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Thanks! I want it to be perfect before I post, though, because this is as much publishing as it's ever going to get (I might release an ebook, but it would just be a homemade thing that's only available on here. I'd never want to make anyone pay money for any of my stories lol). I'll try to keep the chapters coming fast, but the one I'm currently writing is a whopper XD. I'll hopefully be able to post it today, but I can't promise anything XD
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Thanks! It's reviews like this one that make me want to get off the internet and get back to writing XDYeah, Martha and Bernie turned out way better than I'd expected when I first started this story They're going to play a slightly bigger role, partly because I like them, and partly because I'm trying to improve how I write supporting characters. I don't really like how all the other characters are only in the story when it's convenient, so A&B won't be getting too long of a honeymoon before reality catches up XD
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Yeah XD it surprises me how many people freak about what other people do with their genitals lol. At least all you have to do to learn someone's opinion now is check their facebook or wait until 'Same Love' by Macklemore comes on the radio and comment on it XDIt's good to hear you're liking it, and thanks for all your reviews!
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I know I absolutely love that picture lol it just captures them so well!I don't want to spoil the story for you, but I will say it's all revealed next chapter XD (plus there's more Fiona lol) I've been thinking since you mentioned Tommy's availability, and I'm liking the idea of Tommy finding somebody more and more XD I'm still not decided, so this isn't a spoiler, but he'll definitely be playing a bigger part in the story from here on either way (I like him more the more I write). I just wanted to let you know because you were the one that got me onto the topic XD Thanks!
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Awesome XD! I've been missing your reviews Thanks! I had to fight to keep them from turning pages pretty rapidly lol. For a while, it seemed like I couldn't write anything without turning it into a sex scene XD I'm looking forward to what you think of the rest of it!
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I woke when Asher’s breathing changed, and I saw him watching me. He gave me a smile and a kiss before leaving for a shower. I got up and followed after a minute, grabbing clothes for both of us from the closet. I brushed my teeth while he showered, and soon he was out. He’d only put on boxers, and I didn’t hide that I was admiring his sexy body. He blushed cutely, but he seemed flattered. I stepped into the shower when he started putting on the rest of his clothes, and I showered quickly before
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I like this story already! I'll definitely be following to see where it goes . One thing, though, was that Sawyer said "Do you parlez vous français?" which would literally translate as "do you speak you french" XD "Do you parlez français" might make more sense. Other than that, your story was flawless and I love it
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I never planned for this to be any kind of ending, but when I wrote it I realized that was what it felt like lol. I couldn't let it end there, though XD I have so much more planned for A&B (not all of it's good lol).All I'm going to say about the sequel is that it gets worse before it gets better (my writing, not A&B's situation) so please don't be scared off when it gets bad (I'm going to go back and fix that eventually) XD Thanks for all your reviews! They've been awesome to read
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Thanks! I'll try to post by tomorrow, I just really needed to fix up my writing (it got pretty shit towards the last few chapters i'd written). I have the next chapter almost ready, and I just want it fine tuned before posting. After that I'll be posting as fast as I can write lol. Thanks for all your reviews!
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Thanks for the awesome review! Very insightful, and well considered. As for the question of the main character's sanity, that's up to the reader for now XD! The dryad is real, but only in a world that exists solely in my head (for now). I've been planning a Greek mythology story, and if/when that's posted, this story will fit into that plot. I might write a few more short stories like this (part of the nonexistent story), but I don't know. Until that larger story is posted, this one's up to personal impression XDThanks again for reviewing! It was fun to read
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I woke up to Asher kissing my forehead, and I tilted my head to kiss him back. “I have to go to the dentist today,” he said sadly. “I’m getting my wisdom teeth pulled.” I kissed him again. “Want me to come?” I asked. He looked surprised, and as he thought about it more he looked happy. “Sure,” he said. “That sounds good.” I grinned, glad that I’d cheered him up, and we got dressed and canoed back to the cottage, where we immediately got onto the dirt bike and left for Martha and Ber
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I love this story already! It's captivating, and I like the little magic teasers XD. Please don't let it die off! I'm so curious about Taz and Tepid Blanket (I know that's not his name, but for some reason that's what I read it as XD) and their relationship. It's definitely the beginning of a great tale. I've been doing a lot of reading today (I'm procrastinating really badly lol) so I've used up all my likes, but I'll be back tomorrow for sure. Thanks for writing this awesome story!
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I woke up slowly, noticing that Asher’s soft breathing was louder than usual. I looked over, and found his lips right next to my ear. I realized that we’d moved closer together in our sleep, and we were now in a position we’d never have gotten into awake. I didn’t move, because it surprisingly wasn’t uncomfortable. Asher had rolled over in his sleep, throwing his leg over mine, and his head was resting on my chest. His left hand was on my shoulder, but his right hand had drifted down, and his sm
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I woke up, feeling something touching my lips, and I relaxed as I realized it was Asher. “I got to watch you go to sleep and wake you up,” Asher said, grinning. “Did you take sleeping pills?” I laughed. “I was tired,” I said. “We did go three days’ worth of travel in one day.” Asher grinned. “I was tired too,” he said, “But at least I woke up at eight.” I looked around, confused, for a clock. “What time is it?” I asked. “Nine thirty,” he told me, laughing at the look on my face. “Wow,” I s
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Thanks for all the awesome reviews on this story XD. Fiona's one of my favorite characters too, and just today I was working on bringing her more into the story. I want the supporting characters to play a bigger part in it, but I'm trying to keep it in mind that the story's about A&B's private world. lol trying to keep a balance is harder than I expected.I can't wait to see what you think of A&B's relationship!
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I woke up to a change in Asher’s breathing, and he looked amazed. “How do you always do that?” he asked. “What?” I asked, my mind still bleary from sleep. “You always know when I’m awake, and you wake up whenever I do,” he accused. “I’ve only ever seen you sleeping twice.” I laughed. “Sorry,” I said. “I just listen to your breathing. It helps me sleep, and I guess when it changes it wakes me up.” “Fine,” Asher said, grinning. “I’ll just stay up later so I can see you sleeping, then.” I gri
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Morning found us lying together, closer than when we’d gone to sleep. Asher had rolled over, and I’d shifted sideways, so he was now pressed against my side. I looked over at him, smiling as I listened to his breath as he slept. I kissed him gently on the lips, and his eyes opened wide. “Wake up, sleeping beauty,” I said, grinning. He seemed to remember last night, and he grinned back. “I’ve wanted to do that for so long now,” I told him. He leaned forward and kissed me, until he suddenly bu
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Ben and Asher continue their perfect summer. The (much longer) sequel to "The Island's Secret".
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Thanks! I was worried about that lol I don't think I'm allowed to create a series until the second book is out, though. It's good to hear you liked it! Thanks for all the likes XD
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Thanks! I was worried about that lol I don't think I'm allowed to create a series until the second book is out, though. It's good to hear you liked it! Thanks for all the likes XD
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Thanks! I was worried about that lol I don't think I'm allowed to create a series until the second book is out, though. It's good to hear you liked it!
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Thanks for all your reviews! I hope you enjoy the next part as much!
