Nice, but sometimes explaining or translating foreign traditions is a bit too much. A explanation as a prologue or epilogue could have done the job (just a tip for the sequel to this otherwise excellent story). Please continue the romance of the two boys in a follow-up!
leuk verhaal, een vervolg zou nog leuker zijn!
Something wrong with de lay-out.
the story is currently very hard to read, for every full sentence, one needs to scroll sideways to the right.
over and over again.
Can you or admin fix this?