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Prompt 239 Just give me a minute, please.
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Now I'm wondering if Rob's going to end up with someone new soon. Hopefully. I know Jas is quite settled with Carolyn so I doubt that's going to go anywhere other than besties. -
Or you can go for a run with Eric, if he’s not too busy ‘reading’ with Nelson. - 'Reading' actually sounds like a great code word for them. -snickers- “Yeah, but the lovebirds are kinda boring when they gaze soulfully into each other’s eyes and ignore everything around them.” Rob batted his eyelashes like an imbecile. “Ooohhh,” Maria’s voice went all soft and squishy. “You should have seen them feeding each other; I expect cooing and other mating rituals next.” - Hee hee. Alright. Can't ignore sleep any further. I'll stop here for now. Thus far, I've loved it!
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“Well, how many dates are you going on, you know, before you seal the deal?” Rob asked with wide, innocent eyes. “What do you mean, how many dates…” Nelson began, before he suddenly turned bright red and stopped talking. “Hmm, Rob has a point, you know…” Jasper patted his shoulder. “I made sure to dress well for my dates with Carolyn, and I’m certain it helped. She commented on my excellent taste several times – including my CK briefs.” - Just about died laughing.
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Prompt 380 Sure, now you want me to make the decisions.
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“Interesting…” The word was a slow drawl. Eric nibbled at Nelson’s earlobe and pinched one of his nipples at the same time, making him yelp. “Now, will you please distract my nosy brother and your friend, while I take a look around.” - Ha, the little deviant. I approve, Eric. -
Prompt 318 I’ve wanted to do that since … forever.
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Both of them had apparently noticed the couple stopping and had been kind enough not to disturb them. But now they were fair game. - Love those two, ha ha. -
Prompt 396 When will I see you again?
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the analytical part of his brain informed him he stood a good chance of matching Rob in size in a few years’ time. - HA HA HA! Well, on the BRIGHT side... “Depending on how she wakes me of course.” “I know what you mean, Jazz.” Rob grinned. - The camaraderie is glorious. -
No prompt: A little private time
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Yep, that was pretty damn hot. Ah, youth...I remember those days. God, I was so much worse than these boys. As a girl, I could get by with so many more things with another girl. -
Prompt 291 Oh crap! Here we go again.
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I turned back to Eric who was still in the room. “I’ll text you when I get home. See you tomorrow, love.” With a wave, I left, having his delighted smile burned into my mind, but blushing at hearing Rob’s stage whisper. “Love?! He called you …“ Ooops, slip of my tongue. Anyway, I’m sure, Eric didn’t mind… - Best part EVER. Fuck it, I might not sleep tonight. I just can't stop reading. -
Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (II)
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“Or,” Rob made a dramatic pause, “I could take a little walk on the wild side. I’ve heard guys give the best blowjobs. Is that true, Nelson?” - I may have swooned just a little. Go, Rob, go for it! After a whole day of teasing, he knew that it would take very little for him to cream his pants. He needed to stop Eric, but it felt so good when the warm hand rubbed… “Holy shit, if that’s what you mean by ‘talking in private’ you’d better lock the door next time…” - I think I may have squealed in joy a bit too loudly. Rob's a hoot, and I love how fearless Eric is. -
Prompt 336 Oh God. This isn’t what it looks like!
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“Well, it turns out the baseball team has a few homophobes hiding in the closet, and my former girlfriend seems to agree with their opinions!” - Oh, my heart goes out to Rob. What a firm and kind young man he is to cut his ties from anyone thinking unsavory things about his kin! “Yep, I sure did. So now I’m grounded for the next month! Even though Dad thought the punch was justified, he wants to be able to say I've been dealt with if anyone calls to complain. ‘A symbolic punishment for resorting to violence’ he called it.” Rob rolled his eyes. - LMAO! I love his dad! Such a clever dad. -
Prompt 199 Here we go again!
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Yessss I loved seing the interraction with Rob and Jasper here. Double teaming the budding couple! -
No prompt: Date Day part II
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“Way to go man, you sure don’t waste time! I’ve never known Nelson to be so oblivious to his surroundings. I must have stood there for at least ten seconds without you noticing.” - Ten seconds, huh? Did you like the view, Jazz? Hee hee. He was standing behind me looking at the screen, and suddenly I felt his fingers run through my hair below the nape of my neck. I got completely distracted and my explanations petered out, but I managed to keep the game going on the screen. - Wow, I just had a crazy flashback of when one of my boyfriends used to do that to me. Distracted me to no end, too, not that I ever told him as much. Felt too nice. He tangled his fingers in my hair at the nape of my neck, pulled me towards him and kissed me. I got hard so fast it hurt and I whimpered into his mouth. - LMAO! Get 'im, Eric! We hung up and I turned to find Eric standing in the doorway to my room, watching me. I automatically smoothed my hair back and his gaze followed the motion. Oops, note to self, my boyfriend might have a bit of a hair fetish. I like the idea. And going back to what we were doing was tempting, very tempting. But one of my dad’s warnings from last night intruded. “Whatever you do, don't force the moment. Being a gentleman means you won't take advantage of Eric – that is, if you really care about him, you won't. Get it, son?” Damn, and in any case our parents would never trust us again, if we played around on our first date. Time for a distraction. - That whole segment made me giddy. Hit me in the hots, the funnies, and the warm fuzzies all at once. So glad that Nelson's putting in the effort to take it slow for Eric. So proud of him right now. I got up to cut us each a huge piece of the delicious chocolate cake, which Eric’s mom had sent with him, and I finally brought up the subject that was on my mind. - That infamous cake is sure making the rounds! I got up to cut us each a huge piece of the delicious chocolate cake, which Eric’s mom had sent with him, and I finally brought up the subject that was on my mind. - Oh gosh, Nelson just keeps making me laugh. I just love his stray thoughts. And I knew I’d be unable to hide how much I liked you, if I spent too much time with you. Fuck, I might have ended up begging for your … ehm, never mind! - Dying, dying of laughter! -
Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (I)
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“Look, Nelson, dress as if you’re going to school, but choose some sexy underwear just in case.” Whoa, my best friend was getting bolder when it came to discussing guy-on-guy intimacy. - HA HA HA, wow Jasper...are you sure you and ROB shouldn't be the REAL besties here? You guys are so on the same wavelength. I also like how both sets of parents gave their sons little talks, ha ha. It's tough to raise teenagers. -
Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (II)
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“Don’t tell me you haven’t thought about Nelson going down on you. When I was your age, sex was on my mind pretty much all the time.” - Maybe Eric's just on a different channel when it comes to the gutter, ha ha. Maybe it's all subonscious and manifests in his dreams, ever thought of that, Rob? Eric finally found the right answer, “Seems it still is, you horn dog. Why this sudden interest in my sex life, Rob? Is Melanie refusing to put out? Or is there another reason?” Was there a slight hesitation before Rob laughed and shook his head? Eric wasn’t sure, and anyway, just then is when they arrived at Nelson’s house. His brother slapped his shoulder. - Uh-oh! Wonder what happened there...everything alright, Rob? -
Prompt 332 Try it again, and I will kill you!
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“How can you say that to your awesome brother, who managed to set you up with the cutest guy in West Hill High?” - I laughed so hard at this. “Nelson, is he the junior who is in your drama club?” Eric nodded again and wanted to curse his mom’s excellent memory, together with Rob’s big mouth. - Ha ha ha! See? Mothers know everything! “Eric Alexander Perry, there is absolutely no way my fifteen-year-old son is staying the night with his boyfriend who’s two years older, and whom we haven’t even met!” - Ha ha ha! She even knows what Nelson would try to do! -
Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (I)
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Rob released his younger sibling, only to slap his shoulder and tousle his hair. Rob wore a huge grin on his face, as he bounced on the bed like a five-year-old. - Rob's such a kindhearted brother, wanting Eric to just be happy. I like how supportive he and their parents are. And, of course, mothers know everything. -
Prompt 179 Well that sure didn’t go as I had hoped.
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I let my eyes slide up to his face during my speech, and the look in his deep blue eyes nearly undid me. Eric always seemed aloof and controlled, but now the hunger and determination on his face was unmistakable. My knees started to shake, and I felt a blush creep into my cheeks. - Aww, he likes him so much! Eric's such a brave boy, well done. I’d timed my story-telling to Jasper perfectly. I didn’t stop but ran directly into my boyfriend’s arms, crying “Help, help. Protect me!” before succumbing to laughter. - Ha ha ha! So sneaky, Nelson. This was such a warm and fuzzy chapter, I loved it. -
Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
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There is no way I’m going on my first date with Eric with you and Carolyn and his friends watching. - HA! I like how Rob and Jasper think alike. "Let's double date, come on!" I’ll let Rob know you’re interested, but Eric needs to make the first move. - Little do they know that Eric's already in that type of mind frame! Hee hee. -
Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (I)
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And even the biggest bullies are scared of him, since he wiped the floor with that Clayton guy. - Woo! Go Nelson. Of course, Maria had to say, “Talking about a cute junior named Nelson.” Rob grinned at his brother, and Eric had no chance to stop him. “Awesome. Did you ask him out yet?” - LMAO! Gotta love siblings. I'm enjoying this story way too much, ha ha. -
Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
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“Keep Melanie out of this, please. You’re trying to distract me, Eric, but not this time. I want you to come out so you can have a chance of dating the guy you like. I want you to be happy.” - It's what siblings do! “YES!” Rob’s shout of glee was followed by an oomph from Eric as his brother tackled him on the bed. “I’m proud of you, bro! And I can’t wait for me and Melanie to double date with you and Nelson.” - I think we're all as enthusiastic as Rob is at this point, ha ha! -
Ha ha ha! I might continue this as a chaptered story if anyone's interested enough. And pokeballs are red and white balls that players use to catch Pokemon in handheld and cellphone games. Seth's undies looked like this- http://thumbs.ebaystatic.com/images/m/mQ1NS717CPnMGkbJPKzWkkQ/s-l225.jpg
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Pokeballs are the red and white balls that players use to catch Pokemon in handheld and cellphone games. The underwear looked similar to this- http://thumbs.ebaystatic.com/images/m/mQ1NS717CPnMGkbJPKzWkkQ/s-l225.jpg
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Our staff meeting generally landed on the first Tuesday of every month. Any kind of rescheduling resulted in making the receptionist feel as if she had to juggle balls as she attempted to rope every department head in on the same day, a nearly impossible task. I, Seth Slater, was the assistant to one of the department heads. The best one, if you asked my opinion. The woman was wise, humorous, and rarely judged others. She was also so laid back that the some of the employees secretly referre
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