A complex and exciting chapter, tim.
The Dave and Jae fight, the beginning of the battle for survival and then Dave getting hit. himself.
I knew there were going to be casualties, but never thought Dave was going to be so wounded -- plus, did I mention the fight between Jae and Dave -- that was unexpected too.
OK - whew! On a more serious note, good luck to you!!
Thanks, AC!
Those are healing thoughts. I wrote this at the nadir of my emotional state, while curled in a chair. Things are slowly getting better for me but I didn't want to let the poem go to waste -- especially cuz y'know I'm usually not very emotional.
OK I better stop before I get struck dead by that lightning I was talking about. Thanks again.
Thanks so much, AC!
Thanks for the kind words and for all your support.
I think your points are right on target. I'm super tickled Toph drew you in so fast! When I wrote those fist few scenes, the story I had in mind was nothing close to the one that evolved. Toph was responsible for that, not me!
Thanks, again!
Thanks, Lisa!
And thanks so much for all your comments. Toph made you cry? I guess the proposal was sort of an emotional moment -- but we saw it coming, right?
Hmmm... Kory run Kory's? As interesting as that sounds, I don't think the timeframe makes it possible, unless David and Toph are somehow in parallel universes.
Anyway, thanks for following, and for your support!
Thanks, CG!
I guess Mother was the only real loser in this tale. Thanks for following Toph and leaving your excellent commentary along the way. You are greatly appreciated, friend!
Thanks, William!
Sorry for no thunderstorms; I guess I have a weakness for peaches and cream -- ask spikey.
Thanks for you comments and for following Toph. I appreciate it.
Thank, jess!
And thanks so much for all the support as you followed the frustrating Toph finally wise up! As for other characters lurking inside me brain -- watch out what you ask for!
Thanks, tim!
I don't know what it was about Toph, but you seemed to like him right off the bat. Maybe because he was a vulnerable rebel? Haha! Well anyway, I appreciated all your support along the way!