzzy slippers, and just started getting ready for school. I know it's only gonna be boring old reviews for our finals this week, but...just getting the chance to walk to and from school with the dreamiest boy EVER at my side made this
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