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Yeah, I should probably add something in about Asher's family having just moved to where he lives now XDThanks for catching that! PS. When I replied to your last review, I wrote 'EIdridge', not 'Personal Name'. I guess it got censored, but in the story I made the 'L' into an 'I' to get around it. I couldn't put in the last reply, because for some reason I can't edit or reply again.
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I woke at seven, as usual, and went for a run outside. I took my camera, and I got a few pictures of granite outcroppings in the early sun. I was back home at seven thirty, and I had a shower and then breakfast. I took the guest ATV and drove over to Asher’s, arriving right at eight. He walked out to meet me, grinning. He was wearing black shorts that made his ass look really good and a tight t-shirt that emphasized his muscles. I could already tell that today would be sexually frustrating. I dr
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Lol I wrote 'Personal Name' but apparently that gets edited out. I guess I'll have to rewrite that part without the last names, or maybe just change it to something else (since Hastings seemed to get through OK). Thanks for pointing it out XD you're like my unofficial editor!
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I woke in the morning, and went straight to the sauna, not worrying about clothes. I lay down on my stomach on the wooden bench, enjoying the heat against my front. Soon, my muscles weren’t sore anymore, and I got out, walking back to my room. I put on some clothes, and went upstairs, where I found Tommy drinking coffee. “Good morning,” I said, and he nodded. “How do you get electricity out here?” I asked. Tommy grinned. “We’re completely off the grid,” he said. “It’s all run off solar panels
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I woke up early, like always, and worked out for half an hour before running for half an hour and having a shower. When I came out of the shower, everyone was at the table eating breakfast. “Good morning,” I said, grinning in excitement. Tommy grinned back, and my parents waved, smiling. I ate quickly, finishing at the same time as they did, and my parents started to fuss over what I’d packed, making sure I had everything. I reminded them multiple times that I was only going to be half an hour
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The licence was supposed to be a G1 but I forgot to clarify lol. I'll fix that soon (probably tomorrow). The half hour drive was a bit of a plot hole, but I couldn't see how to fix it without breaking the plot line later on in the story. Thanks for reading it and giving feedback, and I hope you enjoyed it! I have 51000 words written for this story so far, so I'll be updating it as frequently as possible without spamming the recent uploads feed.
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The licence was supposed to be a G1 but I forgot to clarify lol. I'll fix that soon (probably tomorrow). The half hour drive was a bit of a plot hole, but I couldn't see how to fix it without breaking the plot line later on in the story. Thanks for reading it and giving feedback, and I hope you enjoyed it! I have 51000 words written for this story so far, so I'll be updating it as frequently as possible without spamming the recent uploads feed.
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I picked up my ringing phone, looked at it, and saw it was my school alarm. I had it set to go on weekdays, and today was a Wednesday. I grinned as I realized I could turn that alarm off now, but the damage was done. I was far too excited to go back to sleep, but it was six thirty in the morning, and everybody else would sleep in until eight. I got out of bed, being quiet, and started to work out. I worked out for half an hour, and then went for a run. I came back, and saw it was now seven thirt
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I handed my essay in, quickly checking it over again before dropping it on the teacher’s desk. I was confident that it was good, but I was nervous about being one of the first to finish. One person had finished and left already, but he had been an idiot who had no chance of passing anyway. I’ve always been a fast worker, but my English teacher was a stickler for details and I didn’t want to give her any excuse to lower my mark. It looked OK, so I dropped it on her desk and turned towards the doo
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Ben is a smart guy, who's just completing grade ten when his millionaire uncle shows up for his birthday and takes Ben to his secluded cottage in Muskoka, Ontario, for the summer. Ben makes a new best friend, falls in love, and learns what happens when all your dreams come true.
