Oh, the goddess definitely feels it. Let's see...chapter 14's all about unexpected visitors, 15's hilarity to me...we won't get to her side of things for a little while, but quite a few things happen before then.
The fact that they're all in one place, and that Eli's color was finally set into place, helps keep him in check with Nolan (not to mention the fact that he witnessed his abuse firsthand). I'm proud of the little guy, ha ha.
*dying* I think I really DID suggest something close to Eli's Erotic Adventures, but @Rambling Robin suggested the more reasonable "Crossing the Moon" since our boys (and a few others) are certainly making the moon goddess QUITE cross with them.
This is one of my most favorite collaborated stories (that I haven't partaken in. I seriously take no credit in this one, it's all Maddam Redder and @Rambling Robin !!! they're a great combo, too!) of all time. I feel that I must warn you guys and gals out there that the angst levels on this are pretty high! It's still flippin' amazing, though! I highly, highly, recommend it!