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The Best A.I. Team ever
craftingmom commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in The Best A.I. Team ever
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Chapter 22 "GGAAHHAAASHHH!!!" The incoherent cry wrenched from my throat. All my anger, heartache, and misery that I'd spent years burying under calm, disciplined control... of trying to do what was right, even if it left me feeling wretched and inadequate... of praying it would end eventually... everything I'd held in, afraid to let show... came ripping out of me in one terribly liberating wail. I collapsed in on myself, fisting my hands against the couch, letting the gut-wrenching sobs b
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Thank you! While painful for Kye, he needed to know what had been happening to truly let go.
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Thank you! Kye is changing, letting go just a bit, but slowly--because he's still uncertain of just how safe he is. It's a bit of a back and forth for him right now. And yes, this talk was pivotal for Kye. Glad you liked it!
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Oh definitely. And the romance is coming!
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They definitely needed that talk to clear the air between them, before both of them can reconnect completely. And Kye does still know a little more than he realizes about Barrett...
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Oh, Ash will definitely not have any issues hurting Kye's father in some way...
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Thank you very much. Kye needed this break to happen after all he's kept buried.
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No, his father wouldn't know what the marquis used him for, but he also probably didn't care as long as he received the money, and you're right, Barrett wouldn't have let him go. Kye's scream will definitely cause a stir!
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so glad you liked it! Ash and Tareth both won't rest until they confront Barrett.
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Thank you! I know these last two chapters were long awaited, with wanting everyone to know exactly how much they had misjudged Kye. And yes, there's definitely still more to come out.
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Thank you! I know these last couple chapters were long awaited--especially for Liam and Sam to realize how wrong they'd been. Next chapter is Kye and Tareth's talk, so look out!
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Yes, things are starting to wrap up, but there is still more to go--Tareth and Kye's talk, a confrontation with Barrett, as well as Ash and Kye's relationship developing a bit more.
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There's still a few loose ends to wrap up--Barrett, for one, but Kye definitely wouldn't be content to just sit around, not after all the sitting at Barrett's he's done. Ash would make sure he knows how to read, and both Ash and Tareth will help him find new interests. There's probably about 5-6 more chapters at least, and I'm thinking maybe an epilogue from Ash's POV.
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Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it! Hope you like the rest.
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Yes, this is the start of Kye's 'unwinding' and letting go of the training instilled in him by Barrett. Ash has already started to break through that, but there's still more to go. Tareth and Kye have their big talk next chapter!
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I know everyone was waiting for the Count's arrival. Actually, I had originally written in earlier, but changed my mind. I think I works better here, after Ash has already accepted and cares for Kye. I didn't want it to seem like his mind changed after he found out from his brother what Kye had done. This way it just makes Ash love him even more. Kye'll find out exactly what room he's in soon! Glad you enjoyed this chapter!
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Chapter 21 Hope. Had I just admitted that I thought maybe my life could be different? Not just drudging through each day waiting to see what pain my master might inflict, or what punishment might be awaiting me? Hope that maybe someone might care what happened to me. Hope that I was more than just Barrett's old whore, the amorato he'd tried to kill. "I think there's a lot more I need to know." Rowland finally broke the silence, pinning Liam, his steward, and apparently, his lover with
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Chapter 20 Ohhhh, Gods... I could hear myself moaning aloud, but I didn't care. I sank into the steaming bath, immersing my achy body into the heat. It was almost too hot, but I didn't care. I needed this. Hell, maybe I actually deserved it. I froze for a moment, unsure of where that thought had come from. Gods, could Ash be right? Maybe I wasn't completely worthless. I had helped last night, hadn't I? Just a little bit... "... I know last evening and this morning has been hard
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Ga's Newest Promising Author: Albertnothlit
craftingmom commented on A.J.'s blog entry in Gay Authors Archive
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Thank you so very much. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Ash does have his work cut out for him!
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Yes, I know it was a long time coming! We still have Rowland coming around soon, as well as Tareth and Kye's talk... so more to go. And, you're right, the protectiveness is kicking into high gear.
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Thank you! I know it was a long time in coming. Kye and Tareth will be having their talk soon--so Reth will find out just how bad Kye had it, and Kye will find out about their parents.
