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This is finally getting to the good parts. I know it's gonna hit the fan, but I liked this chapter because for once they heroes got their way
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Can someone magically teleport me into the story so I can rip Brad's head off slowly, painfully? This chapter was so not right and now my suspicious brain hope Lyle isn't a wild card Brad has to keep Jason quiet.
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I'm glad to see that someone who is not under Brad's payroll is getting involved. Jason is finally getting it and when the shit hits the fan I hope that Chris, Trent and Lyle are not involved in the drug and abuse, I like them. I hope the next chapter can come soon. I following to make sure I get to see it.
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So far, so good. I see a lot where this is going, but you have done very well with setting everything up. The ^^ usage for Devyn's speech was not at all confusing to me, but thank you for clarifying it.
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Waking that morning was one of the best in recent memory. I woke when the sun hit my eyes and I saw a lady bug crawl over the leaf next to me. It got to the tip and then flew off. I watched it and rolled to keep my eyes on it. Then I saw something more beautiful and my breath caught in my throat. Zeke was looking at me with half lidded eyes and a gentle smile played about his lips. One arm was under my head as a pillow, the other draped across his broad chest. With the northern morning, we were
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OMG! This review made me so happy. I am healing and well and writing slowly.
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I've been writing here and there. I had a huge writer's block moment, and then I found out I had to have surgery, which is tomorrow. Hopefully I will be able to get some writing done once I realize I woke up alive and not dead.
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This seemed very fast paced and to the point, but also jumps right into the action. I have a hunch or two about this Master Luca, but I will see it pan out
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Sonomagi are more like sorcerers. They gain energy from noise as well as strength. The more sound, the faster he gets back his energy and the stronger his spells. Which is why, in the swamps, his spells were boosted up by the songs to the One God.
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They continued on their journey the next day. None had slept except for Shelby who lived by the ideal that lost sleep means lost guts in a fight. With the tower ringed by trolls and gods knew what else, someone had to be in fighting shape. All the others could think about was the princes were trapped in hell. No one could even guess what tortures they were being put through. No one saw them out, but a meal had been laid out for them, and while they ate, it was sparingly. They did take the rest
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I read the first words and I felt hurt. Then I read the rest and my mood swung back to happy land. Thanks for reading and book two has a few chapters out for you
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This would almost make a damn good last chapter, but I hope not. I want to see the wedding. Nicholas would KILL as a "bridesmaid"
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My mouth dropped when I read about the tattoo. I'm actually very against putting a name on you that isn't family or in memorium. This was just sweet though.
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Lost good...or lost bad? Cause I can get lost good in mythology and I wanted to give a HUGE amount of research in such a small amount of time.
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It was the night before the full moon and I was restless. I knew that any moment Amos could come out of the shadows and make my life hell. It was a constant dread, really. Yet...I was happy. Zeke lay on his stomach in just his underwear, a tight pair of boxer briefs with the words “Everything is AWESOME!” across the butt, and he was reading one of my favorite books. It was the quietest I had ever seen him unless he chuckled at some of the bad jokes in the book. On the sofa was Dylan, also in ju
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I do my best to tell some back story, but I hate when it feels like nothing BUT what has already been told. Also, this next chapter has been delayed due to weddings and not having internet out in the middle of nowhere. I hope to get it posted soon
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Thanks for the great review. This was one of my favorites to write, inspired by Robcub and his Timberpack Chronicles. I hope you enjoy book two as much
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Life was simple. I got up, worked on the farm, worked at the store, ate a few times when I could grab a bite, and slept. There was nothing stressful in my life and I loved it. Peace and simple living...I missed it. I made sure to call Mary Beth like I said I would and I called Zeke every night so I could make sure I went to bed in a good mood. He would natter on about anything and I would just listen and a few times let it lull me to sleep. I would wake up when he paused to breathe, about every
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Bad Krista! Sad endings are not supposed to stay sad. You're supposed to make us hate you and then magically repair it by bringing them back from the dead. Still, a good story
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I would never put Angus and Amos in the same room. They would plot and scheme and try to take over the world. Of course I could think of a few naughty thing they could be doing...lots of angry debauchery.
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I was up at dawn like I was used to and I saw Amos wasn't around. I joined Jessup at the morning chores while Zeke went off to his morning classes. Nothing at all was said about Amos, but I knew the only reason was because Jessup was not one to pry. I'm glad too because I could not stand the thought that I hadn't gotten away from him. Tommy pulled up about lunch time in a nice Hummer. Not one of those fake ones. Nope, this one was real. Actual metal. “Howdy all.” I was shirtless and chopping w
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Yes. Jon, Pat and Dylan are all in this book, with Dylan being more featured now. Homestead Pack is the name I gave Jon's newly formed one when he broke away from shit head...I mean Angus. You'll see more when chapter two comes out in a few days.
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Cele...please continue this. I really want to watch it all unfold. I really want to know if Alex keeps the scythe...so much want one of those.
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This Sisterhood makes me wonder what evil schemes your mind is plotting, Cele. And to use poor Yoshua like that...shameful. LOL.
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Cele...I like! This has caught my attention. Vampire House intrigue is always fun.
