islandboy

This is a great story. I just couldn't stop reading it. The story was imaginative and so well written! Congratulations on the really fine editing. I'm really looking forward to more stories in this same world to solve some of the intriging "loose ends". Well done -- and thank you so much!

I am in awe! Your writing is so good. --Wonderful imagination and really fine style, too. This was a very nice variation on the shifter story genre. It would be great if you continued with this story. There are so many details to follow up on (in another book?). I really like how you develop your characters. They seem to have real depth. I also like the way you create challenging situations in your stories and then your characters solve them. I have enjoyed your long works and your short ones , too. Thank you so much.