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Chapter 2- Intros and Madhal
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 2- Intros and Madhal
You're amazing for this! It's hard to improve if you don't know what parts are good and what parts are shaky. Thank you so much. -
When this story was first taking form, the first thing I envisioned was Sindri walking around in the desert after being chosen to rule. Then, Ansar happened, the rest was history.
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Chapter 11- Restraints and Reactions
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 11- Restraints and Reactions
I'm very honored that you think so. This story is definitely one of my lightest when it comes to the lack of angst and drama, but I'm glad that the characters still keep the story fun and entertaining enough to read. -
He's in total denial. It's quite amusing to me, as is their date. I'm overcome with this strange urge to want to chuckle darkly.
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I'm glad I'm not the only one that felt frazzled about uploading things the wrong way, ha ha. Many thanks for pointing out the spacing on the editor! There was just his fear of "is this wall of text going to come out this scrunched up?" I will definitely try it on the next upload. I'm also open to any and all advice, never fear! Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
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Kathryn is just very observant, and she will point out what she saw more adamantly on Monday when he goes back to work. He will buy him a present, but I can't tell you what it is. Next chapter will show it, though.
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Dagnabbit...forgot to note that calling anyone a "hoot:" is referenced directly from RamblingRobin, who calls others "hoots" when they amuse her. Much love, Robin dear. <3
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As I walked into the building from the parking garage, it really began to sink in. Liam’s teasing hadn’t all been for fun, it was his way of building up to asking me out. Lux had somehow gotten me to promise him five dates in a month. My morning routine felt a bit off. I arrived so early that there was hardly anyone walking around. I had the elevator to myself, which was a rarity. As the elevator shaft rose to the fourth floor, I completely spaced out. When the elevator doors opened, I was
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Solare Sindri leaned over the ellipse-shaped table in the middle of the council room. He was busily going over a large, digital map with markers showing the census of the tribes of each segment. “We have plenty of room on the planet for an entire kingdom full of Pure dragons. However, we can’t very well have them standing around unprotected during the tremors.” He thought out loud. “If we could have half of the tribes share their living spaces with the other half, then we could house the same am
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When Kelius came to, the first thing he felt was the soreness of his neck. He hissed as he lifted his head, only to realize that his body was held upright into a strange harness with his back against the wall. His elbows were clasped in place, as were his ankles. Kelius tried to jostle himself free, but nothing truly budged. "You can only be released from the outside." The copper dragon turned his head so fast that his neck protested. "Ow! Son of a..." However, though he tried to get a g
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Indeed, indeed. The question is: why is Seth so defensive?
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I couldn't be more relieved and happy that the texts flowed well enough to follow. I was worried about that. Liam has just seen from a distance what being in Seth's 'inner circle' of people can be like and he liked what he saw. He's also a bit tenacious and was brought up to never give up on anything. Can't wait to see him break through Seth's prickly, spiky guard.
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This was great! Don't know how I came across it, but I'm glad I did. I think I laughed the most at this part: 'The scariest part was that we’d have to tell our children and that had me scared shitless.' - I kept thinking no, no. At your age, you have every right to do whatever you want with whomever you want, you've earned it. They both have great kids. I enjoyed the twist at the end, as well. Not going to go into detail about it so I don't spoil it for anyone who hasn't read it. But, it was all a very nice distraction from a stressful work day.
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“Did you have anything to do with this?” I questioned Kathryn on the way back to my office as I all but shoved the number on my palm in front of her face. “I neither confirm nor deny that I had anything to do with it...directly.” She replied airily. I let out a sharp breath of air through my nose. But, once I sat back down at my desk, I stared at the numbers on my palm. Without giving it much thought, I reached for one of my business cards and jotted the number down on the back of it.
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Many thanks for reading and commenting! I hope that you continue to enjoy it until the end.
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That was unintentional, as this was meant to be a one shot for the prompt. But, we'll definitely find out more about these guys as we go along!
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Glad you're enjoying it so far!
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We'll just ignore that one since it's only missing a letter and can be figured out for the most part (not as glaringly incorrect as the others). Which reminds me, about the 'why doesn't he get the pants custom tailored?' It would take a few days to a full week to have them made. The shopping part was actually on Wednesday (the day directly following the ripping incident), in which he didn't want to have a repeat happening on the remaining Thursday and Friday. Whew, I really need to learn how to add more details to my writing. Thanks for always expressing your thoughts even in comments, I feel I improve every time we discuss something!
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Whoops! I didn't even spellcheck this one. So, for 'hangars' being the only thing you caught, I think I did ok spelling wise! And I must have scifi/planes in my head for them to have come out as hangars instead, ha ha. I'm glad it got you to laugh, though! Totally worth it.
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Prompt 510 Do you really think he did it?
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 510 Do you really think he did it?
Super relieved that the group merely passed them by instead of starting anything. -
No Prompt: Third Date Part II
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in No Prompt: Third Date Part II
“Partly, but also because I think we both need to cool down a bit. I never knew ice cream could be such a hot dessert.” - Ha ha ha! -
Prompt 504 You’re giving me a headache!
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 504 You’re giving me a headache!
“Hey, even straight guys look according to Rob. He said Carolyn is one lucky woman, who is probably the envy of a few high school jocks as well as girls.” “He said what?!” The mixture of outrage and pride in Jasper’s voice had us both collapsing in helpless laughter. - LMAO! -
Prompt 500 What took you so long? (I)
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 500 What took you so long? (I)
“Awesome! I knew it. What took you so long to decide?” "What's taking you so long to ask Trevor to Prom?!" - I love their sibling banter. It's bound not to change well into adulthood, I'm sure. -
“You even had them dry cleaned? You needn’t have gone so far, Seth.” “Consider it another way of saying ‘thanks’.” ::: I shook my head as I recalled the reaction of my co-worker, Liam Lux, when I handed him back his leather pants the day after the ‘ripping’ incident. In spite of the pants, the meeting had gone along well. With my new position came better pay, so I decided that I should buy several sets of work pants that wouldn’t rip upon bending down to pick anything up. Th
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Jasper stood in front of them, and there was no mistaking the slight blush bringing color back into Tobias’ face. It came as he glanced up at the almost-naked body of the frowning redhead. - Oh-ho! What's this? Rob deliberately stripped completely before he faced him. “Look, dude, you’ve showered with us plenty of times before. Don’t act any different, or that idiot will win. Whether you’re straight, gay or bi, it doesn’t matter. You’re part of the team and you belong here. Anyone who has a problem with that can go fuck themselves.” - Oh damn Rob...your naked body would make anyone faint just a little, straight or not. I mean, a straight guy would wonder if they'd ever develop a body like that, I'm sure.
