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No...no! There can't be only one more chapter One to confront Zane about the trust and what it actually means. And a final one for Zane's complete meltdown and Taggert and Ash to live happily ever after.

Great chapter! My question is why Owen didn't say (maybe Beth will later) - "did you ever once ask me what I wanted"

I'm a little surprised that Owen and Beth don't/didn't have an actual 'sit down' talk. I'm sure he could confide somewhat in her and get some good advice from someone who actually 'sees' him. Well there's still Friday!

My guess it that Taggert has some scars on his back...the reason for facing front - and then grabbing a shirt immediately upon leaving the shower room. Hope we can find out more. He has come up with good and succinct suggestions too - and got recognized for them.

I thought there was something familiar about a fight, bitch sister, Noah, a tree house and keeping away from a step father... I must have read it the first time around! (I hope the lost folks on the island make up soon too

I'm slightly surprised that Cianán didn't tell Declan a bit more about what he knew about the vial. And Declan knows there is something very unusual about Cianán.

FINALLY!!!

Hi - I kind of think part of a sequel, should have both Jack and Nick (and maybe mom) travel to Seattle to see Bev. She does deserve to see him more, esp if he's somewhat back to 'normal'. I don't remember if her age was mentionned, but if Jack is 15, his parents - late thirties...then she might be in her late 50s or early 60's; And with her drinking, might have her own health issues. Overall a great story! how many more chapters to this one?

Nifty should be up to date now! 😉 Guess they needed a little prompt!

Glad to see you haven't abandoned the story! I did have to go back and reread the last chapter. Garrett's skills have come in pretty handy! Thanks for posting - John

Oh man...I am so in love with this story! (as with the Onward Door ones I'm sure the crew of the Chregar will be alright. Maybe stasis as someone suggested. It's just a real shame that it looks like there's only 2 chapters left! (from another site) Held my interest all the way and with updates every day! Good thing I'm retired now...lol

This is so so sad.... I had only emailed Comicality a couple of times about stories, but followed his IMAGINE Magazine every month. The 'boys' and Jeff Fort are going to try to keep the zine going - but who could ever even attempt to finish his stories! https://imagine-magazine.org/ First, Mike Wengert, the AwesomeDude. https://www.awesomedude.org/ Fortunately, Rutabaga, Alien Son and Cole Parker have updated/kept it going. Next was Pee Jay at Tickie Stories - http://tickiestories.us/Main.htm - no backup or replacement there. Don't know exactly what happened here. I think Timmy at IMOFATS, has said that he does have a plan, if anything were to happen. Lets hope that 2024 gets better....John

the story says 'complete'! Is that true??

Hi - I really liked this story a lot....the mystery, the supernatural bent (even before the ending), the creepy professor, etc. It almost seemed a bit like the ending was rushed. Maybe we could have had another chapter. The professor should have had some sort of cumuppence. Winston 'might' have been saved from injury by the other beings. What happens next with all this knowledge? I would rather see a follow on with the boys as teens rather than men. Thanks for writing a great compelling story - John

Love this story (as well as most you write on many sites!) and am throwing my hat into the ring for at least a part 2. Also would like to see Harlan and Terry get a bit closer, emotionally. thanks!