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yes, there are 27 chapters total, so very close!
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Very interesting start. Can't wait to read more about how the Cana and Gabriel get along.
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Chapter 24 As he flung the door open, Jason noticed Devyn curled in the window seat like he'd done so many times before, and he had an momentary sense of relief. Devyn appeared to be peacefully sleeping, head and knees leaning against the window, arm draped across his lap. But Jason's heart jumped into his throat as he noticed that the boy's arm was actually laying palm up in his lap, his shirt soaked in crimson, and blood was streaking down to his elbow and dripping to a small puddle on th
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I loved it! I liked how the beginning was very light and funny--it reminded me of the way my ADHD daughter's brain works: 'ooh, squirrel!'. Glory was just so all over the place, and I kept laughing out loud. Of course, then Valentine shows up and it all goes down hill, again. It was a good contrast to the beginning where he was bouncing from each of his 'selves' to how he felt when there was just the human. Poor Glory. And I felt so sorry for Felix and Rover! But at least Rover got someone to love--it was sad in the first story how he was sort of left with no one. Great job! You mentioned a third one; is it posted yet? I didn't notice it in the story list--unless I missed it.
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I have to say, I love this review. It was very emotional for me the way you noticed and commented on the juxtaposition of the two scenes. Thank you for your wonderful comments and insight.
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I know it's an emotional read. Sometimes those are my favorites--where I get wrung through the emotional wringer, which is probably why I like writing that kind of thing. Glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! Now, for what's behind the door...
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Yes, at this point you know that Devyn didn't use the knife on Brad--or didn't get the chance yet. So what's behind the door? It's coming up soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Thank you very much! BTW, I love your emoticons! They are so cute!
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Thanks! It's coming up shortly!
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hehe, seems like everyone feels that way. I know it was just a little mean.
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I know, that was mean, hehe. At least you know you don't have to wait long! The chapter will be coming up shortly!
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hehe... seems like everyone is!
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It was definitely a gamble. In the spur of the moment, he made the mistake of following Devyn's panic and sort of logic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Thank you so very much! I am considering publishing the Neko story. And right now I'm using some of the writing prompts to help get me back into the 'neko universe' so I can get back into that mindset to write the sequel. I hope you enjoy the rest only a few chapters left!
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I know, that was mean, hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it so far. Thanks so much for the reviews!!!
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Thank you!Sorry the follow thing isn't working yet--that's weird. I would definitely contact her. Good luck.
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OMG! I loved it! It was so funny and emotional at the same time! Glory had me so confused sometimes with his changing emotions, from sensual to angry to crying.... It's no wonder that Rover and Sar were sometimes so confused by his reactions, when each of his different 'selfs' kept vying to assert themselves. The first chapter, with all the vivid imagery, sucked me right in and I just had to keep reading all night! Can't wait to read the next story! I love your writing and I just can't read them fast enough!
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Hehe, glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review.
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Yes, reviewers have had many interesting fates for Brad! It does take Jason a while to really 'get it', but he will. The whole story takes place over about a week and a half--so while it seems that it takes Jason forever to figure things out, it's not really that long, especially when you think of how long Devyn has been suffering under Brad. It takes Jason a bit to get the idea that his friend could be such a horrible person because, really, do any of us want to believe someone we know could be that bad? I know it's a hard, emotional read. (If you feel it's too hard to read, I can send you a synopsis of each of the next chapters, so you know how it goes without reading about Devyn's torment). Thanks so much for the reviews!
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Next chapter has Jason going back to the house... so things are definitely happening now. Thanks for the review as always!
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Hehe, glad you are enjoying! Thanks for reviewing!
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Hehe! Of course the next couple chapters are going to be pretty intense! Thanks for the review!
