Comicality

Alright, ladies and gentlemen... we've all got a Halloween weekend to celebrate! So let's have some fun together, shall we? Festivities start tomorrow night! Seeya soon!

LMAO!!! Omigod! I remember these!!! XD Well, I mean, they came out in 1966 so I wasn't even born yet! But I remember the old cartoons used to come on at lunchtime, and my babysitter would put them on while I was eating hot dogs and potato chips! (D'awwww...little Comsie!) ::Waves:: Hi, Stan Lee! Miss you! I know the new movie is gonna make him all 'cool' and stuff, but I hope they keep Namor just a little bit corny! Hahaha! He was always so goofy! It was part of his charm, I guess. Deadly and extremely ruthless for a Marvel super hero...but he was just such an asshole! And I wanna see Ironheart too! She's awesome! You just brought CHICAGO into WAKANDA??? Come get some!!!

LOL! Well THAT'S a pretty low bar to jump over!

HAHAHAHA!!!! WTF???? Ummm...OK!!! LMAO!!! I'll be there! I'll bring whiskey!

Little Georgie! Nooooo!

I've tried it a few times, actually. Haven't regretted a single one of them, to be totally honest. Have I been hurt before? Of course. And I've minimized that a lot as I've gotten older by not being so head over heels for the boys I've chosen to really and truly love. I mean, I'm like, "Here!!! Here's my heart! You can have it! Just love me back, and it's yours forever!" Unfortunately...it isn't always that easy. And I keep trying to convincing myself that I'm done with love, and that maybe it's just not one of those joys in life that I was ever meant to have. And that sucks, believe me. But...sooner or later, another angel will come into my life, and I'll hold off and try my best to hide my feelings for as long as I can until I'm really SURE that this is somebody that will return the love that I have to give them. And, at some point, I'll be dancing on air again. I mean, what am I going to do? Purposely deprive myself of love and joy forever? That's just ridiculous. I don't want anyone to think that I'm reckless with my heart...but if I really FEEL something somebody else to the point where I can even type the words, "I love you" on a computer screen...then it's real. And I'll give everything that I have to make them happy. Always. I've got no problem promising forever to someone else. Heh...and one of these days, they'll promise me back. As for right now though? No such luck. I came really REALLY close, once or twice, though. Close enough to know it's possible. But...with no risk, there's no reward. So I'll keep trying until I get it right.

Uhhhh...uh oh. That's not good! I mean, Thanos was BAD...but Kang The Conqueror is infinitely a lot worse! And you sent in Ant Man??? Yeah, this won't end well...

https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/picturemeandyou A brand new chapter is now up for Kevin and Rory! So rush on over and check it out, and let me know what you think whenever you get a chance! Cool? And a huge HUGE thanks to those of you who were able to make a few donations to the https://paypal.me/Comsie account! It really helps me out like you wouldn't believe, and it makes all of this effort worthwhile! Love you lots! I couldn't do this without your help! ((Hugz)) Take care! And I'll seezya soon!

"Picture Me And You 16" Was I pacing? Like...physically pacing? I felt like I should be super thrilled about all of this, but I felt more nervous than ever. In fact, if I wasn’t careful about the way I was shaking and shivering in my own skin...I was going to make myself sick from the inner turbulence. I was sooooo uncomfortable at that moment! I mean, I wanted Rory. Words can’t even express how much I craved being alone with him and being able to snuggle and kiss and caress one

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The Naughty Audience Hehehe, it was the loving folks here at GayAuthors that first turned me on to the term, PWP! Meaning, quite simply...’Porn Without Plot’! Now, before anybody starts blushing and feeling guilty about anything, let me just say that I actually love the occasional stroll down the old ‘quickie’ lane from time to time. There’s absolutely nothing wrong with reading it, and there’s certainly nothing wrong with writing it either. So relax. We’re throwing any perceived judgment right out the window before we even get started on this one. K? Jump right in, get cozy, and let’s talk about the more carnal side of writing online erotica. Basically...we all have fantasies. Having a horny moment, or many many horny moments, in a single day is fun and can be really satisfying when you find something extremely HOT online that seems to pull all the right strings and stroke all the right levers. Hehehe, it’s ok. Sometimes that’s what we’re all looking for. How many times have you been really turned on and gotten all hot and bothered by something you saw in a movie or on TV, or maybe a cute delivery guy, or a classmate in the locker room, or just a random interaction with a person that you simply can’t stop thinking about, no matter how hard you try...and decided to engage yourself in an extended love series? Be honest! Who’s thinking, “Man, he was so gorgeous! I’m going to read a long story with great dialogue, character development, an awesome plot, and a main character that I can really relate to as he tries to navigate his way around love?” Is that what you were you thinking in that moment? Or...were you thinking, “Oh God! I’m so fucking HARD right now! I need to rub one out before my roommate gets home and ruins my need for an explosive release?” Hehehe, think about it. And then take a few minutes, and then come back and finish this article. (Wash your hands first!) See, the thing about PWP is that not beneath any of us to write it. If anything, I think a truly gifted author could probably write it better than most. It’s not all that different than the more extensive and elaborate work that you’ve put out there to showcase your literary skill...the ‘focus’ is just different. The gratification is more instantaneous. You’re not pouring a whole lot of heart and emotion into setting up a future or giving your readers a sense of their history together. That’s not the objective here. The idea is to get to the point and bring this particular audience a sense of relief from the sexual frustration that they might be feeling in that particular moment. The last thing you want to do is diddle around with extra meanings and plot points that they have to engage themselves in and remember or mull over...all while losing the erection that they came in here with. Hehehe, don’t do that. That’s just plain rude! No. This is going to be one of those ‘strike while the iron is hot’ moments in your writing, and you need to get to the point. Save your details and metaphors for the sexual descriptions that you plan on using to enrich a simple lustful encounter and turn it into something significantly memorable. The kind of story that they may save and come back to again the next time they feel the urge to get a quick splash and return to life without getting too involved in the life and times of a character that might be an amazing person, inside and out...but was just servicing a deep craving in that one instant. GRAB that audience while they’re still frustrated! Don’t let them calm down. If you go too far into a typical ‘story writing’ mode in the beginning of this kind of exercise...a lot of readers will back out and go read somebody else. As always...the backspace button is not your friend! For any author writing alongside a bunch of other authors...it’s actually your worst enemy. So get them to stay away from it at all costs. Reading this...you may think that I’m suggesting that you somehow tone down your writing ability or sacrifice a piece of yourself and your talent for the sake of getting some sexy attention from a larger crowd. I’m not. You can still create an amazing experience between two loving individuals who really do care about one another in the long run. You can even begin a longer running series from trying out projects like this. But, like I said, the focus is just different. It’s potent and it’s visceral...and you need to introduce it into your story early enough to at least offer the promise of a really hot interlude between the boys involved. You can do that effectively without being vulgar, or unrealistic, or rushing into anything that seems unnatural. All you’re doing is adapting your already exceptional talents to a new formula and allowing yourself to stand out in a new arena. It’s a playground that you’ve never been in before...so show them what you’ve got. If you think this isn’t possible to have your cake and eat it too...I guarantee you that it isn’t. As a matter of fact, the first gay teen erotic story that I ever wrote, “New Kid In School” (https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/newkidinschool), is a PWP story. It was only meant to be one chapter long in the beginning, and a very short chapter at that. But make no mistake...that was a PWP story. Go back and read it again, and you’ll be able to see it easily. The whole thing could have ended right there, and that would have been it. It was born out of my own sexual frustration, and the fact that I had pretty much depleted my supply of new stuff on Nifty at the time, so I decided to write the kind of story that I would want to see myself and relieve some stress at the end of the day. It has SOME story attached to it, but nothing that was meant to set up the huge series that it is now. Not by a long shot. It just happened to be a lucky blossom that grew out of what was originally intended to be a ‘jack off’ story. It’s true. So was “A Class By Himself”. (https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/aclassbyhimself) And a bunch of other smaller stories that I wrote when I started. Granted, the atmosphere surrounding online erotica at that time was a lot different than it is now, and I mostly cherish stories that have more depth and story to them so I can be touched in ways that go beyond an emergency sexual release. But that doesn’t mean that PWP is a thing of the past. Are you kidding me? Whenever I’m feeling a bit ‘frisky’, I don’t go looking for romance and warm fuzzy feelings from a well written fiction. I grab something quick that’s willing to quickly grab me in return! Hehehe, and there will always be a place for that. I’d almost be willing to say that you could attract a much larger fanbase with a few quick one shot stories where the sex is fast and furious and to the point than you can with a mind-blowing series that challenges readers on an intellectual and emotional level. So don’t be afraid to get a few naughty thoughts in your head and just type them out to present them to a wide audience and see if they enjoy it or not. That being said, I understand that it can be a little bit embarrassing sometimes to share some of your fantasies with an online community of strangers. Trust me, I get it. And if you have trouble with the PWP practice...feel free to take your time to get used to it first before tackling it head on. Or...don’t tackle it at all. I would never tell any of you guys to write something that you’re uncomfortable with. But, if you ever want to give it a try...just to see what happens...to promote some of your deeper, more engaging work...or just to relieve a bit of stress of your own… the rules are very simple. - Limit your details. Don’t draw things out for longer than you need to. One boy is hot, the other boy is hot, they have a place to go get into some devilment with one another...that’s it. This one’s blond, the other one’s a red head, slap an age on there if it matters, maybe a few sentences as to how they met or why they decided to get together...and then get on with it. Remember...you’ve got a reader scrolling with one hand while the other one is busy. He’s holding it right NOW! Hehehe! Let that excite you, and do what you can to excite him in return. Don’t waste that stiffy on describing the bed sheets and the curtains and the main character’s history with his mother. Focus. The thing about PWP...you know what they came for, and you know you can provide it with your story. So what’s with the mind games? - You don’t have to be crass or vulgar or overly explicit when writing this kind of story. I know that some people do really get off on a more blunt approach to the subject matter, but if that’s not your thing as a writer...don’t think that you have to do it order to fit in to the genre. You can write your story, your way, and it will come off just as beautiful as you want it to. Again...the only thing that’s different here is the actual ‘focus’. In your mind, the story might still be 150 pages long with witty dialogue and character growth and plot twists, etc. But what you’re writing is just surrounding the impulsive cravings of sex. It’s all about pleasure and reward. Put yourself in that particular frame of mind, and use that as your anchor and don’t wander away from it. Take an intimate snapshot of that one moment in time and give it all the electricity and vibrant color that you can. - Use all five senses during the sex. If you’re going to write a sex story, this isn’t the time to shy away from or gloss over the explicit details of what’s going on here. In a longer story or series, it’s perfectly fine to simply allude to certain forms of activity or cut them short for ‘politeness’ sake. Let me make one thing clear, k? Hehehe...the PWP circuit is NOT a shy guy’s game! Readers want to know the feel of flesh on flesh, the taste of warm juices, the tightness of a constricted hole being offered up for your pleasure. If you’re going to do this, then go all out. We want to feel it. Explore the most intimate and most secretive parts of yourself, and toss them out there to the hungry wolves like pieces of meat. With PWP, the graphic sexual interaction is all you have to get your audience invested in it. So...you know...go hard or go home. Hehehe...or go home hard! Whatever! - Prolong the intimacy, but don’t give your reader’s blue balls if you can help it. Once your audience is invested in the act of pleasuring themselves...they don’t want you to just toss them a sentence and say, “And then he came!” and leave them hanging! Hahaha! Again, RUDE! A true PWP story should be so intense and so sexually invigorating, tha your readers should be having trouble holding out until the very end of it. Push them, tease them, edge them ever closer...but take your time and truly make it an erotic experience. They should explode so hard that they have to worry whether or not JESUS is watching! LOL! At the same time...you don’t want to make it an excruciating experience for them either. At some point, you’re going to have to release your control over their passions and let them catch their breath. So let’s not overdo it. But don’t ever cut them short either. Practice will teach you the delicate balance between the two. Cool? Alright, ladies and gentlemen...that’s my PWP article, and I hope that it helps you guys out with your writing. First of all...a short PWP story can very quickly gather a lot of attention and might greatly increase your fanbase as that is exactly what people are looking for when they look up ‘gay sex stories’ online. And they might just follow those stories back to some of your other stuff and find even deeper stories and become long time fans because of it. Second of all...the things you learn and the instincts you pick up by writing stories like this can become a part of your longer stories and series as well. It can be a hidden gem of sensual surprise that you add to some of your more involved stories and bring a big smile to your readers when they least expected it. Always a good thing! Alright, take your armor off. Let the shame seep back in. ::Giggles:: Or don’t. It’s up to you! Hasn’t seeped in for me for YEARS now! I LOVE sex!!! Mmmmm! I’m gonna go write some more about it right now! Seezya soon! Enjoy!

He's soooo beautiful! Absolutely lovely! Sexy, fun to be around, witty and intelligent, awesome sense of humor, common interests...seems almost too good to be true, doesn't he? But here he is. An angel in the flesh. Someone you can love and trust and truly be yourself around. And yet...when it comes to make things 'official' and promise him forever...you hesitate. Why? It doesn't have to be marriage or anything, but have you ever wondered if maybe you were moving too forward, too fast? Like you might want to wait a bit longer? Is it a fear of commitment? Are you worried that you might be rejected or left heartbroken? Maybe you're worrying that you still have some life left to live before you settle down? I mean, if you promise your heart to somebody...you've got to be sure, right? No long vacations, no visits from an ex boyfriend or someone you thought was out of your league, no chasing after your dream career and finding that you're unable to do that and maintain a healthy relationship at the same time. Taking a shot at forever is a big leap of faith. Are you up to the task? Have you ever tried it and been right? Tried it and been wrong? And how do you know when it's time to put up or shut up? What are your thoughts on this? Feel free to give us your two cents and let us know!

The holiday is coming our way soon, so we might as well have ourselves a spooky good time! Enjoy! We've got eleven days to go! As for this short flick...hahaha! i mean...but WHY though??? Bad ideas! Sigh, and he was so cute too. Ah well!

Ummmm...to be totally honest with you, dude...I wouldn't even do the 'little brother' thing. I'm not saying that you have to kick him out of your life completely, but the 'little brother' role? There's still affection there. You know what I mean? It's like you're still leaving the door open just in case. Don't do that. Close it. You already know where this leads, and you'll only be making it easier to fall back into old habits the second he gives you a smile and a wink. So don't let your heart take the wheel on this one, k? I've been in the same position myself before, and I only ended up getting taken advantage of, over and over again, while constantly looking for some kind of sign that something might still happen between us. It's not worth it to learn this lesson the hard way. Trust me, k?

LMAO!!! Yeah, you cant retire Fury! We need him in a major way for what comes next!

What is the point of a bank charging you a service fee...taking it out of your account...and then sending me an email to say "Your account is overdrawn"? Yeah...no shit. YOU are the ones who stole the fucking money! Hellooooo? Life is beautiful, but people suck. Business sucks. So sick of struggling. Honestly. If I was running for political office or something, I could have six figures in the bank tomorrow morning. But it doesn't pay to have a heart and just...want to help people. You know? And these people get MILLIONS in a week. I just want gas money and gummy worms. Sometimes I just have to question 'life', you know? I do more for free than most people do for a much bigger paycheck than I can ever hope to make on my own. There's gotta be a middle ground somewhere between the two. Because I'm not selling my soul for money. That's not why I started writing these stories, and I'm never going to guide them in that direction. Not ever. You have my word on that. Just....ugh.... I'll be back to post more when I can. K? Love you lots.

Well...that's a tough one... I'm sorry to hear about it, but I'm going to be totally honest here. No offense or disrespect, but...I think that this is a situation where you really need to figure out what this relationship really is. And I hate to say it that way...but is this guy sharing the kind of feelings for you that you are with him? I mean, he found another partner without your knowledge? They're ok with 'sharing', but...what does that mean, exactly? And you think this other guy isn't good for C? But he's still with him? The whole anxiety, manic depressive, thing...let's take that out of the equation. That's not your responsibility. If you want to help and be a good friend, then awesome. But it's not your fault, and you shouldn't feel obligated to do anything other than encourage him to get help with that. It's not a part of your relationship. Age isn't a factor either if you guys connect on a deeper level as consenting adults. That's not something that you should be made to worry about or ashamed of. I'd LOVE to have a college boy share a bed with me! LOL! But...and you may not want to hear this, as few people would...you have to ask yourself whether the people you care about most are taking advantage of your heart and using it to manipulate you. It hurts to hear...but there are a lot of people who will. What is he getting from you? Why does he need someone else? When does he seem the most affectionate? When he needs something? These are questions that you need to ask yourself. And be honest with the answers. Even when it hurts. Dude, there are other guys out there who will give you their whole heart and love you, and you exclusively, no matter what. And many of them will be hot college twinks who are searching for the kind of love that you're willing to give them. Just...ask yourself the right questions. K? And don't let anyone drain you of the love and loyalty you have to offer without giving it back to you. best of luck.

Sighhhh... ::Melts::

I LOVED the first season so much! I have to admit to feeling really selfish when I thought we weren't going to get a season 2! Hehehe! I mean, more power to Elliot Page for being openly trans...but I wanted my second season dammit! But, he is an actor and a good one! So it looks like we get to see what happens after all! Sweet! Can't wait! Science, magic, and religion...all in the form of a live action comic book??? You've got my attention! Bring on season two!

When I was much younger, I was extremely shy. Like...to a fault. And I hated every minute of it. I had a lot of secrets that didn't help. By the time I was able to hide the trouble and abuse that I was going through at home...I figured out that I liked boys. By the time I had dealt with that...I realized that I had an attraction for younger boys as well as adults. There was always something to be self conscious about and afraid of. But...I couldn't stand not having a voice! It drove me crazy. But I was so used to taking care of all of my problems on my own that it was difficult for me to have to depend on other people to hear me, validate me, etc. That was completely out of my control, and it worried me. Sometimes it would really depress me. As far as school or work or being around family, I was able to get by because having a sense of humor helped me to connect to other people and keep it from being such a frightening experience. And once I was able to laugh at myself...things really began to turn around. I do a lot of really stupid, goofy, things...and it's just plain funny. Because it's like, "Yeah, I'm an idiot. So what? Who are you?" I'd feel ridiculous pretending that I was completely sane. Hehehe, it's like trying not to laugh the second someone tells you not to laugh. Even if there's nothing funny going on, you start laughing anyway. You know? There are a lot of regrets that I have from allowing the fear and anxiety win in my past. I wish things could have been different, and my shyness deprived me of a lot of the experiences that I wish I had pursued when I was younger. But what turned me around in terms of being quiet and shy was this guy, Ed, that I worked with. Soooooo cute! And the place was just opening up, so nobody knew anybody else at the time. And I really wanted to talk to him, but didn't want to make it look like I was trying to talk to him specifically. So, I'd quietly mumble a hello whenever I saw him...and pretty much run away. LOL! And then, to cover my tracks, I started to say hello to everybody else too so it didn't look like I was just talking to him. The thing is, after about a week or so...those other people started to say hello to me too. Which surprised me, but...cool. Next thing you know, I was talking to everybody and they were talking back, and it just felt good. Shortly after that, the Shack was built online and I started trading emails with people on a daily basis, and it builds confidence. You realize that everything that you once thought was so TERRIFYING doesn't even exist. Even when it comes to rejection. I figure the worst thing that anybody could possibly do is 'leave me alone'. Which sounds like a hell of a deal to me. Hehehe! Oh no...someone who doesn't like me takes the opportunity to 'go away'? How will I ever live with myself? Anyway, shyness can be a real problem for a lot of people, but I now understand that it's like that for everybody. Nobody wants to feel awkward or uncomfortable, no one wants to be rejected, nobody wants their heartbroken...but if I have to chose between taking that chance and getting hurt or feeling imprisoned and unable to make myself seen and heard by the rest of the world? I'd rather risk the hurt. It won't kill me. It just sucks for a while.

"GFD: Children Of Sunset 16" Waking up that next morning...the daylight just about blinded me as it came blazing through a small tear in my shade. I hadn’t really slept so much as I fought to slow down with the constant tossing and turning the pain in my belly had bouncing around inside of it. Not so much like a knot or a deep wound...but this empty ache that refused to turn loose the heartache I was feeling. Keeping me from forgetting the night before. Pretty as he was...there was a

https://gayauthors.org/story/comicality/gfd-children-of-sunset/ A brand new chapter of "GFD: Children Of Sunset" is now up and ready to go! I hope you guys like it, and will take a moment to let me know when you think whenever you get a chance! Have fun! And I'll seezya soon!