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Very good read... my only problem being there are only 2 chapters.

her her!

yep, I'm creeping up there.

half?! I didn't know he was in the thousonds yet! dang myr! you need to stop talking to yourself.

right you know the only reason I read this topic is cuse the title said SEX right? I don't know but to me plot comes easy, even when I start out with nothing (like the Tale of Two Rings) and didn't even plan on having a plot, it jumped out of the story and bit me on the arse. Sex to me is hard to right, maybe cuse it's filled with lots of verbs and adjitives that I don't even know how to user properly let alone spell, common my highest grade in creative writting was a 70. I mean my papers came back with more red marks on them then they had story in the first place. Do people wanna read sex? yes will they admit that? some will most won't. Will they tell you that it could be better with less sex? yes, but did they like it with the sex? yes. I dunno I guese it would depend on the charicter develpment at the time of the story weather sex should take place or not, and if your not good at writing sex, cut to the next seen. however if you have skills like Myr if you cut to the next seen when i think you should have writen the sex seen you will be hearing from me!

heh

well... the first to notic

flaims, I get a few, I find them amusing. I got one, once hade a lot of foul langwage in it, rufly it was along the lines of how dear you palute my childs mind with your filthy writting! and degrade the works of estableshed writers like Rowling by posting this filth! I sent him a copy of my disclaimer on top of all my stories and my webpage. it was amusing how apoliject he became. like I said I find them amusing.

welcome, I'll be honst, I haven't read your work. I'll put that on my todo list.

well I always knew I lost my mind in the gutter somewhere... If err any of you find it could you please return it?

I'v listend to a few of them, sadly I have to say I like most of Metallica work over the others, there is just something about it. perticuly Unforgiven... But then it could just be me. though I have listed to the other and I do like it Metallica where as it might be a newbie still stands formost in my mind.

turntable? antiqated just a little. I like mood music myself when righting and depends on what mood I am trying to invoke int he stroy as to what peace I play, If I place a song with lirics I like the lirics to go someplace, a lot of modern music is just repeditive, so I listen to old rock known as clasical rock, and the OLD heavy mettle by the old time hair bands. Don't Matalica have a new albem out or something? I will have to check into that.

wonder what your thinking heh

For the Love of Music Summery: A obsessed boy finally takes his obsession too far and must live with the consequences. Link: http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1026994 Code: tt Author: Corey Doncaster Bio: I'm a twenty three year old college student from Portland Oregon on the outside, but in the inside I self identify as a twelve year old boy. My main interests in life besides writing are Harry Potter and Yu-Gi-Oh and playing with my legos. It is my goal in life to become recognized as a young adult fiction writer specializing in novels directed towards Queer youth. I am currently working on a novel about two teenage boys who fall in love and I am also trying to compile an anthology of stories and poems all written by young queers. Hopefully I'll get these published one of these days. Winter: Yea This really says a LOT about my mental state and what I read.

heh. interesting don't even cover it.

Happy B day! sorry it is takeing me so long to get your webpage up 100% but with the comming week I got busy! I intend for it to be up by wins if not sooner so keep your eyes out for that!

all you can do is send a email to him and cross your fingers and hope someone prefribly the person takeing over the copyrites gets it.

no problem, glade I could help

and your ron is so not better then my draco !

you have to find a host that let you link exsturnliy then upload it, or you can email it to me, you have my email address I think, and I will put it up on the net sometime tomarow when I wake up and PM you with the link.

vulnerable, most definitly. I dunno, but I will share a little with you from my .hack quest... I will have to tell you a little about that some time I guess this would also be a good time to share a link http://guru.theotaku.com/bfriend/bfriend.shtml really, one simple search on google can turn into a three day adventer, you never know what you might find! with all that rambleing did I answer the question?

heh, my Draco is glareing at your Ron

erm, you have to put it on a webserver that let you link off server, say like geraldle.com you then place the url in a img tag inside your sig, thats what you want no? ^ as above ^ [img=http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/uploads/av-109.jpg]

... might not want to offer that help I think I already ran off one person who was helping me with that. but then I am just learning

indeed, I will keep my eyes out for that one.