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No prompt: Date Day part II
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in No prompt: Date Day part II
“Way to go man, you sure don’t waste time! I’ve never known Nelson to be so oblivious to his surroundings. I must have stood there for at least ten seconds without you noticing.” - Ten seconds, huh? Did you like the view, Jazz? Hee hee. He was standing behind me looking at the screen, and suddenly I felt his fingers run through my hair below the nape of my neck. I got completely distracted and my explanations petered out, but I managed to keep the game going on the screen. - Wow, I just had a crazy flashback of when one of my boyfriends used to do that to me. Distracted me to no end, too, not that I ever told him as much. Felt too nice. He tangled his fingers in my hair at the nape of my neck, pulled me towards him and kissed me. I got hard so fast it hurt and I whimpered into his mouth. - LMAO! Get 'im, Eric! We hung up and I turned to find Eric standing in the doorway to my room, watching me. I automatically smoothed my hair back and his gaze followed the motion. Oops, note to self, my boyfriend might have a bit of a hair fetish. I like the idea. And going back to what we were doing was tempting, very tempting. But one of my dad’s warnings from last night intruded. “Whatever you do, don't force the moment. Being a gentleman means you won't take advantage of Eric – that is, if you really care about him, you won't. Get it, son?” Damn, and in any case our parents would never trust us again, if we played around on our first date. Time for a distraction. - That whole segment made me giddy. Hit me in the hots, the funnies, and the warm fuzzies all at once. So glad that Nelson's putting in the effort to take it slow for Eric. So proud of him right now. I got up to cut us each a huge piece of the delicious chocolate cake, which Eric’s mom had sent with him, and I finally brought up the subject that was on my mind. - That infamous cake is sure making the rounds! I got up to cut us each a huge piece of the delicious chocolate cake, which Eric’s mom had sent with him, and I finally brought up the subject that was on my mind. - Oh gosh, Nelson just keeps making me laugh. I just love his stray thoughts. And I knew I’d be unable to hide how much I liked you, if I spent too much time with you. Fuck, I might have ended up begging for your … ehm, never mind! - Dying, dying of laughter! -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
“Look, Nelson, dress as if you’re going to school, but choose some sexy underwear just in case.” Whoa, my best friend was getting bolder when it came to discussing guy-on-guy intimacy. - HA HA HA, wow Jasper...are you sure you and ROB shouldn't be the REAL besties here? You guys are so on the same wavelength. I also like how both sets of parents gave their sons little talks, ha ha. It's tough to raise teenagers. -
Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (II)
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (II)
“Don’t tell me you haven’t thought about Nelson going down on you. When I was your age, sex was on my mind pretty much all the time.” - Maybe Eric's just on a different channel when it comes to the gutter, ha ha. Maybe it's all subonscious and manifests in his dreams, ever thought of that, Rob? Eric finally found the right answer, “Seems it still is, you horn dog. Why this sudden interest in my sex life, Rob? Is Melanie refusing to put out? Or is there another reason?” Was there a slight hesitation before Rob laughed and shook his head? Eric wasn’t sure, and anyway, just then is when they arrived at Nelson’s house. His brother slapped his shoulder. - Uh-oh! Wonder what happened there...everything alright, Rob? -
Prompt 332 Try it again, and I will kill you!
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 332 Try it again, and I will kill you!
“How can you say that to your awesome brother, who managed to set you up with the cutest guy in West Hill High?” - I laughed so hard at this. “Nelson, is he the junior who is in your drama club?” Eric nodded again and wanted to curse his mom’s excellent memory, together with Rob’s big mouth. - Ha ha ha! See? Mothers know everything! “Eric Alexander Perry, there is absolutely no way my fifteen-year-old son is staying the night with his boyfriend who’s two years older, and whom we haven’t even met!” - Ha ha ha! She even knows what Nelson would try to do! -
Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (I)
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (I)
Rob released his younger sibling, only to slap his shoulder and tousle his hair. Rob wore a huge grin on his face, as he bounced on the bed like a five-year-old. - Rob's such a kindhearted brother, wanting Eric to just be happy. I like how supportive he and their parents are. And, of course, mothers know everything. -
Prompt 179 Well that sure didn’t go as I had hoped.
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 179 Well that sure didn’t go as I had hoped.
I let my eyes slide up to his face during my speech, and the look in his deep blue eyes nearly undid me. Eric always seemed aloof and controlled, but now the hunger and determination on his face was unmistakable. My knees started to shake, and I felt a blush creep into my cheeks. - Aww, he likes him so much! Eric's such a brave boy, well done. I’d timed my story-telling to Jasper perfectly. I didn’t stop but ran directly into my boyfriend’s arms, crying “Help, help. Protect me!” before succumbing to laughter. - Ha ha ha! So sneaky, Nelson. This was such a warm and fuzzy chapter, I loved it. -
Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
There is no way I’m going on my first date with Eric with you and Carolyn and his friends watching. - HA! I like how Rob and Jasper think alike. "Let's double date, come on!" I’ll let Rob know you’re interested, but Eric needs to make the first move. - Little do they know that Eric's already in that type of mind frame! Hee hee. -
Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (I)
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (I)
And even the biggest bullies are scared of him, since he wiped the floor with that Clayton guy. - Woo! Go Nelson. Of course, Maria had to say, “Talking about a cute junior named Nelson.” Rob grinned at his brother, and Eric had no chance to stop him. “Awesome. Did you ask him out yet?” - LMAO! Gotta love siblings. I'm enjoying this story way too much, ha ha. -
Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
“Keep Melanie out of this, please. You’re trying to distract me, Eric, but not this time. I want you to come out so you can have a chance of dating the guy you like. I want you to be happy.” - It's what siblings do! “YES!” Rob’s shout of glee was followed by an oomph from Eric as his brother tackled him on the bed. “I’m proud of you, bro! And I can’t wait for me and Melanie to double date with you and Nelson.” - I think we're all as enthusiastic as Rob is at this point, ha ha! -
Ha ha ha! I might continue this as a chaptered story if anyone's interested enough. And pokeballs are red and white balls that players use to catch Pokemon in handheld and cellphone games. Seth's undies looked like this- http://thumbs.ebaystatic.com/images/m/mQ1NS717CPnMGkbJPKzWkkQ/s-l225.jpg
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Pokeballs are the red and white balls that players use to catch Pokemon in handheld and cellphone games. The underwear looked similar to this- http://thumbs.ebaystatic.com/images/m/mQ1NS717CPnMGkbJPKzWkkQ/s-l225.jpg
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Our staff meeting generally landed on the first Tuesday of every month. Any kind of rescheduling resulted in making the receptionist feel as if she had to juggle balls as she attempted to rope every department head in on the same day, a nearly impossible task. I, Seth Slater, was the assistant to one of the department heads. The best one, if you asked my opinion. The woman was wise, humorous, and rarely judged others. She was also so laid back that the some of the employees secretly referre
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Prompt 470 (posted by CIA) An organized but self-conscious assistant, Seth, finds his life upended by the retirement of his boss and the persistent flirtation of his charming co-worker/rival, Liam. As a series of awkward and humorous encounters draws them closer, Seth must confront old wounds and learn to trust again. M/M, COMPLETE
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Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
“So, not only are you in love for the first time, but you also have to work up the courage to ask Eric out. No wonder you are scared!” “I’m not scared!” - LMAO! I just love reading about best friends and/or siblings in stories. No one else can get away with teasing the heck outta ya than a sibling or bestie. -
Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Thirdly commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
*flips work desk* I need to stop reading things at work, get too sucked into them and want to keep reading more. -
Story Review Featured Story: Prophylaxis
Thirdly commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Will you be OK with occasionally tearing your hair out, shouting ‘NoNoNo’ at the main character, and swearing at the author ? - OMG, yes! Ha ha ha! That's so me yelling at the screen. The worst villain I’ve met on GA. - Oh-ho-ho...you haven't read MaddamRedder's work I see. She writes quite a few villains that'll frustrate you through and through. But, I know who you're talking about in Prophy and I wish him ill, too. I agree that it is an excellent read, you're sucked in from the very first 'mission/assignment' and you end up eating it all up in one sitting and regretting it when you've finally caught up to the current chapter. Then you have to beg and plead for Robin to write more despite her super busy life and very limited free time. -
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...we're back where we started! Granted, with loads more information and more insight about the two and more precious and funny moments...but, I still wanna read more!!! *pouts*
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Noooooooo I wanted to read more. I hope the second story I saw is a continuation or spin off of this one! They're so cute, I was overwhelmed with the urge to want to be THEIR subconscious voices and urge them BOTH to get together, ha ha ha.
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But her question also indicated the plant wasn’t a company let’s-brighten-up-the-workplace deal, which I’d almost managed to convince myself. - Ha ha ha! NOPE. Better stop telling yourself that. my main reason for moving to Seattle stems from problems relating to a failed workplace romance. I have no intentions of repeating my mistake - Uh-oh. That doesn't sound good. After five o’clock, Solomon would lie on the floor in front of the chair or on the seat. One minute before I entered the door, he jumped up and perched on the seat. - So precious. Sol would spend his evenings and nights with whichever kids needed him the most. How he worked that out, I never knew. - Cats are just intuitive like that. I gained the trust of several teens, gay and straight, enough to hear a terrible amount of heart-breaking stories. - That's both the best and worst parts about volunteering for your community's kids. The kids get some things of their chest, but you personally end up praying hard for them and hoping that you encouraged them enough to keep moving forward. “You can forget about that, at least until I’m back in shape.” Shit, I was truly desperate if I started talking to my cock. But I guess we both wanted to fuck something other than my hand. - LMAO! I checked the short-term memory of them both, and found cat footage as you’d told me. There was a great close-up of Solomon sitting in his chair, I saved that and used it later for the carving. - That makes loads more sense. Way to go, Ken. His lips were as soft as I’d imagined and being kissed by him was my favorite gift so far. - Woo! Get 'im, Colin~ That was very, very cute, and quite clever! Well thought out. I loved it.
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I would love to read more about those two. And more about the different angel departments. as well. This was amazing.
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:: The Second Move :: Kender was so relieved once everything had been unloaded into the house. All that was left to do was the arduous task of unpacking. At least the furniture had been placed where he wanted it, for the most part. His little Renael had been roaming around exploring the new house and he was so afraid something would somehow squish the little boy. The kit in question had pulled out his favorite blanket from his box and was running around with it. Ken caught hi
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A group of young fox men's lives get tangled across two worlds—one modern, one magical—where friendships and unexpected connections change everything. As they deal with family drama, magical surprises, and their own identities, they discover what it really means to belong. With plenty of heart, fantasy twists, and real-life moments, it’s all about finding love, yourself, and a place to call home. [BL, slow burn?, warm and fuzzy feelings so hard that you might get cavities, kemonomimi (animal ears and tails).]
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Thank you so much for all of your insight. I felt that Kane's intense reactions to him wouldn't make any sense without a peek into the past (albeit that long one, but Nick was also the catalyst for his asthma attack, so I felt cornered on that particular segment [Would you believe me if I said it was condensed from a much longer version?]). I try not to spill out too much information at once. If I'm not mistaken, there aren't any more flashbacks for a good while from the next chapter onward. I didn't realize I shuffled too many of the flashbacks in succession in these first chapters, though. Feedback is very important to me. I can't figure out what works and what doesn't without it. You have my deepest gratitude. If you happen to stick around for the rest of this one, I'd love to hear your opinions throughout!
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After Gyro had finished his breakfast and spent some time with his family, he excused himself to hunt down his Godbrother. As he walked up the stairs, he was pleased to note that the stiffness in his recovering leg was diminishing more and more. He needed to be in decent shape in order to keep up with Kane on his cases, so it was a great relief that he was well on his way to getting there. Being a hindrance to his partner felt like quite the punishment to him. When the twenty-five year old ente
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Darifer was hanging from the ceiling again. The collar around his neck had three chains that led to piercings on his chest and a particular ring that his master had fastened to the base of his second head. Each of his wings had two sets of piercings running down their length, with black ribbons running down through the loops in an intricate manner. A clawed hand scratched the underside of the lavender astral dragon's tail and trailed along the soft scales with the sole purpose of stimulating
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