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Glad to see you got back in the saddle again. The beginning was a bit confusing, after too long of a break between the original story it would have been nice to have a bit of a refresher at the start of this chapter. I really enjoyed this first chapter except the ending 🤧

Glad you back in the saddle. 😀

Thanks for a great story, I love this park and have camped there many times. You sure did justice to the beauty of it. I must have missed something some of the comments talk about missing Skinny did he pass away? Thanks

Good story, but like an other comment it did not touch on his return to his home town. Also it said in previous chapters that he was going back for his fire company training and now a twist that he is going to England????