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    Chapter 28

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    Maybe, or maybe it will be taken out of his hands. We will have to wait and see Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 27

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    Silas is stubborn, independent, and scared. He thinks he should be left alone. His friends and family don't agree. Toby will make sure he follows the rules to keep safe, or of course, Oliver may get involved Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.2

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    Thanks, moggy. I'm glad you like it so far. I'm happy the kits are sounding good to people, I hope it stays that way. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.2

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    If I had to guess I would say Kitryn is confused and seeing as he was hurt, he may be tired and not himself. I'm sure Simon will be able to set him straight (so to speak ) Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.2

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 2.2

    Thank you, Gary. Hopefully, I should have time soon to start posting two chapters a week. One being a bit longer. But, I make no promises. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.2

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 2.2

    Thank you. I am trying to keep the children as realistic as possible. Both in speech nad behavior. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.2

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    Thank you, LadyDe I hope you continue to like the story as it unfolds. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.2

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    I'm glad you like my MCs so far. I'm sure they'll each annoy us before the end, though Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Thank you, Lisa. I'm so glad you enjoy my tale. A lot of people found it sad that his mother had to forget him. But, I thought, in the long run, it would be safer for both of them, and kinder to her. She'll live on in his memory. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Simon slowly stretched. Boy, that was a funny dream he’d had. A cat that could turn into a human? Yeah, right. But, damn the human had been sexy. With all that smooth chocolate skin. And those piercing eyes? Mmmm, Simon could’ve just drowned in those eyes. They were like— “I know you’re awake you know.” The amused voice had Simon bolting upright and slapping a hand to his head as it started to immediately spin. He then transferred his hand to cover his mouth as his last meal threatened
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    It's hard to leave people behind, especially as Simon knows his mom won't even remember him, and he won't be able to write/call/email, or anything. But, I am looking forward to seeing what adventures they tell me about later Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    I've had a few ideas for Vance. Maybe Earth sends people to bring back the deserters/traitors, and Vance has to help defend his new home? Or maybe he goes on a research trip and meets his match? I haven't decided yet. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment
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    Chapter 15

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    Ah, the aliens have better technology and wanted to get away at their highest speed. But, I will look at the timings and see if it can be made a bit more believable. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 14

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    That is the idea. I have actually expanded this slightly and added more detail to Vincent and his family. I may add it here eventually, I just want to add some more first. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 13

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    Ah, yes, big though Vincent says hello to the floor I just had to add that in Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 12

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    Plus Dillon has been ill. I think Lor and the others will be there soon, but if it will be soon enough? Well Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 11

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Vincent became one of my favorite characters. He acts like everyone's friend. Until someone crosses him and hurts someone he loves. Plus, the Major really didn't think things through when he sent magical aliens to human cells Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 10

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 10

    He may have thought if he could get the aliens to leave he could be there to console his friend. After all the idea that Dillon would permanently mate one of the aliens? I doubt it even occurred to him. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 9

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Harry is a bit of a mystery. If I had to guess I would have said he wanted Dillon for himself and was just waiting to be noticed, but I may be wrong. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 8

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Ah, Lor learned his lesson and didn't want to make another mistake like in the locker room. Of course, there are consequences, and there are unknown consequences Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Chapter 2.1

    Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 2.1

    Thanks, Garry Yep, Simon is going to get a crash course in real/not real as soon as he wakes up. Thanks for the comments
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    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the idea and the story. I may revisit these three again. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Thanks, jp. When it comes to fearing the unknown I always think of a quote from Men in Black. I'm sorry about the name, but I've never heard the name Alex Jones before so I don't know who you mean . I just needed a name that sounded like Alice to take advantage of the song, and then I just used a generic last name as I thought he would have wanted to blend in--it was that or Smith. I'm glad you liked it though Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    Thanks, Def, I'm so glad the drag queen idea seems to have worked so well. I think as sad as it was, Simon's mom forgetting him and Alex was better than her worrying or being interrogated by the government as they looked for the boys. New adventures are swirling around in my mind and I'll try my best to fit them in soon as I can. Thanks for taking the time to comment
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    I got this idea from a song and from watching a drag queen that visited my hometown for our first Pride event last year. She was hilarious and so good with the crowd, be they kids or adults. I am so glad you enjoyed it Thanks for taking the time to comment
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