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  1. Hlasota

    Chapter 52

    There is lawyers' saying: 'never ask a question if you don't know the answer'. It seems the Trustees weren't prepared for Adam.
  2. Hlasota

    Chapter 51

    My thoughts exactly.
  3. Hlasota

    Chapter 49

    Hmm, art of teaching. What an interesting concept.
  4. Hlasota

    Chapter 48

    So, another pile of sh... ahead. Go Adam.
  5. Hlasota

    Chapter 47

    Ok, that was unexpected. Some authors have such an active and twisted imagination. What's next?
  6. Hlasota

    Chapter 47

    That was really fast. Thank you. Now to read this chapter.
  7. Hlasota

    Chapter 46

    I'm going to make some tea in the meantime.
  8. Hlasota

    Chapter 46

    Yeah, yeah I know. 'Patience is a virtue' and all that ...
  9. Hlasota

    Chapter 46

    Sometimes living on the other side of the world is a plus. I'm waiting for next chapter too.
  10. Hlasota

    Chapter 46

    What a splendid but unexpected twist.
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    Chapter 45

    There is one plus in reading story that is finished: All of the chapters are ready to be read... Of course, there is a saying that good things come to those who wait...
  12. Hlasota

    Chapter 45

    Great chapter. I'm waiting for next installment.
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    Chapter 50

    Great chapter. JJ and Carullo, I was thinking about that pair. Your plot is so much more interesting then my imagination.
  14. Hlasota

    Chapter 48

    Darius and Will at the Bellona's party. Wow, what a twisted idea
  15. Hlasota

    Chapter 41

    Great chapter. Now, back to spin-offs, till next chapter
  16. Hlasota

    Chapter 2 - Seb

    VHS, very horny Seb ? we will see...
  17. Hlasota

    Chapter 40

    ok. f5 isn't working, so patience is my second name (till next chapter... )
  18. Hlasota

    Chapter 40

    now I'm up to date with this fine story, so there is the 'charm' of everyday life now - waiting for next chapter... and pressing f5 on keyboard ...
  19. Hlasota

    Chapter twenty-six

    Fugly, almost like Mowgli from The Jungle Book... Good chapter.
  20. both are great. But... cliffhangers are bad, very bad, where 'instant society' is concerned (unfortunately I am a member of that ..., we want everything right here, right now). Puns are usual 'consumed' at once (or a little bit later if they are more sophisticated)
  21. werwy good chapter, and I don't know how you did it, there is no cliffhanger.
  22. Packed chapter with 3s: sex, scandals and secrets
  23. Hlasota

    Walls

    it will be posted next week
  24. Wow. What a chapter. And all that 'finger snap, finger snap' is stuck in my head.
  25. Hlasota

    Chapter twenty-two

    The best chapter so far imho.
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