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Peterson! may have had strong feelings for his old boss, and may have discussed with Tyrell about the move, he is also jealous of any one getting ahead in the work place, thinking that Chad had a lot to do with Tyrell and Peterson getting transferred to different stores, and not the reason that Tyrell was a real jerk. Peterson other issue would be seniority problems and may be self conscious. Loving Kendra wish she was my mother.
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Another awesome chapter, Rich boys gifts bought from catalogs a big miss, a poor boys gift from the heart the biggest hit when given with love. Com. keep them coming.
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Excellent Com. I love reading your stories love conquers all. I know you have many stories here and your other place of posting my most favorite is the whole Gone from Darkness series . every one should read every thing that you have posted. I read about 16 to 18 of your stories on the other site, but I skipped a few because there biggies but will read them later. some are here as well. I wrote the extra here because I want the others to know you have a great gift for writing.
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Awesome I love the suspense and danger
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Excellent! still loving the story< I love cliffhangers I find they entice me to keep reading. keep up the great work.
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Like it? Na I love it!! it is so amazing!! you have a natural gift for writing.
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Awesome, crying many tears, it really touch my heart, been through the same but never planed to kill myself. my boy friend is strong enough for the both of us.
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Great chapter
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Awesome start. I have no Idea why I kept delaying reading your story.
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Great poem!! It is about some thing I hate with a passion
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Prompt 312 - Bacon - How I Knew
Ray169 commented on A.J.'s story chapter in Prompt 312 - Bacon - How I Knew
Davis is a great cook and a perfect partner for Matthew!! -
Prompt 312 - Bacon - The One Meat
Ray169 commented on A.J.'s story chapter in Prompt 312 - Bacon - The One Meat
Sizzling -
Prompt 312 - Bacon - One Wish
Ray169 commented on A.J.'s story chapter in Prompt 312 - Bacon - One Wish
Very hot!! -
Prompt 274 - Is that honestly what you think of me?
Ray169 commented on A.J.'s story chapter in Prompt 274 - Is that honestly what you think of me?
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Excellent, strange, fun, Justin is way cool, Awesome Opera, hope they make it back safely.
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Excellent could there possible be a Mr. & Mrs. fixit down the line? they could be a perfect couple.
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Awesome story, I am being brief here I need to read more.
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Excellent start, moving on to find out what happens next.
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All I can say is WOW!!
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Excellent!! will continue to read, the Mystery man sounds like a PSY, with his behavior
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This is a AWESOME Love story Christmas style with a Mr. Clause instead of Mrs. Clause for Nick. Love it Love it. and already planning for a family (a son).
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Awesome story!! what I understood about Anthony he is a combination of a writer, producer, director which tells me because he is Matthew's Boyfriend, and living together he knew Mattie's talent, and knew Mathew was the only person who could play the part. your story was tearing me apart and brought me to tears because of the possible breakup of the couple. I was relieved that they sat down together and talked it out, and worked it out so the break up never happened, when Matthew read the scrip he realized the work was about his life, I believe that what the hidden past problem may have been drugs use or alcohol abuse. please write more and longer stories. I rated you with 5 stars you deserved them.
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Excellent like the author
