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Falling Apart

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Control. Discipline. Be Strong. Be Good. My mantra. I can do it. I have done it for years now. I need to do it, it's my job. But damn if those two intriguing lords have me faltering, willing to disobey my Master to help them.

This story is set in an alternative historical earth, something like the Renaissance time. Kye is a young man who is has agreed to a service contract with Lord Barrett for the sake of his parents.  He didn't know what that service contract would entail.  This is told from Kye's POV. 

Warning:  This story contains dubious consent and abuse and violence (hey, it's one of MY stories, what do you expect?).  Please do not read if any of this bothers you. That being said:  enjoy the ride!

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Parker Owens

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Falling Apart is a fantastic yarn set in an absorbing alternate reality. Here, a boy named Kye discovers his own strength, his true worth, and the courage to change his destiny. It is a gripping and beautifully told tale. 

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Caz Pedroso

  

I fell in love with Kye very early on in this story. Here was a young man who was trying to do his best and everyone around him was either abusing him or thought he was a pampered pet.

Then to make matters worse he is rescued only to be judged by his rescuers as well.

Slowly the real story comes out and Lord Ash gets to know the real Kye. It’s not long before Ash falls for Kye and they begin to work at a relationship.

Of course, things never go easy. Cue Kye’s dad to try and mess things up for Kye…Again!

I won’t spoil the ending, all I will say is I have read this story so many times can probably repeat a lot of it off by heart.

A great read :) 

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