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Okay. I should not relish someone's torture but, oh how I enjoyed this. That said, his task, if completed, will certainly stir things up. I'll be interested to see. I also wonder if Renn isn't far to trusting of Wryyt.

There's so much in this chapter. Melgy is one tough woman. I wouldn't want to be on her bad side. Danae is accepting that Darren is who she wants to be with in spite of he aunt's trepidation. The appearance of Randalos and Keah will hopefully give them a better chance against what's coming. I do hope that Aunt Anibella and Offus survive unharmed. Now to distract myself until next week 🤣

(Moans) Cliffhanger! I said before that I'm a little in love with Franz and this chapter just makes him more interesting . I actually had wondered if he had some sort of might since his vision in the mirror haunted him so. I had decided I was wrong and them the bomb dropped. Fun chapter and do i dare hope the next will go on with THIS story? I'm afraid to hope. 🤣

I was so hoping to see the end of Renn. It would serve him right for it to be unspectacular. He definitely has nine lives. Here's hoping he gets a nasty infection from the bite and dies horribly I'm enjoying Soek's story too.

I'm so proud of Bartos and I hope he gets to Josel in time. I really am enjoying seeing into his thoughts. Josel's mother wants to bond with him, have him serve her so she can be proud of him. Even as vile and evil as she is she wants him to love her. While I hope the thing she's birthing kills her, her desires towards Josel being her undoing would be very satisfying.

I'm quite in love with Franz! He is much smarter and more thoughtful than he gets credit for. That said, he's also a naive dreamer who can sabotage himself with his fierce heart. Pink got way more information from him than he did from her. She both annoys and intrigues.

Wow. I really love the way things are all connected. It's good to learn about Ade's past as well as his sister's. I wonder how the Temogams will respond to Isendar's request. I see a few surprises ahead for him.

Thanks for this! It helps me remember all the ties.

Zal's old friends and acquaintances are not doing him any good right now. Finding a Faceless is going to be a tough job. Hopefully he can turn Eistaf's plan into something usefull.

I love this chapter. Darren is such a good character. I'm so happy Danae is realizing his worth. Ahh cliffhangers!

I really enjoyed the chapter. Darren is a much deeper person than he gets credit for. I'm loving how you're writing Danae's softening towards him.

Great beginning. I'm excited to see the story continue.

Great chapter! Bartos saved the day. Now, he needs to learn to use the newly discovered type of might at will. Andreuz, as has been pointed out, is amazingly lucky. I can't wait to find out Otello's information. Next week feels long way off.

Wow! A terrifying reunion. I hope a miracle does happen

BONUS CHAPTER , YAY! And , wait to go Joel! Also, Dad finally grows a pair.