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I enjoyed this story a lot. The ending is sweet. We all need a happy ending right now. (Double entendre intended). This story was heavy enough to keep us invested and light enough to be a fun read. THANK YOU

Kudos to Jared for being the reasonable one. Also, Mark is pretty bad at reading the signs.

Poor Mark. It would have been too easy for him to say to Jared that he needed to talk to Sandro. And maybe not get drunk when you do.

And there it is. Mark finally worked out what we all knew. Admitting it will hopefully help him figure out what to do.

We forget the Franz is a teenager, with all the arrogance, ignorance and misjudging of their own importance. At various times you to want smack him,hug him and laugh at him in equal measure. I still don't think he's realized that his grand adventure is part of a deadly game. He's a complex, messy, and well written character. All that is to say, I love him 😋

It's often the case that people struggling with their own gayness make themselves act homophobic just to prove to themselves that they're not gay. At least Mark realizes what his did is about him and not Sandro

Mark seem more unhappy with Sandro being gay than anyone else is. He needs ti figure himself out

P.S. I love Zdain declaring, like a petulant child, that Ade fucked him twice.

Tac unsettled me from the start. He sees everyone as a pawn. He's a pre manipulator who wants to lead the republicans to victory so he can be in inpower. He reminds me of Robspierre. I don't believe for one minute he won't send Zdain and his brother to the front. He used the threat to ensure Elyssa did just as he wanted. . That accomplished so easily does notbode well for his promise

Ade ĥas the worst luck. I hope he survives but I'm not sure he will. It does seem like a lot have been taken out recently.

Wow! Wow! Wow! Go Bars! I'm literally shaking after reading this chapter. Bartos saved the day, even though had help. It's awesome to see him come into his own. Poor Josel will have so many questions. Good riddance oh his mother. I do hope Ivas is okay. He's been such big help to them. I hope you had a great holiday and thanks for this chapter.

Bartos is about to be tested by fire. I hope Ivar isn't setting him up Josel's dream is interesting. There is a subconscious realization that Zdain is his person. Jolanda showing up in it maybe signifies his old world chasing him. Certainly, he's afraid of her. Every interaction with his mother is terrifying and the birth of the "brother " is the most terrifying. Enjoy your holiday and I'll e waiting as patiently as I can for the next chapter.

This is a great chapter. They"re older and no longer the same people. They both feel the change in the dynamics of their relationship. Time changes everything. Sadly, I think Ade is right about not returning.

Okay. I should not relish someone's torture but, oh how I enjoyed this. That said, his task, if completed, will certainly stir things up. I'll be interested to see. I also wonder if Renn isn't far to trusting of Wryyt.

There's so much in this chapter. Melgy is one tough woman. I wouldn't want to be on her bad side. Danae is accepting that Darren is who she wants to be with in spite of he aunt's trepidation. The appearance of Randalos and Keah will hopefully give them a better chance against what's coming. I do hope that Aunt Anibella and Offus survive unharmed. Now to distract myself until next week 🤣