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~*Jared*~ Harry had passed out and didn't seem to be in the mood to wake up as Darwin disappeared into the sunny day outside the university. Jared would have run after him, but since he had caught Harry and couldn't just drop him now, he didn't have any choice but to tend to his new charge. What to do with an unconscious werewolf in the middle of a hallway full of people? Jared looked down at the bundle in his arms and sniffed thoughtfully. Normally he would have been worried about the po
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Your writing is very vivid and captivating. Nothing to chew on or stumble over, a smooth and catchy read so far. Great job!
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Yeah, Jared's kind of an ass, isn't he? But he's just a kid at the moment, he'll grow up soon enough. Cherish hating him!
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The expected 'unexpected' end is what makes this great. It leaves me frustrated and happy at the same time, a feeling I'm not used to with reading. It's a new experience, and that's what reading is all about, I guess... Well done!
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I don't trust that Poundstone dude. He sounds iffy.
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Good boy! And agreed on the meme, that was effing cruel to keep us dangling this long
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I'm so glad to see you stuck to that series, and of course giddy to read the second book! So far I'm again captured by your inviting and easy to follow style of storytelling. It simply draws the reader in!
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Thank you very much I've already finished another chapter that isn't on lit and surprisingly my writing spree is ongoing, so there's a pretty good chance I won't have to disappoint this time!
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Thank you! I'll try to keep it up
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~*Darwin*~ It had been a strenuous weekend. Darwin loved his job and he loved nature, but hiking and at the same time managing sizable groups of tourists was demanding work and always left him totally exhausted. Even though he lived on campus, he always went to have dinner with his father on Sunday evenings. It was the only evening he could somehow fit into his father's rigid schedule, and the risk of chancing upon one of the pack meetings was lowest. The one story house sat on a hill at th
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I like this story very much! It's very interesting how close you are staying to reality with the possible damages to modern technologies, and I definitely like how you stick to "day zero" with your story. It's the most interesting phase of an apocalypse if you ask me. I'd still suggest you go over the use of tenses again, because there are some confusing jumps from past to present to past to past perfect in both dialogue and story.
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Better late than never - Hi, I'm here! Watch in astonishment as the world's slowest writer settles down here.
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I'm sorry :'( I'm working on the last chapter right now, I'm 7.000 words in, so there actually is a good chance it'll be finished soon, maximum this year. I'm giving my best to atone for my sins.
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~* Jared *~ Jared was tired. His eyelids drooped every few seconds and he had to blink and roll his eyeballs to re-wet them and stay awake. The west wing of Statsby Hall lay before him, promising a bed, a bath, and most important of all: peace of mind. Damn that twenty-two hour drive! Maybe Jared should have stopped somewhere along the way, but he hadn't wanted to waste even a second in his quest to get as far away from his family as possible. Ever since his application to Banes Ce
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When Jared meets Darwin at his new university, he instantly feels a connection he has never felt before. This being something a werewolf looks for his whole life, Jared decides to win the defensive Darwin over - even if it means going up against those who want to harm his heart-throb, and against Darwin himself.
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